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hsen2012

March 8, 2022

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Violent In TV

I'm amazed at how violent TV is in Yemen. Some detective programs show all the details of people getting shot. You see fighting on the news every day. Some cable channels even show real people getting murdered. I feel strongly that the rating system doesn't always help, because children are sometimes home themselves and can watch what they want. Basically, TV is violent. Let's stop watching these violent programs and demand more educational ones. May be that way, TV will change.

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Let's stop watching these violent programs and demand more educational ones.

I'm amazed at how violent TV is in Yemen.


I'm amazed at how violent TV ishows are in Yemen. I'm amazed at how violent TV shows are in Yemen.

Violent In TV


TV Violent In TVce TV Violence

Some detective programs show all the details of people getting shot.


Some detective programs show all the details of people getting shot without any censorship. Some detective programs show people getting shot without any censorship.

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You see fighting on the news every day.


You see fighting on the news every day. You see fighting on the news everyday.

Some cable channels even show real people getting murdered.


Some cable channels even show real people getting murdered. Some channels even show real people getting murdered.

I feel strongly that the rating system doesn't always help, because children are sometimes home themselves and can watch what they want.


I feel strongly feel that the rating system doesn't always help, because children are sometimes home themselves andalone and without any supervision, they can watch whatever they want. I strongly feel that the rating system doesn't always help because children are sometimes home alone and without any supervision, they can watch whatever they want.

Basically, TV is violent.


Basically, TV is violent.violence is everywhere on TV. Basically, violence is everywhere on TV.

Let's stop watching these violent programs and demand more educational ones.


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May be that way, TV will change.


May be that way, TVe stigma associated with television will change. Maybe the stigma associated with television will change.

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