Jan. 22, 2025
Visit the Millennium Park Campus
Millennium Park Campus is classic Chicago, with a long list of iconic things to see and do. Pay a visit to one of the city’s most famous public artworks, Cloud Gate, aka “The Bean.” Splash around in Crown Fountain, a shallow pool flanked by two 50-foot towers where the faces of Chicago locals spout water from pouting lips. Hear free live music, go to summer festivals, and see films screened under the stars at the Jay Pritzker Pavilion. Wander Lurie Garden and meet birds, bees, and butterflies.
Nearby, visit the Art Institute of Chicago, ranked one of the top museums in the world by TripAdvisor users. Then hop over to the Chicago Cultural Center, crowned by the largest Tiffany stained-glass dome in the world. Spend the evening at the Harris Theater for Music and Dance. And don’t leave without lakefront wall climbing, tennis playing, mini golfing, playground frolicking, or ribbon skating at Maggie Daley Park.
Millennium Park Campus is classic Chicago, with a long list of iconic things to see and do.
Pay a visit to one of the city’s most famous public artworks, Cloud Gate, aka “The Bean.”. Splash around in Crown Fountain,; a shallow pool flanked by two 50-foot towers where the faces of Chicago locals spout water from pouting lips.
Minor grammatical fixes only
Hear free live music, go to summer festivals, and see films screened under the stars at the Jay Pritzker Pavilion.
Wander through Lurie Garden and meet birds, bees, and butterflies.
Mostly a stylistic change, but a preposition before the noun will make it flow better
Nearby, visit the Art Institute of Chicago, which is ranked one of the top museums in the world by TripAdvisor users.
A connector is needed between the noun and the description
Then hop over to the Chicago Cultural Center, which is crowned by the largest Tiffany stained-glass dome in the world.
You need either a connector here, or you could rework it into two sentences.
Spend the evening at the Harris Theater for Music and Dance.
AndFinally, don’t leave without lakefront wall climbing, tennis playing, mini golfing, playground frolicking, or ribbon skating at Maggie Daley Park.
I feel like this might be changing, but I was always taught growing up to never start a sentence with "and".
Regardless, starting with "and" would be rather informal and the rest of your writing sounds formal.
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Great writing! I really only made stylistic changes and minor grammatical fixes.
The writing sounds a bit demanding. If this wasn't your intention, I'd suggest adding more connectors and pronouns.
VA visit of the Millennium Park Campus
Tweaked to make it flow.
Millennium Park Campus is classic Chicago, with a long list of iconic things to see and do.
Pay a visit to one of the city’s most famous public artworks, Cloud Gate, aka “The Bean.” Splash around in Crown Fountain, a shallow pool flanked by two 50-foot towers where the faces of Chicago locals spout water from pouting lips.
Hear free live music, go to summer festivals, and see films screened under the stars at the Jay Pritzker Pavilion.
Wander Lurie Garden and mseet birds, bees, and butterflies.
Nearby, visit the Art Institute of Chicago, ranked one of the top museums in the world by TripAdvisor users.
Then hop over to the Chicago Cultural Center, crowned by the largest Tiffany stained-glass dome in the world.
Spend the evening at the Harris Theater for Music and Dance.
And don’t leave without lakefront wall climbing, tennis playing, mini golfing, playground frolicking, or ribbon skating at Maggie Daley Park.
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Good write-up
Your text would benefit from more conjunctions to make it flow naturally, it sounded like you were giving isolated advice, which would seem better when bulleted.
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Visit the Millennium Park Campus
Tweaked to make it flow. |
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Millennium Park Campus is classic Chicago, with a long list of iconic things to see and do. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Pay a visit to one of the city’s most famous public artworks, Cloud Gate, aka “The Bean.” Splash around in Crown Fountain, a shallow pool flanked by two 50-foot towers where the faces of Chicago locals spout water from pouting lips. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Pay a visit to one of the city’s most famous public artworks, Cloud Gate, aka “The Bean Minor grammatical fixes only |
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Hear free live music, go to summer festivals, and see films screened under the stars at the Jay Pritzker Pavilion. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Wander Lurie Garden and meet birds, bees, and butterflies. Wander Lurie Garden and Wander through Lurie Garden and meet birds, bees, and butterflies. Mostly a stylistic change, but a preposition before the noun will make it flow better |
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Spend the evening at the Harris Theater for Music and Dance. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Nearby, visit the Art Institute of Chicago, ranked one of the top museums in the world by TripAdvisor users. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Nearby, visit the Art Institute of Chicago, which is ranked one of the top museums in the world by TripAdvisor users. A connector is needed between the noun and the description |
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Then hop over to the Chicago Cultural Center, crowned by the largest Tiffany stained-glass dome in the world. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Then hop over to the Chicago Cultural Center, which is crowned by the largest Tiffany stained-glass dome in the world. You need either a connector here, or you could rework it into two sentences. |
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And don’t leave without lakefront wall climbing, tennis playing, mini golfing, playground frolicking, or ribbon skating at Maggie Daley Park. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
I feel like this might be changing, but I was always taught growing up to never start a sentence with "and". Regardless, starting with "and" would be rather informal and the rest of your writing sounds formal. |
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