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Scarlett_Father

Aug. 1, 2023

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Vegetables in My Gardens

My father-in-law planted some seasonal vegetables in my backyard. The biggest advantage is that we can enjoy the freshest vegetable at any time, this made us spend less time in local supermarket.

As scorching weather approached, they moved to a comparatively comfortable place to avoid high temperatures. So, the vegetable came to my shoulders. There are pumpkins, winter melons, tomatoes, and cowpeas flourishing in the garden. They all try to brace the sunshine and absorb nutrition for themselves. Nature has arranged everything for all of us. My job was devised to water them.

Now, when I am typing on the computer for this picturesque living scene. I am thinking about all the plants in the garden, and the bees buzzing around the flowers, all are for their lives and generations.

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Scarlett_Father

Aug. 2, 2023

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Thank you for your informative corrections! :-)

Vegetables in My Gardens

My father-in-law planted some seasonal vegetables in my backyard.

The biggest advantage is that we can enjoy the freshest vegetables at any time, t. This madelets us spend less time in the local supermarket.

I think you mean it “lets us” (allows us to), not “made us” (forced us to).

As scorching weather approached, they moved to a comparativelymore comfortable place to avoid the high temperatures.

So, responsibility for the vegetable came tos fell on my shoulders.

There are pumpkins, winter melons, tomatoes, and cowpeas flourishing in the garden.

They all try to embrace the sunshine and absorb nutrition for themselves.

Nature has arranged everything for all of us.

My job was devised to water them.

Now, whenas I am typing on the computer for, describing this picturesque living scene., I am…

I am thinking about all the plants in the garden, and the bees buzzing around the flowers, all are working for their (own) lives and future generations.

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Scarlett_Father

Aug. 2, 2023

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Thank you for your corrections! I incorrectly used the word "brace" and "embrace".

Vegetables in My Gardens

My father-in-law planted some seasonal vegetables in my backyard.

The biggest advantage is that we can enjoy the freshest vegetables at any time, this made us spend less time in the local supermarket.

As scorching weather approached, they moved to a comparatively comfortable place to avoid high temperatures.

So, the vegetable came to my shoulders.

Grammatically correct but I have no idea what this means. Is it an idiom from your native language?

There are pumpkins, winter melons, tomatoes, and cowpeas flourishing in the garden.

They all try to brace the sunshine and absorb [nutrition/nutrients] for themselves.

Either is valid, but I would go for nutrients here.

Nature has arranged everything for all of us.

My job was devised to water them.

Now, when I am typing on the computer forabout this picturesque living scene.

I am thinking about all the plants in the garden, and the bees buzzing around the flowers, all arethey all do this for their whole lives and future generations will continue this.

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Scarlett_Father

Aug. 2, 2023

1

Thank you for your corrections! :-)

Vegetables in My Gardens


Vegetables in My Gardens

Vegetables in My Gardens

My father-in-law planted some seasonal vegetables in my backyard.


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The biggest advantage is that we can enjoy the freshest vegetable at any time, this made us spend less time in local supermarket.


The biggest advantage is that we can enjoy the freshest vegetables at any time, this made us spend less time in the local supermarket.

The biggest advantage is that we can enjoy the freshest vegetables at any time, t. This madelets us spend less time in the local supermarket.

I think you mean it “lets us” (allows us to), not “made us” (forced us to).

The biggesmost significant advantage is that we can enjoy the freshest vegetables at any time, twhis made usch allows us to spend less time in the local supermarket.

As scorching weather approached, they moved to a comparatively comfortable place to avoid high temperatures.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

As scorching weather approached, they moved to a comparativelymore comfortable place to avoid the high temperatures.

As scorchinghot weather approached, they movrelocated to a comparativelymore comfortable placelocation to avoid high temperatures.the heat.¶

So, the vegetable came to my shoulders.


So, the vegetable came to my shoulders.

Grammatically correct but I have no idea what this means. Is it an idiom from your native language?

So, responsibility for the vegetable came tos fell on my shoulders.

So,As a result, the responsibility of the vegetable came tos landed on my shoulders.

There are pumpkins, winter melons, tomatoes, and cowpeas flourishing in the garden.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

There are garden is flouring with pumpkins, winter melons, tomatoes, and cowpeas flourishing in the garden.

They all try to brace the sunshine and absorb nutrition for themselves.


They all try to brace the sunshine and absorb [nutrition/nutrients] for themselves.

Either is valid, but I would go for nutrients here.

They all try to embrace the sunshine and absorb nutrition for themselves.

They all try to bracere all attempting to enjoy the sunshine and absorb nutrition for themselves.

Nature has arranged everything for all of us.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Nature has arrangprovided everything for us all of us.

My job was devised to water them.


My job was devised to water them.

My job was devised to water them.

My job was devisedIt was my job to water them.

Now, when I am typing on the computer for this picturesque living scene.


Now, when I am typing on the computer forabout this picturesque living scene.

Now, whenas I am typing on the computer for, describing this picturesque living scene., I am…

Now, when I aI'm typing on the computer for this picturesque living scene.gorgeous living situation.¶

I am thinking about all the plants in the garden, and the bees buzzing around the flowers, all are for their lives and generations.


I am thinking about all the plants in the garden, and the bees buzzing around the flowers, all arethey all do this for their whole lives and future generations will continue this.

I am thinking about all the plants in the garden, and the bees buzzing around the flowers, all are working for their (own) lives and future generations.

I am thinking about allAll of the plants in the garden, ands well as the bees buzzing around the flowers, all are for their lives and future generations.

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