June 22, 2023
Vehicles
At the moment, people are getting used to public vehicles mainly used for transportation. / Nowadays, it is said that public vehicles are mainly used for transportation. There are two types of vehicles that they often use: 2-wheel vehicles and 4-wheel vehicles. About 2-wheel, they use motorbikes / motorcycles to drive anywhere because it is one of the most popular vehicles used in any location: city, countryside, etc. Besides, if they want to use vehicles to travel and carry or they just need a vehicle that is more beautiful and more convenient if they can afford it, they will use cars. On the other hand, both traditional motorcycles and cars have the most important problem is the burning of petrol. It is one of the issues that cause air pollution due to CO2 emissions. Therefore, thanks to the development of science and technology, now we can use electric vehicles instead of petrol. Electric bikes and cars are on the rise, it brings more advantages than other traditional vehicles. Moreover, if a person doesn’t have money to afford it, they can buy a bike to cycle because it is both good for their health and environmentally friendly to the earth.
Vehicles
At the moment, people are getting used to public vehicles mainly used for transportation.
/ Nowadays, it is said that public vehicles are mainly used for transportation.
There are two types of vehicles that they often use: 2- wheel vehicles and 4- wheel vehicles.
Who is "they" in this journal entry?
AboutRegarding 2- wheel vehicles, they use motorbikes / motorcycles to drive anywhere because it is one of the most popular vehicles used in any location:, whether that be city, countryside, etc.
Besides, if they wanted to use vehicles to travel and carry heavy things or they just need a vehicle that is more beautiful and more convenient and if they canould afford it, they willould use cars.
On the other hand, both traditional motorcycles and cars have the most important problem iswhen it comes to vehicles, the burning of petrol.
It is one of the issues that cause air pollution due to CO2 emissions.
Therefore, thanks to the development of science and technology, now we can use electric vehicles instead of petrol.
Electric bikes and cars are on the rise, it brings more advantages than other traditional vehicles.
Moreover, if a person doesn’t have money to afford it, they can buy a bike to cycle because it is both good for their health and environmentally friendly to the earth.
June 23, 2023
There are two types of vehicles that they often use: 2- wheel vehicles and 4- wheel vehicles.
I mean "They" in this journal stand for "people". Is it doesn't OK ?
June 23, 2023
Thanks for your corrections! :)
June 28, 2023
I mean "They" in this journal stand for "people". Is it doesn't OK ?
*I mean "they" as in "people". Is that not ok?
It might be better to use "people" again. Eg. "There are two types of vehicles that people often use: 2- wheel vehicles and 4- wheel vehicles."
June 28, 2023
*I mean "they" as in "people". Is that not ok? It might be better to use "people" again. Eg. "There are two types of vehicles that people often use: 2- wheel vehicles and 4- wheel vehicles."
Ah ok, I'll notice it. Thank you very much! :)
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At the moment, people are getting used to public vehicles mainly used for transportation. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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There are two types of vehicles that they often use: 2-wheel vehicles and 4-wheel vehicles. There are two types of vehicles that they often use: 2 Who is "they" in this journal entry? |
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About 2-wheel, they use motorbikes / motorcycles to drive anywhere because it is one of the most popular vehicles used in any location: city, countryside, etc.
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Besides, if they want to use vehicles to travel and carry or they just need a vehicle that is more beautiful and more convenient if they can afford it, they will use cars. Besides, if they wanted to use vehicles to travel and carry heavy things or they just need a vehicle that is |
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On the other hand, both traditional motorcycles and cars have the most important problem is the burning of petrol. On the other hand, both traditional motorcycles and cars have the most important problem |
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It is one of the issues that cause air pollution due to CO2 emissions. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Therefore, thanks to the development of science and technology, now we can use electric vehicles instead of petrol. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Electric bikes and cars are on the rise, it brings more advantages than other traditional vehicles. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Moreover, if a person doesn’t have money to afford it, they can buy a bike to cycle because it is both good for their health and environmentally friendly to the earth. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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At the moment / Nowadays, people are getting used to public vehicles mainly used for transportation. |
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/ Nowadays, it is said that public vehicles are mainly used for transportation. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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