Dec. 4, 2020
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
"It is better for people to choose jobs that come with high salaries even though they do not enjoy doing it than to choose jobs that they enjoy but come with low salaries."
It is critically important that we choose a job that fits perfectly with our life. No one can deny that there are both positive and negative effects on both choices. Personally, I disagree with the argument that high salaries even it is not enjoyable is better. There are two reasons why I feel this way, both of which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, money is not the only matter in our life. There are a lot of things we have to consider besides money, as our social life. My opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own experience. Two years ago, I had to work in a city far away from my family. It offered a high salary, for that reason I went with it. On the other hand, this job affected my social life to the maximum, I could not visit my parents or my family members frequently.
One day my brother got an accident, and he went to the hospital and stayed there for two weeks. I couldn't be there to support or take care of him, and that pushed me negatively.
Furthermore, to do the best effort in anything in our life, we need to feel comfortable and enjoy what we do. My personal experience is a compelling illustration of this. When I was in college, I lived alone in a city away from my supportive family. Therefore, I was forced to work in a place that offers a lot of money to handle my life there. There were many things I had to do in that job, additionally, my boss was very tough and rude to me. So, I was not happy at all, and that's affected my work efficiency. After one week he fired me because I didn't work as he wanted.
In light of the above-mentioned reasons, I strongly believe that a job that comes with a low salary but it is enjoyable is far better. This because it allows us to work effectively in a pleasant mood and to not put our social life behind.
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It is critically important that we choose a job that fits perfectly wbest fiths our life.
It is critically important that we choose a job that best fits our life.
'perfectly' means 100% so it's not the best word to use in this context
No one can deny that there are both positive and negative effects on both choiceassociated with the above options.
No one can deny that there are both positive and negative effects associated with the above options.
Personally, I disagree with the argument that high salaries even it is not enjoyable is betterit is better for people to choose jobs that come with high salaries even though they do not enjoy doing it.
Personally, I disagree with the argument that it is better for people to choose jobs that come with high salaries even though they do not enjoy doing it.
It's ok to repeat the argument stated in the question. You can reword it or express it in another way later into your essay
There are two reasons why I feel this way, both of which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, money is not the only matter in our lifething we have to consider.
To begin with, money is not the only thing we have to consider.
TRather, there are a lot ofmany things we have to consider besides money, asfor example our social life.
Rather, there are many things we have to consider besides money, for example our social life.
My opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own experience.
Two years ago, I had to work in a city far away from my family.
It offered a high salary, and for that reason I went with it. It offered a high salary, and for that reason I went with it.
On the other hand, this job affected my social life to the maximum, I could not visit my parents or my family members frequently.
One day my brother gothad an accident, and h. He went to the hospital and stayed there for two weeks.
One day my brother had an accident. He went to the hospital and stayed there for two weeks.
I couldn't be there to support or take care of him, and that pushed me negativenegatively affected me/had a negative affect on me/that hurt me greatly.
I couldn't be there to support or take care of him, and that negatively affected me/had a negative affect on me/that hurt me greatly.
Furthermore, to do thein order to put our best efforts into anything inconnected with our lifeves, we need to feel comfortable and enjoy what we do.
Furthermore, in order to put our best efforts into anything connected with our lives, we need to feel comfortable and enjoy what we do.
My personal experience is a compelling illustration of this.
When I was in college, I lived alone in a city away from my supportive family.
There were many things I had to do in that job,; additionally, my boss was very tough and rude to me.
There were many things I had to do in that job; additionally, my boss was very tough and rude to me.
So, I was not happy at all, and that's affected my work efficiencyconsequently was also not as efficient as I could have been at my job.
So, I was not happy at all, and consequently was also not as efficient as I could have been at my job.
After one week he fired me because I didn't work as he wanted.
In light of the above-mentioned reasons, I strongly believe that a job that comes with a low salary but it is enjoyable is far better.
This is because it allows us to work effectively in a pleasant mood and to not put our social life behinon hold.
This is because it allows us to work effectively in a pleasant mood and to not put our social life on hold.
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Dec. 5, 2020
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? |
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"It is better for people to choose jobs that come with high salaries even though they do not enjoy doing it than to choose jobs that they enjoy but come with low salaries. |
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It is critically important that we choose a job that fits perfectly with our life.
It is critically important that we choose a job that 'perfectly' means 100% so it's not the best word to use in this context |
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No one can deny that there are both positive and negative effects on both choices.
No one can deny that there are both positive and negative effects |
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Personally, I disagree with the argument that high salaries even it is not enjoyable is better.
Personally, I disagree with the argument that It's ok to repeat the argument stated in the question. You can reword it or express it in another way later into your essay |
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There are two reasons why I feel this way, both of which I will explore in the following essay. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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To begin with, money is not the only matter in our life.
To begin with, money is not the only |
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There are a lot of things we have to consider besides money, as our social life.
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My opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own experience. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Two years ago, I had to work in a city far away from my family. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It offered a high salary, for that reason I went with it. It offered a high salary, and for that reason I went with it. It offered a high salary, and for that reason I went with it. |
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On the other hand, this job affected my social life to the maximum, I could not visit my parents or my family members frequently. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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One day my brother got an accident, and he went to the hospital and stayed there for two weeks.
One day my brother |
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I couldn't be there to support or take care of him, and that pushed me negatively.
I couldn't be there to support or take care of him, and that |
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Furthermore, to do the best effort in anything in our life, we need to feel comfortable and enjoy what we do.
Furthermore, |
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My personal experience is a compelling illustration of this. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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When I was in college, I lived alone in a city away from my supportive family. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Therefore, I was forced to work in a place that offers a lot of money to handle my life there. |
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There were many things I had to do in that job, additionally, my boss was very tough and rude to me.
There were many things I had to do in that job |
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So, I was not happy at all, and that's affected my work efficiency.
So, I was not happy at all, and |
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After one week he fired me because I didn't work as he wanted. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In light of the above-mentioned reasons, I strongly believe that a job that comes with a low salary but it is enjoyable is far better. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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This because it allows us to work effectively in a pleasant mood and to not put our social life behind.
This is because it allows us to work effectively in a pleasant mood and to not put our social life |
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