Aug. 30, 2021
Visual Contents
In the past, I used to watch TV to see visual contents.
At that time, I liked to watch cartoons and variety shows.
Now, these are many ways to see the visual contents with YouTube, Netflix and so on.
On YouTube, there are many contents which are submitted by people, so I can easily find my favorite ones and enjoy them.
Some influencers give me a lot of ideas and insights, so I regard them as my good teachers.
Many contents are in English on YouTube, so I am learning English for understanding more clearly.
Learning this way is very interesting for me than just studying textbooks.
Like this, I enjoy watching YouTube very much.
Visual Contentsmedia
"visual contents" is not something typically said in English— "visual media" should be more appropriate
In the past, I used to watch TV to see visual contentsa variety of content on the television.
Your sentence was grammatically correct 👍 just had some stylistic/usage problems.
At that time, I liked to watch cartoons anda variety of shows, including cartoons.
"At that time" refers to a more specific time, whereas the past you are describing appears to be more general. If you are talking about a specific time when you were a kid, "at that time" is ok.
NowToday, thesre are many ways to see theaccess visual contents withmedia via YouTube, Netflix and so on.
Via means "through". "through" also works here. "access content" can also work in place of visual media.
On YouTube, there are many contents which are submitted by people, so I can easily find my favorite ones andMany people submit content to Youtube, which makes it easy to find videos that I enjoy them.
"content" singular works here. Also- I've provided a sentence that makes more sense stylistically.
SomeCertain influencers give me a lot of ideas and insights, so I regard. I see them as my good teachers.
Many contents are inThere is a lot of English content on YouTtube, so I am learning English forto understanding it more clearly.
Learning this way is verymore interesting forto me than just studying textbooks.
"more" because you are making a comparison
LikeFor this reason, I enjoy watching YouTube very much.
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I understand your text and I can see that you have made tangible progress in English!! Great work and keep consuming content— the usage and grammar will get easier and easier.
Aug. 31, 2021
Thank you very much, especially your cheer.
Visual Contents
In the past, I used to watch TV to see visual contents.
At that time, I liked to watch cartoons and variety shows.
Now, thesre are many ways to see the visual contents with YouTube, Netflix and so on.
On YouTube, there are many contents which are / there is a lot of content which is submitted by people, so I can easily find my favorite ones and enjoy them.
I consider "content" to be uncountable
Some influencers give me a lot of ideas and insights, so I regard them as my good teachers.
Many contents are in English on YouTubeA lot of content on YouTube is in English, so I am learning English forin order to understanding more clearly.
Learning this way is verymakes it more interesting for me than just studying textbooks.
There were two possible interpretations of your original sentence:
1) You prefer learning this way to studying textbooks
2) Learning this way is a pleasant supplement to solely studying from textbooks
My correction emphasises the second interpretation
Like thisAs such, I enjoy watching YouTube very much.
Aug. 31, 2021
Thank you very much.
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Visual Contents This sentence has been marked as perfect! Visual "visual contents" is not something typically said in English— "visual media" should be more appropriate |
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In the past, I used to watch TV to see visual contents. This sentence has been marked as perfect! In the past, I used to watch Your sentence was grammatically correct 👍 just had some stylistic/usage problems. |
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At that time, I liked to watch cartoons and variety shows. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
"At that time" refers to a more specific time, whereas the past you are describing appears to be more general. If you are talking about a specific time when you were a kid, "at that time" is ok. |
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Now, these are many ways to see the visual contents with YouTube, Netflix and so on. Now, the
Via means "through". "through" also works here. "access content" can also work in place of visual media. |
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On YouTube, there are many contents which are submitted by people, so I can easily find my favorite ones and enjoy them. On YouTube, there are many contents which are / there is a lot of content which is submitted by people, so I can easily find my favorite ones and enjoy them. I consider "content" to be uncountable
"content" singular works here. Also- I've provided a sentence that makes more sense stylistically. |
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Some influencers give me a lot of ideas and insights, so I regard them as my good teachers. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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Many contents are in English on YouTube, so I am learning English for understanding more clearly.
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Learning this way is very interesting for me than just studying textbooks. Learning this way There were two possible interpretations of your original sentence: 1) You prefer learning this way to studying textbooks 2) Learning this way is a pleasant supplement to solely studying from textbooks My correction emphasises the second interpretation Learning this way is "more" because you are making a comparison |
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Like this, I enjoy watching YouTube very much.
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