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Our Family Travel Blog #23
I gave M gifts such as Japanese tea, matcha, tea candies, and various other sweets. Since she has a small child, I chose sweets with as few additives as possible. Japanese sweets are full of additives, which always leaves me feeling conflicted.
In return, M gave us gifts that were even more generous than what I had given. My two daughters also received a notebook featuring a painting of Prague.
Mには日本茶や抹茶、お茶のキャンディー、その他、さまざまなお菓子をプレゼントした。小さなお子さんがいるからあまり添加物が入っていないお菓子を選んで差し上げた。日本のお菓子は添加物だらけなのでいつも困惑する。Mからはぼくが渡した以上のプレゼントをいただいてしまった。娘たちもそれぞれプラハの絵が描かれたノートをいただいた。
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I gave M gifts such assome gifts: Japanese tea, matcha, tea candies, and various other sweets.
I gave M some gifts: Japanese tea, matcha, tea candies, and various other sweets.
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Japanese sweets are full of additives, which always leaves me feeling conflicted. Japanese sweets are full of additives, which always leaves me feeling conflicted.
maybe you can add something at the end like "...conflicted about eating them", "...conflicted about gifting them to others"
My two daughters also received a notebook featuring a painting of Prague. My two daughters also received a notebook featuring a painting of Prague.
if both daughters got a notebook for themselves, it would be "My two daughters also each received a notebook..."
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what a sweet gift exchange!
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Our Family Travel Blog #23 |
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I gave M gifts such as Japanese tea, matcha, tea candies, and various other sweets.
I gave M stylistic |
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Since she has a small child, I chose sweets with as few additives as possible. |
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Japanese sweets are full of additives, which always leaves me feeling conflicted. Japanese sweets are full of additives, which always leaves me feeling conflicted. Japanese sweets are full of additives, which always leaves me feeling conflicted. maybe you can add something at the end like "...conflicted about eating them", "...conflicted about gifting them to others" |
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In return, M gave us gifts that were even more generous than what I had given. |
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My two daughters also received a notebook featuring a painting of Prague. My two daughters also received a notebook featuring a painting of Prague. My two daughters also received a notebook featuring a painting of Prague. if both daughters got a notebook for themselves, it would be "My two daughters also each received a notebook..." |
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