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Things I Want to Do Before I Die: #1

I usually travel with my family or friends, but I want to try traveling alone at least once.
Though driving is nice, I'm not good at it, so I think it'll take the airplane or the bullet train rather than going by car.
Sometimes, I just want to go wherever I feel like and eat whenever I feel like it.
I want to enjoy being carefree.


死ぬまでにやりたい事:#1
私はいつも旅行には家族や友達と行きますが、一度は「ひとり旅」をしてみたいと思っています。
車で行くのもいいけど、私は車の運転が下手なので、新幹線か飛行機で行くことになると思います。
たまには気ままに行きたい所に行き、食べたい時に食べる事をしてみたい。

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Things I Want to Do Before I Die: #1

I usually travel with my family or friends, but I want to try traveling alone at least once.

Though driving is nice, I'm not good at it, so I think it'll take the airplane or the bullet train rather than going by car.

Sometimes, I just want to go wherever I feel like and eat whenever I feel like it.

I want to enjoy being carefree.

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Thank you for checking my writing. 😀

Things I Want to Do Before I Die: #1

I usually travel with my family or friends, but I want to try traveling alone at least once.

Though driving is nice, I'm not good at it, so I think itI'll take thean airplane or the bullet train rather than going by car.

Sometimes, I just want to go wherever I feel like and eat whenever I feel like it.

I want to enjoy being carefree.

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I’ve been traveling alone for the past five years and really like it. Last fall, I hiked by myself in the Grand Canyon for four days and it was wonderful!

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Thank you so much. 😀

Wow!! You've been traveling alone for the past 5 years?
That's amazing!
I've never been to the Grand Canyon, but I know it's a great place.
I'm so jealous.

Things I Want to Do Before I Die: #1

I usually travel with my family or friends, but I want to try traveling alone at least once.

Though driving is nice, I'm not good at it, so I think it'llI'd take thean airplane or thea bullet train rather than going by car.

Sometimes, I just want to go wherever I feel like and eat whenever I feel like it.

I want to enjoy being carefree.

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Great writing! I hope you can accomplish this dream soon!

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Thank you so much.
There are a lot of places I want to go, so I can't decide where to go.
But it looks like I still can't travel alone yet because I have a job. 😂

Things I Want to Do Before I Die: #1

I usually travel with my family or friends, but I want to try traveling alone at least once.

Though driving is nice, I'm not good at it, so I think it'llI'd take the airplane or the bullet train rather than going by car.

Sometimes, I just want to go wherever I feel like and eat whenever I feel like it.

I want to enjoy being carefree.

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Well done!

In English we often call this "list of things to do before we die" a "bucket list" -- that is, things we want to do before we "kick the bucket" (die), lol

I haven't traveled alone much either, always with a friend or partner, but I fantasize about doing it too. Feels like true freedom.

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Thank you for letting me know "bucket list". 😀
When I tried it, I translated "bucket list" to Japanese, I was surprised.

Traveling alone is a dream we both want to make a reality someday.

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