Sept. 21, 2021
Stay Healthy
I have tried to work out as often as i could to stay my healthy.
First, I went to the gym after work or to go the swimming pool.
I also walked around or claimed stairs in the building of my company.
During holiday, I used to ride my bicycle more than 60 km
My home is 30km far away from Seoul, so it is a good choice to do a round trip by bicycle.
Finally, I pushed up more than 100 per day.
For training my upper body muscles, push up was the best thing for me.
So these were the things I have tried to stay healthy.
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Stay Healthy
I have tried to work out as often as iI couldan to stay my healthy.
I have tried to work out as often as I can to stay healthy.
First, I went to the gym after work or to goI went the swimming pool.
First, I went to the gym after work or I went the swimming pool.
I also walked around or claimbed stairs in the building of my company.
I also walked around or climbed stairs in the building of my company.
During the holidays, I used to ride my bicycle moreover than 60 km
During the holidays, I used to ride my bicycle over than 60 km
Can use - During my holiday or During the holidays
My home is 30km far away from Seoul, so it is a good choice to do a round trip by bicycle.
Finally, I pushed up more thandid push-ups, over 100 per day.
Finally, I did push-ups, over 100 per day.
For training my upper body muscles, push -ups wasere the best thing for me.
For training my upper body muscles, push-ups were the best thing for me.
So these were the things I have tried to stay healthy. So these were the things I have tried to stay healthy.
Instead of things you could say activities
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Sept. 22, 2021
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I have tried to work out as often as i could to stay my healthy.
I have tried to work out as often as |
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First, I went to the gym after work or to go the swimming pool.
First, I went to the gym after work or |
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I also walked around or claimed stairs in the building of my company.
I also walked around or cl |
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In the holiday, I used to ride my bicycle more than 60 km |
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My home is 30km far away from Seoul, so it is a good choice to do round trip by bicycle. |
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Finally, I pushed up more than 100 per day.
Finally, I |
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For training my upper body muscles, push up was the best thing for me.
For training my upper body muscles, push |
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So these were the things I have tried to stay healthy. So these were the things I have tried to stay healthy. So these were the things I have tried to stay healthy. Instead of things you could say activities |
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During holiday, I used to ride my bicycle more than 60 km
During the holidays, I used to ride my bicycle Can use - During my holiday or During the holidays |
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My home is 30km far away from Seoul, so it is a good choice to do a round trip by bicycle. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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