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My new school in this year is very expensive. It is a very good business school. My new school this year is very expensive. It is a very good business school.

My new school in this year is very expensive. It i's a very good business school. My new school this year is very expensive. It's a very good business school.

My new school in this year is very expensive. It is a very good business school. My new school this year is very expensive. It is a very good business school.

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I don't really know what you were trying to say here so this is my best guess.

I mean a, I'm happy to have found a place andthat my nurse and my fathermother and my computer scientist .Thisfather could be afford easily. I mean, I'm happy to have found a place that my nurse mother and my computer scientist father could afford.

I've written this in a very colloquial way.

I mean, I am happy to have found a place and my. My mom is a nurse (?) and my father is a computer scientist .T, so this could be afforded easily. I mean, I am happy to have found a place. My mom is a nurse (?) and my father is a computer scientist, so this could be afforded easily.

I don't know for sure what is being conveyed here but I think I fixed it

But because the school costs so much, however, I would like to show my parents that I really gooam working very hard. Because the school costs so much, however, I would like to show my parents that I am working very hard.

Again, I don't really know what you were trying to say here so this is my best guess.

But because the school costs so much would like, my parents that I reallwant it to be very good. But because the school costs so much, my parents want it to be very good.

Not 100% sure what you mean here, I hope this is correct.

But because the school costs so much, my parents would like my parents that Ie to be really good. But because the school costs so much, my parents would like me to be really good

I hope I conveyed what you meant to say with this correction

I am really good inat math and interresting very fort's used a lot in business but this will be hard. I am really good at math and it's used a lot in business but this will be hard.

Again, I don't really know what you were trying to say here so this is my best guess.

I am really good inat math and very interresting very fored in business, but this will be hard. I am really good at math and very interested in business, but this will be hard.

I am really good in math and very interresting very fored in business but ist will be hard. I am really good in math and very interested in business but it will be hard.

Because of this I learn this summer my eThat's why I'm learning Englisch and fFrench this summer. That's why I'm learning English and French this summer.

Because of this, I'm learn this summer my eing Englisch and fFrench this summer. Because of this, I'm learning English and French this summer.

Because of this, I'm learn this summer my eing Englisch and fFrench this summer. Because of this, I'm learning English and French this summer.

I am so excited ofabout the school and the new courses like French and Business. I am so excited about the school and new courses like French and Business.

I am so excited ofor the new school, and the newto take courses like French and Bubusiness. I am so excited for the new school, and the to take courses like French and business.

I am so excited ofor the school and the new courses like French and Business. I am so excited for the school and the new courses like French and Business.

But thats is not all I must too search meThat's not all, however, I must also look for a sports team and a club. That's not all, however, I must also look for a sports team and a club.

Again, I don't really know what you were trying to say here so this is my best guess.

But thats is not all. I musalso want too search mefor a sports and a club to join. But that is not all. I also want to search for a sport and a club to join.

But thats is not all, I must too search mefor sports and a club too. But that is not all, I must search for sports and a club too.

It could be a challaenge but I'm willing to take it. It could be a challenge but I'm willing to take it.

It could be a challaenge, but I takcan handle it. It could be a challenge, but I can handle it.

It could be a challaenge but I'll take it. It could be a challenge but I'll take it.

I amwill be happy to and I can wait . I will be happy to and I can wait.

I am be happy to, and I can't wait . I am happy to, and I can't wait.

I am be happy to and I can wait . I am happy to and I can wait.

How big and great all is and new.

This sentence makes no sense to me so I removed it.

HowIt's all new, and big, and great all is and new. It's all new, and big, and great.

How big, new and great all this and new.is How big, new and great all this is

I hope I make a great first impression . I hope I make a great first impression.

I hope I make a great first impression . I hope I make a great first impression .

I hope I make a great first impression . I hope I make a great first impression.

You could use "I hope to" "I hope that I" or "I hope I" here, but you can't follow "hope" with another verb.