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hsen2012

March 8, 2022

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Violent In TV

I'm amazed at how violent TV is in Yemen. Some detective programs show all the details of people getting shot. You see fighting on the news every day. Some cable channels even show real people getting murdered. I feel strongly that the rating system doesn't always help, because children are sometimes home themselves and can watch what they want. Basically, TV is violent. Let's stop watching these violent programs and demand more educational ones. May be that way, TV will change.

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Violentce In TV

I'm amazed at how violent TV isis TV in Yemen.

Some detective programs show all the details of people gettbeing shot at.

Could also remain as it is

Some cable channels even show real people getting murdered.

I feel strongly that the rating system doesn't always help, because when children are sometimes home themselves andat home they can watch whatanything they want.

Basically, TV is violent.

Not the best phrase but understandable

Let's stop watching these violent programs and demand more educational ones.

Is it "more educational" or "more programs"?

May be that way, TV will change.

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Violent In TV


Violentce In TV

I'm amazed at how violent TV is in Yemen.


I'm amazed at how violent TV isis TV in Yemen.

Some detective programs show all the details of people getting shot.


Some detective programs show all the details of people gettbeing shot at.

Could also remain as it is

You see fighting on the news every day.


Some cable channels even show real people getting murdered.


Some cable channels even show real people getting murdered.

I feel strongly that the rating system doesn't always help, because children are sometimes home themselves and can watch what they want.


I feel strongly that the rating system doesn't always help, because when children are sometimes home themselves andat home they can watch whatanything they want.

Basically, TV is violent.


Basically, TV is violent.

Not the best phrase but understandable

Let's stop watching these violent programs and demand more educational ones.


Let's stop watching these violent programs and demand more educational ones.

Is it "more educational" or "more programs"?

May be that way, TV will change.


May be that way, TV will change.

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