Black Players, in France Black Players in France

For clarity, it might be helpful to say what kind of players you are writing about. For example, you could write "Black Football Players in France" or "Black Soccer Players in France."

Black Players, on the Fraenceh Soccer Team Black Players on the French Soccer Team

Black Players, in France Black Players in France

This looks more like a title, whereas "Black Players, France" looks is more ambiguous/confusing.

Black Players, France Black Players, France

Black Players and France

When we watch the World Cup, we see that the French team is mostly composed of black players. When we watch the World Cup, we see that the French team is mostly composed of black players.

"When we watch the World Cup" suggests that the following statement is logically connected to us watching the World Cup. But the composition of the French team does not depend on whether we are watching it. I therefore added "we see that" to create a logical connection.

When we watch the World Cup, the French team is composed partly of black players. When we watch the World Cup, the French team is composed partly of black players.

is composed of black players means they're all black is composed mostly of black players means most of them are is composed partly of black players means it's a relatively even mix of races

They're black men who were born in France,and raised in France, were trained by Fraence, whoh coaches, wear French badgeuniforms, sing the French anthem, and bleed forrepresent France on the world stage. They're black men who were born and raised in France, were trained by French coaches, wear French uniforms, sing the French anthem, and represent France on the world stage.

"Bleed for" is not necessarily incorrect as a metaphor, but it feels a bit overly dramatic for playing a sport.

They're black men who were born in France, raised in France, trained by France, who wear the French badge, sing the French anthem, and bleed for France on the world stage. They're black men who were born in France, raised in France, trained by France, who wear the French badge, sing the French anthem, and bleed for France on the world stage.

They're black men who were born in France, raised in France, trained by France, who wearear the French badge, sing the French anthem, and bleed for France on the world stage. They're black men who were born in France, raised in France, trained by France, wear the French badge, sing the French anthem, and bleed for France on the world stage.

changed "who wear" to match the rest of the series

They're black men who were born in France, raised in France, trained by France, who wear the French badge, sing the French anthem, and bleed for France on the world stage. They're black men who were born in France, raised in France, trained by France, who wear the French badge, sing the French anthem, and bleed for France on the world stage.

They're black men who were born in France, raised in France, trained by France, who wear the French badge, sing the French anthem, and bleed for France on the world stage. They're black men who were born in France, raised in France, trained by France, who wear the French badge, sing the French anthem, and bleed for France on the world stage.

"Why are there so many black players in France?" "Why are there so many black players in France?"

Quotation marks make it more obvious you're quoting what sentiment certain people have towards this topic. But the original is okay too, it depends on what kind of style (?) you want the writing to have.

They didn't come to France, while —France came to them first. They didn't come to France—France came to them first.

They didn't come to France, while. Instead, France came to them first. They didn't come to France. Instead, France came to them first.

They didn't come to France, whilebut France came to them first. They didn't come to France, but France came to them first.

They didn't come to France, while; France came to them first. They didn't come to France; France came to them first.

They didn't come to France, while; France came to them first. They didn't come to France; France came to them first.

However, people still say he'sthat they are not really French. However, people still say that they are not really French.

However, people still say the'sy're not really French. However, people still say they're not really French.

However, people still say the'sy are not really French. However, people still say they are not really French.

"he's" would mean one of them, but I think you mean more than that you could also say something like However, people will look at a Black French player and say that he's not really French.

However, people still say the'sy're not really French. However, people still say they're not really French.