Q&A (Hometown) Q&A Hometown Q&A

Q:After you graduate d Do you want to live in your hometown after you graduate? Q: Do you want to live in your hometown after you graduate?

This wording is a little better since it’s about a feeling that you already have, not that you will have after you graduate. This is less ambiguous.

Q: After you graduate, do you want to live in your hometown? Q: After you graduate, do you want to live in your hometown?

A: I don't want to live in my hometown. A: I don't want to live in my hometown.

Formatting

A: I don't want to live in my hometown. A: I don't want to live in my hometown.

The reasons are twofold. The reasons are twofold.

The reason are twofold.

You (generally) have to list ALL of your statements very shortly after having used the expression "[are, is] twofold". Example: The reasons are twofold, one is that I want to keep a distance from my parents and the other is a lack of employment opportunities. Example: The reasons are twofold. The first reason is that I want to keep a distance from my parents and the other is a lack of employment opportunity. This isn't a rule but the way you are using it in your journal, a structure like this fits better.

The reasons are twofold. The reasons are twofold.

One is thatFirst, I want to keep a distance from my parents. First, I want to keep a distance from my parents.

The original is fine spoken, but this seems better in writing.

One is that I want to keep a distance from my parents., I want to keep a distance from my parents,

One is that I want to keep a distance frombetween my parents and me. One is that I want to keep distance between my parents and me.

I don't want my parents to meddle in what I do. I don't want my parents to meddle in what I do.

I don't want my parentsthem to meddle in what I do. I don't want them to meddle in what I do.

I don't want my parents to meddle in what I do. I don't want my parents to meddle in what I do.

If I lived in my hometown, my parents would come to my house frequently and comments on what I do. If I lived in my hometown, my parents would come to my house frequently and comment on what I do.

“Would” is needed in this construction.

If I lived in my hometown, my parents would come to my house frequently and comments on what I do. If I lived in my hometown, my parents would come to my house frequently and comment on what I do.

If I lived in my hometown, my parents would come to my house frequently and comments on what I do. If I lived in my hometown, my parents would come to my house frequently and comment on what I do.

The other is for job opportunities. The other is for job opportunities.

Or “for work.”

The other is forAnother reason to leave my hometown is job.s, Another reason to leave my hometown is jobs,

The other is for a job. The other is for a job.

In my hometown, there were[are?] few jobs and most of them were low salary[are?] low-paying. In my hometown, there [are?] few jobs and most of them [are?] low-paying.

Or “have a low salary.” You seem to be discussing a current situation so you need to use the present tense here.

In my hometown, there wethey are few jobs and most of them weare low salary. they are few and most of them are low salary.

In my hometown, there weare few jobs and most of them werepay a low salary. In my hometown, there are few jobs and most of them pay a low salary.

To pay off my student loans, I [needed] to get a job with a slightly higher income. To pay off my student loans, I [needed] to get a job with a slightly higher income.

To pay off my student loans, I needed to get a job with a slightly higher income. To pay off my student loans, I need to get a job with a slightly higher income.

The answers so far have been in present tense so I corrected this sentence from past to present tense.

I [wanted] to leave my hometown because the salaries are higher in the city center. I [wanted] to leave my hometown because the salaries are higher in the city center.

I wanted to leave my hometown because the salaries are higher in the city centerbigger cities. I want to leave my hometown because the salaries are higher in the bigger cities.

A "city center" is a portion of a city, you have to specify which city the "city center" is in. A "city" is big and a "town" is small, so if you are moving from a small municipality to a larger one you can say it like this: I want to go to the city and leave my town because the salaries there are higher.

I wanted to leave my hometown because the salaries are higher in the city center. I want to leave my hometown because the salaries are higher in the city center.

I also corrected this sentence from past to present tense.