March 26, 2021
Thinking before buy something
Recently, I have been trying to buy essential things not for wasting my money.
If I want to buy something, I always think about this principle.
Do I need it caused by needs or uncomfortable ?
If it is decided as an essential one, I will buy it whether it is expensive or not.
However, if I am uncomfortable without it, then I am waiting more than 100 days to think about it.
If I will still think about it 100 days later, then I am going to buy it finally.
By this principle, I can save not only my money but also my space at home.
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Thinking before buying something Thinking before buying something
Recently, I have been trying to buy essential things to not for wastinge my money.
Recently, I have been trying to buy essential things to not waste my money.
If I want to buy something, I always think about this principle.
Do I need it caused bfor my needs or unmy comfortable ?
Do I need it for my needs or my comfort ?
If it isI decided as an it is essential one, I will buy it whether it is expensive or not.
If I decide it is essential, I will buy it whether it is expensive or not.
However, if I am uncomfortable without it, then I am waiting more than 100 days to think about it.
However, if I am uncomfortable without it, then I am wait more than 100 days to think about it.
"Uncomfortable" isn't the right word here. Do you mean not essential?
If I will still think about it 100 days later, then I am going towill buy it finally.
If I will still think about it 100 days later, then I will buy it finally.
ByUsing this principle, I can save not only my money but also my space at home.
Using this principle, I can save not only my money but also my space at home.
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Great construction. It was easily understood and you used a good mix of sentence types. Great attention to spelling and punctuation.
One tiny recommendation... don't add a space before question marks. They replace full stops (periods) and should have no proceeding space.
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Thinking before buy something Thinking before buying something Thinking before buying something |
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Recently, I have been trying to buy essential things not for wasting my money.
Recently, I have been trying to buy essential things to not |
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If I want to buy something, I always think about this principle. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Do I need it caused by needs or uncomfortable ?
Do I need it |
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If it is decided as an essential one, I will buy it whether it is expensive or not.
If |
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However, if I am uncomfortable without it, then I am waiting more than 100 days to think about it.
However, if I am uncomfortable without it, then I am wait "Uncomfortable" isn't the right word here. Do you mean not essential? |
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If I will still think about it 100 days later, then I am going to buy it finally.
If I will still think about it 100 days later, then I |
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By this principle, I can save not only my money but also my space at home.
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