Sept. 22, 2020
The other day I read about the discovery of phosphine at Venus. This could be proof that there is life in Venus.
Phosphine is one indicator of life existence. It is known that phosphine on Earth can only be made by microorganism or in a laboratory with extreme conditions. These extreme conditions, like high temperature and pressure, doesn't exist in rocky planets like Venus, but they can happen in gas planets like Jupiter.
Venus surface is an extreme environment. Toxic clouds, acid rain and a huge greenhouse effect make life on Venus nearly impossible. But, at 60 km altitude, on top of the toxic clouds of Venus, the environmental conditions are different. There, temperature varies between 20ºC and 30ºC, the gravity force is nearly the same as in our planet and it doesn't exist the harsh environment there is on the surface, so life could potentially live there.
Because phosphine is easily destroyed by acid rain, researchers state that something is renewing it. The only possible explanations are either microorganism or a new chemical process totally unknown to us.
In any case, it has been a breakthrough among the science community, and we will get out of doubt in the next few years when probes are sent there. Fortunately, Venus is not that far (for space standards) and, thanks to this discovery, Venus is on the scope right now.
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https://www.nature.com/articles/s41550-020-1174-4
The other day I read about the discovery of phosphine aton Venus.
This could be proof that there is life ion Venus.
It is known that phosphine on Earth can only be made by microorganisms or in a laboratory with extreme conditions.
These extreme conditions, like high temperatures and pressure, doesn't exist in rocky planets like Venus, but they can happen in gas planets like Jupiter.
Venus' surface is an extreme environment.
But, at 60 km of altitude, on top of the toxic clouds of Venus, the environmental conditions are different.
There, temperatures variesy between 20ºC and 30ºC, the gravity force is nearly the same as that in our planet and it doesn't exist the harsh environment there isthere aren't the same harsh environmental conditions found on the surface, so life could potentially live there.
The only possible explanations are either microorganisms or a new chemical process totally unknown to us.
In any case, it has been a breakthrough among the science community, and we will getfind out of doubt in the next few years, when probes are sent there.
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The other day I read about the discovery of phosphine aton Venus.
This could be proof that there is life in Venus.proves that there could be life there,
as Phosphine is one indicator of life existence.
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Toxic clouds, acid rain and a huge greenhouse effect can make life on Venus nearly impossible.
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Fortunately, Venus is not that far (forby space standards) and, thanks to this discovery, Venus is on the scope rightour radar now.
I give youHere is the source of this news if you want to know more.
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very interesting
The other day I read about the discovery of phosphine aton Venus.
This could be proof that there is life ion Venus.
Phosphine is one indicator of lifthe existence of life.
You could also just delete this sentence, since it means the same thing as the previous one.
It is known thatOn Earth, phosphine on Earth can only be made by microorganisms or in a laboratory withunder extreme conditions.
It's correct to say "it is known," but it sounds a little stiff and overly formal. The way I wrote it is more concise.
These extreme conditions, like high temperature and pressure, doesn't exist iare not found on rocky planets like Venus, but they can happen ioccur on gas planets like Jupiter.
VenusThe surface of Venus is an extreme environment.
You could also say "Venus's surface" or "Venus' surface" (technically, both are correct).
Toxic clouds, acid rain and a huge greenhouse effect make life on Venus nearly impossible.
But, at 60 kman altitude of 60 kilometers, on top of the toxic clouds of Venus, the environmental conditions are different.
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I cut out "There," because it's already clear which place you're talking about. I broke the sentence into two parts because it was rather long. "Gravitational force" is the correct phrase. I understand what you mean by "life could potentially live there," but it just sounds a bit redundant/odd.
Because phosphine is easily destroyed by acid rain, researchers statbelieve that something is renewgenerating it.
You can renew an activity, a relationship, an action, a license, a subscription, or a contract. You can regenerate living matter (organs or tissue).
The only possible explanations are eithera microorganism or a newn unknown chemical process totally unknown to us.
In any case, it has been a breakthrough among the science community, and we will get out of doubtlearn more in the next few years when probes are sent thereo Venus.
Fortunately, Venus is not that far (forby space standards) and, thanks to this discovery, Venus is on the scope right now.
I'm not quite sure what the second half of the sentence means, after the end parenthesis.
I can give you the source of this news if you want to knowlearn more.
"If you want to know more" is correct, but to my ear, "if you want to learn more" just sounds a slight bit more natural.
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Good job! I don't know anything about space, so this was really interesting to read.
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The other day I read about the discovery of phosphine aton Venus.
This could be proof that there is life ion Venus.
It is known that phosphine on Earth can only be made by microorganisms or in a laboratory with extreme conditions.
These extreme conditions, like high temperature and pressure, doesn't exist ion rocky planets like Venus, but they can happen ibe found on gas planets like Jupiter.
Think "can be found" sounds more natural and is more correct than "can happen"
Venus' surface is an extreme environment.
Technically you need the apostrophe after Venus (you could also write "Venus's"). Many native speakers get this wrong!
Toxic clouds, acid rain and a huge greenhouse effect make life on Venus nearly impossible.
But, at 60 kman altitude, on top off 60 km, above the toxic clouds of Venus, the environmental conditions are different.
There, temperature varies between 20ºC and 30ºC, the gravityational force is nearly the same as ion our planet, and it doesn't exist ththere isn't the same harsh environment there ias on the surface, so life could potentially liveexist there.
English speakers wouldn't really use "There" to introduce a sentence in the same way as some other languages - the reader will understand from the context of the previous sentence. The other adjustments make this read more naturally
Because phosphine is easily destroyed by acid rain, researchers state that something is renewing it.
The only possible explanations are either microorganisms or a new chemical process totally unknown to us.
In any case, it has beenthis is seen as a breakthrough amongwithin the scientifice community, and we will get out of doubtbecome certain in the next few years whenonce probes are sent there.
I'm not 100% sure what you mean with the first part of the sentence - I've understood that this discovery is seen by scientists as a breakthrough (but other interpretations may be possible!). You can't really say "get out of doubt" - "become certain" or "learn more" work better
Fortunately, Venus is not that far (for spacby the standards of space!) and, thanks to this discovery, Venus is on thein scope right now.
I interpreted the "space standards" comment as somewhat ironic so have added an exclamation mark - you don't need this but it adds a bit more excitement!
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It is known that phosphine on Earth can only be made by microorganism or in a laboratory with extreme conditions. It is known that phosphine on Earth can only be made by microorganisms or in a laboratory with extreme conditions.
It's correct to say "it is known," but it sounds a little stiff and overly formal. The way I wrote it is more concise.
It is known that phosphine on Earth can only be made by microorganisms or in a laboratory with extreme conditions. |
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These extreme conditions, like high temperature and pressure, doesn't exist in rocky planets like Venus, but they can happen in gas planets like Jupiter. These extreme conditions, like high temperature and pressure, do Think "can be found" sounds more natural and is more correct than "can happen" These extreme conditions, like high temperature and pressure, These These extreme conditions, like high temperatures and pressure, do |
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Venus surface is an extreme environment. Venus' surface is an extreme environment. Technically you need the apostrophe after Venus (you could also write "Venus's"). Many native speakers get this wrong!
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Toxic clouds, acid rain and a big greenhouse effect make life on Venus nearly impossible. |
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There, temperature varies between 20ºC and 30ºC, the gravity force is nearly the same as in our planet and it doesn't exist the harsh environment there is on the surface, so life could potentially live there. The English speakers wouldn't really use "There" to introduce a sentence in the same way as some other languages - the reader will understand from the context of the previous sentence. The other adjustments make this read more naturally The I cut out "There," because it's already clear which place you're talking about. I broke the sentence into two parts because it was rather long. "Gravitational force" is the correct phrase. I understand what you mean by "life could potentially live there," but it just sounds a bit redundant/odd. There, temperatures var There, temperatures var |
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The only possible explanations are either microorganism or a new chemical process totally unknown to us. The only possible explanations are either microorganisms or a new chemical process totally unknown to us. The only possible explanations are The only possible explanation when you use either or, the verb remains singular. The only possible explanations are either microorganisms or a new chemical process totally unknown to us. |
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