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Search for a Place for Summer

In the place where I live in summer, it's very hot. The temperature can reach anywhere from 35 to 40 degrees Celsius. So I have been looking for a place to spend the summer for years.

It's of course not very difficult to find a place where it's really cool in summer, but those places have drawbacks.

The northern part of China is cool in summer, but it is a little far from my hometown. I live in the central part of China. The distance between the two places exceeds one thousand kilometers.

Yunnan and Guizhou Provinces are in high - altitude areas. Cities in these two provinces usually have a high altitude, so the weather there in summer is cool. But it is said that the air in the high - altitude areas contains less oxygen, which is not good for people's health. In addition, the temperature difference between day and night is so big that it also does harm to people's health.

Another place is around the Bohai Sea. The coastal areas of the Bohai Sea are considered good places for spending the summer, but those places are still far from my home as the nearest city in that area is still more than 800 kilometers from my home.

The nearest mountain to me is the Dabie Mountain, only more than 200 kilometers from my home. Inside it, there are several places where it's cool in summer due to the high altitude. The distance can satisfy me, but I am still afraid of the high altitude.

I am still hesitating where I should buy an apartment to spend the summer. I will go and see before I finally get one.

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It's of course not very difficult to find a place where it's really cool in summer, but those places have drawbacks.

The northern part of China is cool in summer, but it is a little far from my hometown.

I live in the central part of China.

Cities in these two provinces usually have a high altitude, so the weather there in summer is cool.

Another place is around the Bohai Sea.

The coastal areas of the Bohai Sea are considered good places for spending the summer, but those places are still far from my home as the nearest city in that area is still more than 800 kilometers from my home.

The distance can satisfy me, but I am still afraid of the high altitude.

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But it is said that the air in the high - altitude areas contains less oxygen, which is not good for people's health.


But it is said that the air in the high - -altitude areas contains less oxygen, which is not good for people's health. But it is said that the air in the high-altitude areas contains less oxygen, which is not good for people's health.

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In addition, the temperature difference between day and night is so big that it also does harm to people's health.


In addition, the temperature difference between day and night is so {big | great} that it also does harm to people's health. In addition, the temperature difference between day and night is so {big | great} that it also does harm to people's health.

Another place is around the Bohai Sea.


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The coastal areas of the Bohai Sea are considered good places for spending the summer, but those places are still far from my home as the nearest city in that area is still more than 800 kilometers from my home.


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I will go and see before I finally get one.


I will go and see the place before I finally get one. I will go and see the place before I finally get one.

Search for a Place for Summer


Searching for a Place for Summer Searching for a Place for Summer

suggestion: Searching for a Summer Home

In the place where I live in summer, it's very hot.


In the place where I live, in summer, it's very hot. In the place where I live, in summer, it's very hot.

You live there year-round, right? If so, you could say, “In the place where I live, summers are very hot.”

The temperature can reach anywhere from 35 to 40 degrees Celsius.


The temperature can reach anywhere from 35 to 40 degrees Celsius, so I have been looking for a place to spend summers for years. The temperature can reach anywhere from 35 to 40 degrees Celsius, so I have been looking for a place to spend summers for years.

So I have been looking for a place to spend the summer for years.


It's of course not very difficult to find a place where it's really cool in summer, but those places have drawbacks.


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The northern part of China is cool in summer, but it is a little far from my hometown.


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I live in the central part of China.


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The distance between the two places exceeds one thousand kilometers.


The distance between the two places {exceeds one thousand kilometers | is over a thousand kilometers}. The distance between the two places {exceeds one thousand kilometers | is over a thousand kilometers}.

Yunnan and Guizhou Provinces are in high - altitude areas.


Yunnan and Guizhou Provinces are in high - -altitude areas. Yunnan and Guizhou Provinces are in high-altitude areas.

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The nearest mountain to me is the Dabie Mountain, only more than 200 kilometers from my home.


The nearest mountains to me isare the Dabie Mountains, only more thana little over 200 kilometers from my home. The nearest mountains to me are the Dabie Mountains, only a little over 200 kilometers from my home.

“More than 200” doesn’t mean “两百多”. It means “any amount that is greater than 200,” such as 1,000 or 10,000.

Inside it, there are several places where it's cool in summer due to the high altitude.


Inside itWithin these mountains, there are several places where it's cool in summer due to the high altitude. Within these mountains, there are several places where it's cool in summer due to the high altitude.

The distance can satisfy me, but I am still afraid of the high altitude.


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I am still hesitating where I should buy an apartment to spend the summer.


I am still hesitating over where I should buy an apartment to spend the summer. I am still hesitating over where I should buy an apartment to spend the summer.

Cities in these two provinces usually have a high altitude, so the weather there in summer is cool.


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