My boyfriend had the best green flag forom our first date. My boyfriend had the best green flag from our first date.

"From" would be better because it happened in the past. "For" makes it sound like the event hasn't happened yet.

When we began to speak together, I was in nNew-z Zealand for one month. When we began to speak together, I was in New Zealand for one month.

When we began to speak togeing to each other, I was in nNew-z Zealand for one month. When we began speaking to each other, I was in New Zealand for one month.

New Zealand has to be capitalized because it is a country, and typically when you are talking to another person that is a romantic interest you would say "to each other" because you are learning more about the other person.

When we began to speak togetheralking, I was in nNew-z Zealand for one month. When we began talking, I was in New Zealand for one month.

It sounds more natural to say "talking" than "to speak together." Also remember to capitalize names of places.

So, during all my trip, we spoke by messenger. So, during my trip, we spoke by messenger.

So, during all mymy whole trip, we spoke by mMessenger. So, during my whole trip, we spoke by Messenger.

Because "Messenger" is the name of something, it needs to be capitalized.

When I came back into France, he invited me ton his house. When I came back to France, he invited me to his house.

When I came back into France, he invited me ton his house. When I came back to France, he invited me to his house.

When I came back into France, he invited me ton his house. When I came back to France, he invited me to his house.

When I came back into France, he invited me ton his house. When I came back to France, he invited me to his house.

But, our houses were aton the opposite sides of France. But, our houses were on the opposite sides of France.

But,Except our houses were at theon opposite sides of France. Except our houses were on opposite sides of France.

Never start a sentence with "but". Also you should combine this sentence with the previous one.

But, our houses were at the opposite sideends of France. But our houses were at opposite ends of France.

The word "but" usually doesn't have a comma after it. Also the word "ends" is more fitting than "sides" here.

Some days after myI coame back, I had a job interview not far from him. Some days after I came back, I had a job interview not far from him.

SomeA few days after my come backreturn, I had a job interview not far from him. A few days after my return, I had a job interview not far from him.

SomeA few days after myI come back, I had a job interview not too far from him. A few days after I come back, I had a job interview not too far from him.

Some days after myI coame back, I had a job interview not far from him. Some days after I came back, I had a job interview not far from him.

So, bBefore the appointment, I decided to meet him. Before the appointment, I decided to meet him.

So, before the appointment, I decided to meet with him. So before the appointment, I decided to meet with him.

The phrase "to meet with" implies spending time together.

Take note : I never saw his face before. Take note: I never saw his face before.

Colons have a no space before and a space after.

We only spoke by messages. We only spoke by messages.

He had a costume that was a mix of Gandalf (Lord of the Ring) and Master Roshi (Dragon Ball Z), because I love this movie and he loves this manga. He had a costume that was a mix of Gandalf (Lord of the Ring) and Master Roshi (Dragon Ball Z) because I love this movie and he loves this manga.

Hhe had a costume that was a mix of Gandalf (Lord of the Ring) and Master Roshi (Dragon Ball Z), because I love thisat movie and he love thisat manga. he had a costume that was a mix of Gandalf (Lord of the Ring) and Master Roshi (Dragon Ball Z) because I love that movie and he love that manga.

To describe that :it, To describe it,

This part makes use of a comma, not a colon.

He had a fake bald head, black sunglasses, a big with beard and a nightdress. He had a fake bald head, black sunglasses, a big beard and a nightdress.

He had a fake bald head, black sunglasses, big witha beard and a nightdress. He had a fake bald head, black sunglasses, a beard and a nightdress.

Hhe had a fake bald head, black sunglasses, a big with beard and a nightdress. he had a fake bald head, black sunglasses, a big beard and a nightdress.

ItThe costume was really funny, but I still couldn't see his face. The costume was really funny, but I still couldn't see his face.

He decorated all piece of hishis whole appartement with some details of Lord of the Rings. He decorated his whole apartment with Lord of the Rings.

He decorated all piece of his aphis entire apartement with some details ofrom the Lord of the Ring. He decorated his entire apartment with details from the Lord of the Ring.

He decorated all pieceevery part of his appartement with some details of Lord of the Ring. He decorated every part of his appartment with some details of Lord of the Ring.

He decorated all piece of his appartement with some details of Lord of the Rings. He decorated all of his apartment with some details of Lord of the Rings.

Oh, Aand I forget to say something :. When I was in New- Zealand, I celebrated my birthday. Oh, and I forget to say something. When I was in New Zealand, I celebrated my birthday.

A period is used here, not a colon. There's no dash in the name "New Zealand."

ForOn thisat day, he sendt me a music composed by himself just for me. On that day, he sent me music composed by himself just for me.

For this my birthday, he sendt me a music he composed by himself just for me. For my birthday, he sent me music he composed just for me.

For this day, he sendt me a music composed by himself just for me. For this day, he sent me music composed by himself just for me.

"music" isn't a countable noun. Therefore, "a music" doesn't make sense.

For this day, he sendt me a music composed by himself just for me. For this day, he sent me music composed by himself just for me.

So, wWhen I arrived at home, the music started, he took off his glasses and his bald head and SUPRIIIISE : When I arrived home, the music started, he took off his glasses and his bald head and SUPRIIIISE :

So, when I arrived at home, the music started, and he took off his glasses and his bald head and SUPRIIIISE : So, when I arrived at home, the music started and he took off his glasses and his bald head and SUPRIIIISE :

He was really attractive (He still his). He was really attractive (He still is).

He was really attractive (Hand he still his). He was really attractive (and he still is).

And the cherry on top was homemade Llasagna and Ttiramisu. And the cherry on top was homemade lasagna and tiramisu.