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Scarlett_Father

Nov. 25, 2022

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Vegetarians

I am not a vegetarian. I eat meat or fish every day, I can not imagine what I will be like if only eat vegetables.
We know that true monks are not allowed to eat meat, they can not kill living creatures. I heard about a famous monk named HaiDeng who specialized in Kungfu and died in his Seventies.
Because he was a martial art master and well-known in China, some doctors made a medical check on his body in order to find the reason why he was not living longevity as expected.
Surprisingly, his death was due to malnutrition and anemia.

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I am not a vegetarian.

I eat meat or fish every day, and I can not imagine what I willit would be like ifto only eat vegetables.

You can also say, "I can't imagine what it would be like if I only ate vegetables."👍

We know that true monks are not allowed to eat meat, because they can not kill living creatures.

I heard about a famous monk named Hai Deng who specialized in Kukongfu, and died in his Sseventies.

Because he was a martial art master and well-known in China, some doctors made a medical checkperformed an autopsy on his body in order to find the reason why he was not living as longevity as expected.

If you want to use the word 'longevity', you say also say "...in order to determine why his longevity didn't last."👍

Surprisingly, his death was due to malnutrition and anemia.

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So interesting! 我会去查 Hai Deng^^

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Scarlett_Father

Nov. 25, 2022

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Thanks for your correction :)
Here's a small description about him. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hai_Deng

Vegetarians


I am not a vegetarian.


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I eat meat or fish every day, I can not imagine what I will be like if only eat vegetables.


I eat meat or fish every day, and I can not imagine what I willit would be like ifto only eat vegetables.

You can also say, "I can't imagine what it would be like if I only ate vegetables."👍

We know that true monks are not allowed to eat meat, they can not kill living creatures.


We know that true monks are not allowed to eat meat, because they can not kill living creatures.

I heard about a famous monk named HaiDeng who specialized in Kungfu and died in his Seventies.


I heard about a famous monk named Hai Deng who specialized in Kukongfu, and died in his Sseventies.

Because he was a martial art master and well-known in China, some doctors made a medical check on his body in order to find the reason why he was not living longevity as expected.


Because he was a martial art master and well-known in China, some doctors made a medical checkperformed an autopsy on his body in order to find the reason why he was not living as longevity as expected.

If you want to use the word 'longevity', you say also say "...in order to determine why his longevity didn't last."👍

Surprisingly, his death was due to malnutrition and anemia.


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