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RioDeMilo

July 15, 2025

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Visiting and Agro Expo

My dad and I don't go out very often, but yesterday was the exception.
We went to an agricultural and farming exposition, were we saw various breeds of cows and bulls, we even saw buffalos "Who would have thought that there are buffalos in Colombia".
We had a good time, we're expecting to see horses on the next year exposition, since in this expo there were horses but not on the day we attended the expo.

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Visiting and Agro Expo

My dad and I don't go out very often, but yesterday was the exception.

We went to an agricultural and farming exposition, were we saw various breeds of cows and bulls, we even saw buffalos "Who would have thought that there are buffalos in Colombia".

We had a good time, we're expecting to see horses on the next year exposition, since in this expo there were horses but not on the day we attended the expo.

My dad and I don't go out very often, but yesterday was thean exception.

We went to an agricultural and farming exposition, where we saw various breeds of cows and bulls, w. We even saw buffalos. "Who would have thought that there are buffalos in Colombia".

We had a good time, w. We're expecting to see horses onat the next year exposition, since in this expoexposition next year, since there were horses at this expo but not on the day we attended the expo.

My dad and I don't go out very often, but yesterday was thean exception.

I changed ‘the’ to ‘an’ because it sounded more natural to me, but thinking about it, you could still you ‘the’ exception if you’re really trying to emphasis how rare it is that you and your dad go out.

We went to an agriculturale and farming exposition, where we saw various breeds of cows and bulls, w. We even saw buffalos! "Who would have thought that there arwould be buffalos in Colombia".?

We had a good time, and we're expecthoping to see horses on theat next year’s exposition, since in this expo t. There were horses at this expo, but not on the day we attended the expo.

Visiting and Agro Expo


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My dad and I don't go out very often, but yesterday was the exception.


My dad and I don't go out very often, but yesterday was thean exception.

I changed ‘the’ to ‘an’ because it sounded more natural to me, but thinking about it, you could still you ‘the’ exception if you’re really trying to emphasis how rare it is that you and your dad go out.

My dad and I don't go out very often, but yesterday was thean exception.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

We went to an agricultural and farming exposition, were we saw various breeds of cows and bulls, we even saw buffalos "Who would have thought that there are buffalos in Colombia".


We went to an agriculturale and farming exposition, where we saw various breeds of cows and bulls, w. We even saw buffalos! "Who would have thought that there arwould be buffalos in Colombia".?

We went to an agricultural and farming exposition, where we saw various breeds of cows and bulls, w. We even saw buffalos. "Who would have thought that there are buffalos in Colombia".

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

We had a good time, we're expecting to see horses on the next year exposition, since in this expo there were horses but not on the day we attended the expo.


We had a good time, and we're expecthoping to see horses on theat next year’s exposition, since in this expo t. There were horses at this expo, but not on the day we attended the expo.

We had a good time, w. We're expecting to see horses onat the next year exposition, since in this expoexposition next year, since there were horses at this expo but not on the day we attended the expo.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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