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Kylian Mbappé

Kylian Mbappé is a famous French footballer player. I think he was born in 1998, the year the French Football team got its first star in the jersey (when they won the World Cup).
I wasn't born but it had to be amazing.
In 2018, he was only 19 years old and he won his first big title: the World Cup.
Back then, I was only 8 years old, but it was deffinitely the peak of life. I am so nostalgic of this moment because everything looked perfect.
Along the tournament, France evolved and became the best team of the World by their winning the final against Croatia by 4 2.
In the final, he scored 1 or 2 goals, and was decisive everywhere in the pitch and whenever during the game.
In 2022, we came back to the final, but it was way more difficult than 4 years ago. We loosed by 2 0 at the mid time of the game and until the 81 minute, nothing changed. But then, he score 2 goals in a row (in only 2 minutes) and all French people have started to believe they could win again. The game was thrilling until the end.
He scored another goal during the extra time, but it wasn't enough to win the final that day.
His performance must have been one of the strongest performances of all time. However, his sadness was as strong as his performance. And to add insult to injury, the behaviour of the Argentina's goalkeeper was terrible.
Last year, he changed club and went to Real Madrid, the strongest team in Football. The first year was really difficult, probably because the pressure and the time to adapt him to his environment, but he pushed through it and worked his fingers to the bone. During the 2025 summer, with 2 other French legends (Wembanyama et Marchand), he made the promess to mark the story. And it's exactly what he's currently doing. He's the first player who scored 13 goals in the group phase of Champions league, and in only 7 matches, which is the icing on the cake. I think he finaly found a team where he truly belongs in, so it helps him to be performant.

I hope you enjoyed reading my text. Please tell me what you thought of my English!

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Kylian Mbappé

Kylian Mbappé is a famous French footballer player.

I think he was born in 1998, the year the French Football team got its first star in the jersey (when they won the World Cup).

I wasn't born yet but it had to be amazing.

In 2018, he was only 19 years old and he won his first big title: the World Cup.

Back then, I was only 8 years old, but it was deffinitely the peak of my life.

I am so nostalgic of this moment because everything looked perfect.

Along with the tournament, France also evolved and became the best team of the World by their winning the final against Croatia by 4 2.

In the final, he scored 1 or 2 goals, andhe was decisive everywhere in the pitch and wheneverwherever and whenever he was in the pitch during the game.

use "Mbappé" instead of "he" here would have a better flow

In 2022, we came back to the final once again, but it was way more difficult than 4 years ago.

We loosed by 2 0 at the mid time of the game and up until the first 81 minutes, nothing changed.

But then, he score 2 goals in a row (in only 2 minutes) and all French people have started to believeing they could win again.

The game was thrilling until the end.

The first year was really difficult, probably because of the pressure and the time to adapt him to his environment, but he pushed through it and worked his fingers to the bone.

During the 2025 summer, along with 2 other French legends (Wembanyama et Marchand), he made the promessise to mark the story.

And it's exactly what he's currently doing.

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Well done!!

Kylian Mbappé

Kylian Mbappé is a famous French footballer player.

I think he was born in 1998, the year of the first star in the jersey of the France team (when they won the World Cup).

I wasn't born yet then, but it had to be amazing.

In 2018, he was only 19 years old and he won his first big title: the World Cup.

Back then, I was only 8 years old, but for him it was deffinitely the peak of his life.

Or: Back then I was only 8 years old, but it was definitely an incredible moment.

I am so nostalgic ofor theis moment when everything was perfect.

AloDuring theat tournament, France evolved and became the best team of the World with their win in the final against Croatia 4 -2.

In the final, he scored 1 or 2 goals, and was décisive everywhere inbut he made important contributions all over the pitch.

Also it would be "on" the pitch rather than "in".

In 2022, we came back to the final, but it was way more difficult this time.

We loosedwere losing by 2 -0 at the mid time and until the 81 minute 81, nothing changed.

Also the past tense of lose is lost

But then, he scored 2 goals in a row (in only 2 minutes), and all French people havefans started to believe oin their victory.

The game was thrilling until the end.

He scores another goal during extra time, but it wasn't enough to win the final that day.

His performance must have been one of the strongest performances of all time.

However, his sadness was as strong as his performance.

And to add insult to injury, the behaviour of the Argentina's goalkeeper was terrible.

Last year, he changed of club and went to Real Madrid.

The first year was really difficult, but he pushed through it and worked his fingers to the bone.

During the 2025 summer of 2025, with 2 other French legends (Wembanyama etand Marchand), he made the process to mark the began his plan to leave his mark on sports history.

This sentence was a little unclear, so I tried to correct it to what I thought it was saying.

And ithat's exactly what he's currently doing.

He's the first player whto scored 13 goals in the group phase of the Champions league, - and in only 7 matches, which iswas really the icing on the cake.

I think he finally found a team where he truly belongs in, so it, which helps him to be performan at his best.

I hope you enjoyed reading my text.

Please tell me what you thought of my English!

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Excellent work ! Your English is good, with only a few minor mistakes. If you keep working on it, I'm sure you will make rapid progress :)

He scored another goal during the extra time, but it wasn't enough to win the final that day.


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Kylian Mbappé is a famous French footballer player.


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I wasn't born but it had to be amazing.


I wasn't born yet then, but it had to be amazing.

I wasn't born yet but it had to be amazing.

In 2018, he was only 19 years old and he won his first big title: the World Cup.


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Back then, I was only 8 years old, but it was deffinitely the peak of life.


Back then, I was only 8 years old, but for him it was deffinitely the peak of his life.

Or: Back then I was only 8 years old, but it was definitely an incredible moment.

Back then, I was only 8 years old, but it was deffinitely the peak of my life.

The game was thrilling until the end.


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His performance must have been one of the strongest performances of all time.


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However, his sadness was as strong as his performance.


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And to add insult to injury, the behaviour of the Argentina's goalkeeper was terrible.


And to add insult to injury, the behaviour of the Argentina's goalkeeper was terrible.

And it's exactly what he's currently doing.


And ithat's exactly what he's currently doing.

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I think he was born in 1998, the year the French Football team got its first star in the jersey (when they won the World Cup).


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I am so nostalgic of this moment because everything looked perfect.


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Along the tournament, France evolved and became the best team of the World by their winning the final against Croatia by 4 2.


Along with the tournament, France also evolved and became the best team of the World by their winning the final against Croatia by 4 2.

In the final, he scored 1 or 2 goals, and was decisive everywhere in the pitch and whenever during the game.


In the final, he scored 1 or 2 goals, andhe was decisive everywhere in the pitch and wheneverwherever and whenever he was in the pitch during the game.

use "Mbappé" instead of "he" here would have a better flow

In 2022, we came back to the final, but it was way more difficult than 4 years ago.


In 2022, we came back to the final once again, but it was way more difficult than 4 years ago.

We loosed by 2 0 at the mid time of the game and until the 81 minute, nothing changed.


We loosed by 2 0 at the mid time of the game and up until the first 81 minutes, nothing changed.

But then, he score 2 goals in a row (in only 2 minutes) and all French people have started to believe they could win again.


But then, he score 2 goals in a row (in only 2 minutes) and all French people have started to believeing they could win again.

Last year, he changed club and went to Real Madrid, the strongest team in Football.


The first year was really difficult, probably because the pressure and the time to adapt him to his environment, but he pushed through it and worked his fingers to the bone.


The first year was really difficult, probably because of the pressure and the time to adapt him to his environment, but he pushed through it and worked his fingers to the bone.

During the 2025 summer, with 2 other French legends (Wembanyama et Marchand), he made the promess to mark the story.


During the 2025 summer, along with 2 other French legends (Wembanyama et Marchand), he made the promessise to mark the story.

He's the first player who scored 13 goals in the group phase of Champions league, and in only 7 matches, which is the icing on the cake.


He's the first player whto scored 13 goals in the group phase of the Champions league, - and in only 7 matches, which iswas really the icing on the cake.

I think he finaly found a team where he truly belongs in, so it helps him to be performant.


I think he finally found a team where he truly belongs in, so it, which helps him to be performan at his best.

I hope you enjoyed reading my text.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Please tell me what you thought of my English!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I think he was born in 1998, the year of the first star in the jersey of the France team (when they won the World Cup).


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I am so nostalgic of the moment when everything was perfect.


I am so nostalgic ofor theis moment when everything was perfect.

Along the tournament, France evolved and became the best team of the World with their win in the final against Croatia 4 2.


AloDuring theat tournament, France evolved and became the best team of the World with their win in the final against Croatia 4 -2.

In the final, he scored 1 or 2 goals, and was décisive everywhere in the pitch.


In the final, he scored 1 or 2 goals, and was décisive everywhere inbut he made important contributions all over the pitch.

Also it would be "on" the pitch rather than "in".

In 2022, we came back to the final, but it was way more difficult this time.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

We loosed by 2 0 at the mid time and until the 81 minute, nothing changed.


We loosedwere losing by 2 -0 at the mid time and until the 81 minute 81, nothing changed.

Also the past tense of lose is lost

But then, he score 2 goals in a row (in only 2 minutes) and all French people have started to believe on their victory.


But then, he scored 2 goals in a row (in only 2 minutes), and all French people havefans started to believe oin their victory.

He scores another goal during extra time, but it wasn't enough to win the final that day.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Last year, he changed of club and went to Real Madrid.


Last year, he changed of club and went to Real Madrid.

The first year was really difficult, but he push through it and worked his fingers to the bone.


The first year was really difficult, but he pushed through it and worked his fingers to the bone.

During the 2025 summer, with 2 other French legends (Wembanyama et Marchand), he made the process to mark the story.


During the 2025 summer of 2025, with 2 other French legends (Wembanyama etand Marchand), he made the process to mark the began his plan to leave his mark on sports history.

This sentence was a little unclear, so I tried to correct it to what I thought it was saying.

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