Sept. 21, 2022
Journal
I woke up so early today. For the last few days, I was very busy applying for my researcher technical title.
In China, if you are a professional technology personnel, technical title promotion will be your purpose in your entire career.
Let's take my major as an example. If you major in agriculture machinery management and you got a job in a public institution after you graduated from university, then your technical title would go like this.
After a year, you will be identified as an assistant engineer.
Four years later, you are qualified to apply for an engineer title.
Another five years later, you can apply for your senior engineer title.
After you become a senior engineer five years, you are allowed to apply for your researcher title, and this title is the top title.
I got my senior technical title in 2012. This year I qualified to apply for the researcher title.
In terms of technical titles, I have wasted too much time.
According to a new document about agricultural engineering technical title, and my education background, in 1986, I will be a technician. In 1990, I would be an assistant engineer. In 1995, I will be an engineer. In 2005, I will be a senior engineer. In 2012, I will be a researcher.
See, I have wasted a total of ten years.
Correction Settings
I woke up so early today.
For the last few days, I was very busy applying for my researcher technical title.
In China, if you are a professional technology personnel, technical title promotion will be your purpose infor your entire career.
In China, if you are a professional technology personnel, technical title promotion will be your purpose for your entire career.
There was nothing grammatically incorrect here, but the original phrasing didn't sound natural.
Let's take my major as an example.
If you major in agriculture machinery management and you got a job in a public institution after you graduated from university, then your technical title would go like this.
After a year, you will be identified as an assistant engineer.
Four years later, you are qualified to apply for an engineer title.
Another five years later, you can apply for your senior engineer title.
After you become a senior engineer five years, you are allowed to apply for your researcher title, and this title is the top title.
After you become a senior engineer, you are allowed to apply for your researcher title, and this title is the top title.
"Five years" can be omitted as it's understood from the previous sentence. Including it again can feel repetitive to the reader.
I got my senior technical title in 2012.
This year I qualified to apply for the researcher title.
In terms of technical titles, I have wasted too much time.
According to a new document about agricultural engineering technical title, and my education background, in 1986, I will be a technician.
In 1990, I would be an assistant engineer.
In 1995, I will be an engineer.
In 2005, I will be a senior engineer.
In 2012, I will be a researcher.
See, I have wasted a total of ten years.
Feedback
Very good. Your command of the English language is strong, and the few corrections I could give you were more stylistic than anything.
Sept. 22, 2022
After you become a senior engineer five years, you are allowed to apply for your researcher title, and this title is the top title.
"Five years" can be omitted as it's understood from the previous sentence. Including it again can feel repetitive to the reader.
I mean people have to be senior engineers for at least five years before they can apply for their researcher technical titles.
Sept. 22, 2022
Thank you very much.
Sept. 22, 2022
I mean people have to be senior engineers for at least five years before they can apply for their researcher technical titles.
Oh, I understand. In that case, the correction should be "After you have been a senior engineer for five years..." - Sorry for misunderstanding.
|
Journal |
|
I woke up so early today. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
For the last few days, I was very busy applying for my researcher technical title. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
In China, if you are a professional technology personnel, technical title promotion will be your purpose in your entire career.
In China, if you are a professional technology personnel, technical title promotion will be your purpose There was nothing grammatically incorrect here, but the original phrasing didn't sound natural. |
|
Let's take my major as an example. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
If you major in agriculture machinery management and you got a job in a public institution after you graduated from university, then your technical title would go like this. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
After a year, you will be identified as an assistant engineer. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
Four years later, you are qualified to apply for an engineer title. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
Another five years later, you can apply for your senior engineer title. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
After you become a senior engineer five years, you are allowed to apply for your researcher title, and this title is the top title.
After you become a senior engineer "Five years" can be omitted as it's understood from the previous sentence. Including it again can feel repetitive to the reader. |
|
I got my senior technical title in 2012. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
This year I qualified to apply for the researcher title. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
In terms of technical titles, I have wasted too much time. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
According to a new document about agricultural engineering technical title, and my education background, in 1986, I will be a technician. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
In 1990, I would be an assistant engineer. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
In 1995, I will be an engineer. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
In 2005, I will be a senior engineer. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
In 2012, I will be a researcher. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
See, I have wasted a total of ten years. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
You need LangCorrect Premium to access this feature.
Go Premium