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prisci

Feb. 26, 2022

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A vegetarian is a human there not eat meat and not fish. Even thought the animals also eat meat. Vegetarian feed to healthly with fruits and vegetable. They dislike meat because it is for them wrong and evil. Something make that also because they are overweight or a eating disorder. Regularly eat them also especially food how egg bio milk cheese and tea. Her habits are in main fruit and bio-food.

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vVegetarian

A vegetarian is a human thereperson who does not eat meat and notor fish.

Even thought the animals also eat meat.,

this is not a complete sentence so I'm combining it with the next sentence.

Vvegetarians feed tol it is more healthly withto eat fruits and vegetables.

"fruit" is used for plural (except in rare occasions) but "vegetables" needs an "s". Doesn't make sense, but that's how it is....

They dislike meat because it is for themthey feel it is wrong and evil.

Something make that alsoimes people are also vegetarians because they are overweight or ahave an eating disorder.

RVegularly eat them also especially food howetarians regularly eat eggs, bio milk, cheese, and tea.

Her habits are in mainShe usually eats fruit and bio-food.

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Way to try. You've got to start somewhere and this was a good, ambitious attempt. I am not sure I understood the last two sentences, but I gave them a grammatically correct alternative at least! Keep up, you'll learn!

A vegetarian is a human there noperson who doesn't eat meat and notor fish.

Es ist möglich, hier "human" zu sagen, aber nur, wenn Sie die Tatsache betonen wollen, dass der Mensch eine besondere Art unter anderen ist. Das ist vielleicht das, was Sie beabsichtigen. Aber es wäre viel typischer, hier einfach "person" zu sagen.

Even thought the animals also eat meat.

Der definite Artikel muss hier nicht verwendet werden. Im Englischen wird der definite Artikel ("the") im Allgemeinen nicht zur Beschreibung abstrakter Kategorien verwendet. "The animals" würde sich nur auf eine bestimmte Gruppe von Tieren beziehen, im Gegensatz zu der Vorstellung von allen Tieren im Allgemeinen.

Vegetarian feed toeat a healthly diet with fruits and vegetables.

"To feed" = "um jemand anderem Essen zu geben."

They dislike meat because it is for them, to them, it is wrong and evil.

Something make that also people also choose a vegetarian diet because they are overweight or ahave an eating disorder.

Ich bin mir nicht sicher, ob es das ist, was du hier sagen wolltest oder nicht. Ich spreche kein Deutsch, aber die Version, die ich hier geschrieben habe, wird ins Deutsche mit "Manche Menschen entscheiden sich auch für eine vegetarische Ernährung, weil sie übergewichtig sind oder unter einer Essstörung leiden" zurückübersetzt.

RThey regularly eat them also especially food how egg bioalso eat foods such as eggs, organic milk, cheese and tea.

Her habits are in mainTheir diet consists mainly of fruit and bio-organic foods.

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Sie leisten hier gute Arbeit. Machen Sie weiter so! (Anmerkung: Ich spreche kein Deutsch. Ich habe einen Online-Übersetzer für meine Kommentare benutzt. Ich entschuldige mich, wenn einige meiner Kommentare keinen Sinn ergeben).

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A vegetarian is a human therewho does not eat meat and notor fish.

I don't think "human" is the best word here. One possible replacement is "person." "Human" defends itself when used in opposition to "animal" and if this is your intention, try connecting the two first sentences e.g.: "A vegetarian is a human who does not eat meat or fish, even though the animals eat meat themselves." The problem with this approach is that humans are animals after all, and some animals are not carnivorous.

Even thought the animals also eat meat.

Try: "Most animals eat meat."

Vegetarian feed to healthly with fruits and vegetables eat fruits and vegetables (in order to stay healthy).

"Healthy diet of a vegetarian consists of fruits and vegetables."

They dislike meat because it is for them wrong and evil to eat it.

As is, the sentence could mean that meat is wrong and evil.

Something make that alsoimes they do not eat meat because they are overweight or ahave an eating disorder.

Regularly eat them also especially food how egg bio milk cheese and tea.

"They regularly eat other products, such as organic eggs, milk, cheese and tea."

Her habits are in main fruit and bio-food.

This sentence doesn't add anything new. Some summarizing statement would be nice, but the actual wording depends of the intended meaning.

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jogeumman

Feb. 26, 2022

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Vegetarian feed to healthly with fruits and vegetables eat fruits and vegetables (in order to stay healthy).

“The healthy diet of a vegetarian consists of fruits and vegetables.”

vVegetarian

It’s normal to capitalise titles.

A vegetarian is a human theresomeone who does not eat meat and not fish.

Really it should read “A vegetarian is someone who doesn’t eat meat.” because seafood is also meat.

Even thought the animals also eat meat.

Vegetarian feed to healthly with fruits and vegetable.

This is unclear. Maybe you mean, “Vegetarians feel healthy by eating fruits and vegetables.”

Or “Vegetarians eat healthily with a diet of fruits and vegetables.”

They dislike meat because it is, for them, it is wrong and evil.

Not all vegetarians feel this way. For example, some may choose the diet for environmental reasons.

Something make that also because they are overweight or a eating disorder.

Also unclear…

Maybe, “Some people become vegetarians because they are overweight or have a eating disorder.”

Regularly eat them also especially food how egg bio milk cheese and tea.

I’m sorry, this is very unclear.

Maybe, “They regularly also eat dairy products, such as eggs, cheese and milk.”

(By the way, this is a little misleading. All vegetarians are different and it is hard to generalise. I would suggest this sentence instead:

“They tend to also eat dairy products, or at least accept them.”

Her habits are in main fruit and bio-food.

Unclear. I’m sorry, I don’t understand anything in this sentence makes sense… “Her” is confusing and unnecessary here.

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jogeumman

Feb. 26, 2022

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Vegetarian feed to healthly with fruits and vegetable.

“The healthy diet of a vegetarian consists of fruits and vegetables.”

vegetarian


vVegetarian

It’s normal to capitalise titles.

vVegetarian

A vegetarian is a human there not eat meat and not fish.


A vegetarian is a human theresomeone who does not eat meat and not fish.

Really it should read “A vegetarian is someone who doesn’t eat meat.” because seafood is also meat.

A vegetarian is a human therewho does not eat meat and notor fish.

I don't think "human" is the best word here. One possible replacement is "person." "Human" defends itself when used in opposition to "animal" and if this is your intention, try connecting the two first sentences e.g.: "A vegetarian is a human who does not eat meat or fish, even though the animals eat meat themselves." The problem with this approach is that humans are animals after all, and some animals are not carnivorous.

A vegetarian is a human there noperson who doesn't eat meat and notor fish.

Es ist möglich, hier "human" zu sagen, aber nur, wenn Sie die Tatsache betonen wollen, dass der Mensch eine besondere Art unter anderen ist. Das ist vielleicht das, was Sie beabsichtigen. Aber es wäre viel typischer, hier einfach "person" zu sagen.

A vegetarian is a human thereperson who does not eat meat and notor fish.

Even thought the animals also eat meat.


Even thought the animals also eat meat.

Even thought the animals also eat meat.

Try: "Most animals eat meat."

Even thought the animals also eat meat.

Der definite Artikel muss hier nicht verwendet werden. Im Englischen wird der definite Artikel ("the") im Allgemeinen nicht zur Beschreibung abstrakter Kategorien verwendet. "The animals" würde sich nur auf eine bestimmte Gruppe von Tieren beziehen, im Gegensatz zu der Vorstellung von allen Tieren im Allgemeinen.

Even thought the animals also eat meat.,

this is not a complete sentence so I'm combining it with the next sentence.

Vegetarian feed to healthly with fruits and vegetable.


Vegetarian feed to healthly with fruits and vegetable.

This is unclear. Maybe you mean, “Vegetarians feel healthy by eating fruits and vegetables.” Or “Vegetarians eat healthily with a diet of fruits and vegetables.”

Vegetarian feed to healthly with fruits and vegetables eat fruits and vegetables (in order to stay healthy).

"Healthy diet of a vegetarian consists of fruits and vegetables."

Vegetarian feed toeat a healthly diet with fruits and vegetables.

"To feed" = "um jemand anderem Essen zu geben."

Vvegetarians feed tol it is more healthly withto eat fruits and vegetables.

"fruit" is used for plural (except in rare occasions) but "vegetables" needs an "s". Doesn't make sense, but that's how it is....

They dislike meat because it is for them wrong and evil.


They dislike meat because it is, for them, it is wrong and evil.

Not all vegetarians feel this way. For example, some may choose the diet for environmental reasons.

They dislike meat because it is for them wrong and evil to eat it.

As is, the sentence could mean that meat is wrong and evil.

They dislike meat because it is for them, to them, it is wrong and evil.

They dislike meat because it is for themthey feel it is wrong and evil.

Something make that also because they are overweight or a eating disorder.


Something make that also because they are overweight or a eating disorder.

Also unclear… Maybe, “Some people become vegetarians because they are overweight or have a eating disorder.”

Something make that alsoimes they do not eat meat because they are overweight or ahave an eating disorder.

Something make that also people also choose a vegetarian diet because they are overweight or ahave an eating disorder.

Ich bin mir nicht sicher, ob es das ist, was du hier sagen wolltest oder nicht. Ich spreche kein Deutsch, aber die Version, die ich hier geschrieben habe, wird ins Deutsche mit "Manche Menschen entscheiden sich auch für eine vegetarische Ernährung, weil sie übergewichtig sind oder unter einer Essstörung leiden" zurückübersetzt.

Something make that alsoimes people are also vegetarians because they are overweight or ahave an eating disorder.

Regularly eat them also especially food how egg bio milk cheese and tea.


Regularly eat them also especially food how egg bio milk cheese and tea.

I’m sorry, this is very unclear. Maybe, “They regularly also eat dairy products, such as eggs, cheese and milk.” (By the way, this is a little misleading. All vegetarians are different and it is hard to generalise. I would suggest this sentence instead: “They tend to also eat dairy products, or at least accept them.”

Regularly eat them also especially food how egg bio milk cheese and tea.

"They regularly eat other products, such as organic eggs, milk, cheese and tea."

RThey regularly eat them also especially food how egg bioalso eat foods such as eggs, organic milk, cheese and tea.

RVegularly eat them also especially food howetarians regularly eat eggs, bio milk, cheese, and tea.

Her habits are in main fruit and bio-food.


Her habits are in main fruit and bio-food.

Unclear. I’m sorry, I don’t understand anything in this sentence makes sense… “Her” is confusing and unnecessary here.

Her habits are in main fruit and bio-food.

This sentence doesn't add anything new. Some summarizing statement would be nice, but the actual wording depends of the intended meaning.

Her habits are in mainTheir diet consists mainly of fruit and bio-organic foods.

Her habits are in mainShe usually eats fruit and bio-food.

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