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SummerTeaWater

Oct. 21, 2021

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Video About Environment

I remember a video on YouTube about the environment.

Sadly, the environment is not good by human on the video.

From animals' perspective, they just do what they can to survive.

It really gets me down and breaks my heart.

Neither of ideas to survive is suitable for them.

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Video About Environment

I remember a video on YouTube about the environment.

Sadly, the environment is not good byecause of humans on the video.

From the animals' perspectives, they just do what they can to survive.

It really gets me down and breaks my heart.

Neither of ideas to survive is suitable for them.

Not sure what you mean here, maybe reword it?

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Overall, nicely written. Just some grammar errors but otherwise, good job! :)

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SummerTeaWater

Oct. 22, 2021

402

Thank you very much.

Video About Environment


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I remember a video on YouTube about the environment.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Sadly, the environment is not good by human on the video.


Sadly, the environment is not good byecause of humans on the video.

From animals' perspective, they just do what they can to survive.


From the animals' perspectives, they just do what they can to survive.

It really gets me down and breaks my heart.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Neither of ideas to survive is suitable for them.


Neither of ideas to survive is suitable for them.

Not sure what you mean here, maybe reword it?

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