The most unforgettable thing was Banh Mi, which was provided inincluded with the hotel breakfast, i. It was so tasty that I have ate so muchme every morning.

Whoever you use the word which, don’t forget the comma before it. Alternatively you can use the word that (The most unforgettable thing was Banh Mi that was included with the hotel breakfast.) either way is fine, but you should use the comma before which.

Provided as opposed to included is a subtle difference. Either one works, but in this context included just sounds more intimate and having a meal is an intimate experience. Provided just sounds a bit less intimate.

It is said that Vietnam bread wasese Bread gained famed because the French cChefs taught local people how to bake bread when they colonized the country in the late 19th century.

The word “fame” is a noun, not a verb, so you wouldn’t conjugate it. The verb in this sentence is “was.” The word “famed” can sometimes be used as an adjective to describe something that was previously made famous, but as an adjective would come before the noun. This sentence re-arranged using “famed” could be: “It is said that the famed Vietnamese Bread was introduced to local people by French Chefs, who taught them how to bake…”

In English the verb “to be” precedes either a verb to describe what the subject is doing, or precedes an adjective, but not typically a noun. For example, “…Vietnamese Bread was made famous because..” with “made” being the past tense conjugation of the verb make; or “…Vietnamese Bread is famous because…” with “famous” being an adjective.

Also, Vietnam is the proper name of a country. Whenever you are describing something that comes from that country, you would use the adjective that describes something coming from that country, which is why I changed it to “Vietnamese Bread” and since “Vietnamese Bread” is the proper name for that type of bread, the name would be capitalized.

I am thinking of how allured thedelicious Banh Mi is, then thebut I wonder if French bBread might be more enticingbetter.

The word “allured” is the past tense conjugation of a verb, but the sentence already has a verb. I am thinking is the subject + verb. You are probably looking for an adjective to describe Banh Mi. I chose “delicious” because Banh Mi is delicious.

In the second part, the word “then” mostly follows an “if” statement. A possible reconstituted sentence using “then” could be: “If Banh Mi is delicious, then French bread might be better.”

I wish I could make it and. I also wish to travel to France to taste French bread.

Whenever you use the word “and” make sure to ask yourself if it is better to break out the two thoughts into two sentences. It is ok to use “and” if the two thoughts are connected, but if the two thoughts are really two different thoughts, it may be better to break them out into two sentences.

Now, my mouth seems to be droolwatering.

Drooling is a bodily function that is comprised of saliva. When you use the word “drool,” or “drooling,” the thought of saliva is what comes to mind and is generally not appealing, especially in a sentence talking about food. Drooling is commonly used to describe saliva dripping down your face outside of your mouth either because you are sick or have some medical condition. Because of the negative connotation associated with the word “drool” we just use “water” in its place because the word water isn’t usually associated with saliva.

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