Jan. 9, 2025
Vigilante, naive, elderly and distraught
Let me ask you a very especific question. Have you ever acted as an vigilante before?
Do you know what "vigilante" means?
A muscled adult man would not hesitate to act as a vigilante to prevent a criminal from robbing the elderly of their money just before his eyes.
A naive kid walking by didn't realize what was happening.
The elderly can be either relieved or distraught after what's comming next.
Vigilante, naive, elderly and distraught
Let me ask you a very especific question.
Have you ever acted as an vigilante before?
Do you know what "vigilante" means?
A muscled adult man would not hesitate to act as a vigilante to prevent a criminal from robbing the elderly of their money jusright before his eyes.
A naive kid who walking by didn't realize what was happening.
The elderly can be either be relieved or distraught after what's comming happened next.
Let me ask you a very especific question.
Have you ever acted as an vigilante before?
Vigilante doesn't begin with a vowel phonetically, so takes "a" instead of "an".
A naive kid walking by diwouldn't realize what was happening.
The sentence by itself is fine, but as an extension of the previous hypothetical sentence, presumably should also be hypothetical.
The elderly person can be either relieved or distraught afterbout what's comming next.
"The elderly" refers to all elderly people as a group, if you want to talk about a single elderly person, you need to use "elderly person", "elderly woman", etc.
This sentence still isn't great, but your intended meaning isn't clear enough for me to pick the correct alternative.
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The shift from hypothetical to non-hypothetical in the middle of the post makes it a bit hard to follow. Sentence by sentence it's mostly valid, but put together it doesn't really fit together. You build as if you're going to explain what a vigilante is, but then describe someone's opinion on being one. You then go from a hypothetical to describe it as if it was a specific incident.
Jan. 10, 2025
I am just trying to use the idioms i have recently learned. Yes, the sentences don't fit and are independent.
Let me ask you a very especific question.
Have you ever acted as an vigilante before?
Do you know what "vigilante" means?
A muscled adult man would not hesitate to act as a vigilante to prevent a criminal from robbing the elderly of their money just before his eyes.
A naive kid walking by didn't realize what was happening.
The elderly can be either relieved or distraught after what's comming next.
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Good question! I don't think I've ever acted as a vigilante in such a dramatic manner.
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A naive kid walking by didn't realize what was happening. This sentence has been marked as perfect! A naive kid walking by The sentence by itself is fine, but as an extension of the previous hypothetical sentence, presumably should also be hypothetical. A naive kid who walking by didn't realize what was happening. |
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A muscled adult man would not hesitate to act as a vigilante to prevent a criminal from robbing the elderly of their money just before his eyes. This sentence has been marked as perfect! A muscled adult man would not hesitate to act as a vigilante to prevent a criminal from robbing the elderly of their money |
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The elderly can be either relieved or distraught after what's comming next. This sentence has been marked as perfect! The elderly person can be either relieved or distraught a "The elderly" refers to all elderly people as a group, if you want to talk about a single elderly person, you need to use "elderly person", "elderly woman", etc. This sentence still isn't great, but your intended meaning isn't clear enough for me to pick the correct alternative. The elderly can |
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