May 8, 2025
When I was a child in a small village, living conditions were very poor. Villagers didn’t have much money.
If they wanted to earn some, they had to sell their grains, but this left them with insufficient grains for their own consumption.
Also, they needed to eat vegetables. In order to save money, every family had a vegetable garden.
The vegetable gardens in my village were located to the west, separated from the village by only a moat.
These square-shaped gardens were divided into smaller plots for each family. Each garden had a water well for watering the vegetables.
People planted various vegetables like green onions, eggplants, green vegetables, peppers, radishes, carrots, Chinese cabbages, potatoes, tomatoes, leeks, celery, lettuce, small melons and so on.
Every well was equipped with a simple water-lifting mechanism, which consisted of three wooden sticks.
One thick wooden stick was firmly rooted underground. The middle of another wooden stick was horizontally linked to the top of the thick one.
A counterweight was fixed on one end of the horizontal stick, while the other end was connected to the third vertical stick. At the lower end of this third stick was a bucket.
When fetching water, people first pulled the third vertical stick down into the well and then lifted the bucket out.
When pulling the third stick down, they had to exert a bit more force due to the counterweight, but lifting the bucket up was relatively easy because of it.
Thanks to these gardens, we never lacked fresh vegetables despite our poverty. Additionally, the fertilizers we used for the vegetables were all organic, so the vegetables were truly healthy.
I haven’t lived in my home village for decades. Now I buy vegetables from supermarkets.
It’s said that some vegetables nowadays may contain pesticide residues, ripening agents, preservatives and so on.
However, I can do nothing about this as I lost my vegetable garden after becoming a government employee.
Vegetable Gardens
When I was a child in a small village, living conditions were very poor.
Villagers didn’t have much money.
If they wanted to earn some, they had to sell their grains, but this left them with insufficient grains for their own consumption.
Also, they needed to eat vegetables.
In order to save money, every family had a vegetable garden.
The vegetable gardens in my village were located to the west, separated from the village by only a moat.
These square-shaped gardens were divided into smaller plots for each family.
Each garden had a water well for watering the vegetables.
People planted various vegetables like green onions, eggplants, green vegetables, peppers, radishes, carrots, Chinese cabbages, potatoes, tomatoes, leeks, celery, lettuce, small melons and so on.
Every well was equipped with a simple water-lifting mechanism, which consisted of three wooden sticks.
One thick wooden stick was firmly rooted underground.
The middle of another wooden stick was horizontally linked to the top of the thick one.
A counterweight was fixed on one end of the horizontal stick, while the other end was connected to the third vertical stick.
At the lower end of this third stick was a bucket.
When fetching water, people first pulled the third vertical stick down into the well and then lifted the bucket out.
When pulling the third stick down, they had to exert a bit more force due to the counterweight, but lifting the bucket up was relatively easy because of it.
Thanks to these gardens, we never lacked fresh vegetables despite our poverty.
Additionally, the fertilizers we used for the vegetables were all organic, so the vegetables were truly healthy.
I haven’t lived in my home village for decades.
Now I buy vegetables from supermarkets.
It’s said that some vegetables nowadays may contain pesticide residues, ripening agents, preservatives and so on.
However, I can do nothing about this as I lost my vegetable garden after becoming a government employee.
When I was a child in a small village, the living conditions were very poor.
VThe villagers didn’t have much money.
If they wanted to earn some, they had to sell their grains, but this left them with insufficient grainsfood for their own consumption.
'grains' aren't really used this way in English.
The vegetable gardens in my village were located to the west, separated from the village by only a moat.
'moat' makes native speakers thing of a moat around a castle. Unless your village deliberately surrounded the vegetable gardens with a trench filled with water, I would probably call it a 'creek' or 'trench' depending.
Each garden had a water well for watering the vegetables.
People planted various vegetables like green onions, eggplants, green vegetables, peppers, radishes, carrots, Chinese cabbages, potatoes, tomatoes, leeks, celery, lettuce, small melons and so on.
green vegetables (like spinach, lettuce, etc.) are usually referred to as just greens
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Vegetable Gardens
When I was a child in a small village, living conditions were very poor.
Villagers didn’t have much money.
If they wanted to earn some, they had to sell their grains, but this left them with an insufficient grainsamount for their own consumption.
I would say 'grain' singular. It is uncountable here.
Also, they needed to eat vegetables.
In order to save money, every family had a vegetable garden.
The vegetable gardens in my village were located to the west, separated from the village by only by a moat.
These square-shaped gardens were divided into smaller plots for each family.
Each garden had a water well for watering the vegetables.
You don't need to say 'water' it is obvious from the context.
People planted various vegetables like green onions, eggplants, green vegetables, peppers, radishes, carrots, Chinese cabbages, potatoes, tomatoes, leeks, celery, lettuce, small melons and so on.
Every well was equipped with a simple water-lifting mechanism, which consisted of three wooden sticks.
One thick wooden stick was firmly rooted underin the ground.
'underground' would suggest the whole thing was buried.
The middle of another wooden stick was horizontally linked to the top of the thick one.
A counterweight was fixed on one end of the horizontal stick, while the other end was connected to the third vertical stick.
At the lower end of this third stick was a bucket.
When fetching water, people first pulled the third vertical stick down into the well and then lifted the bucket out.
When pulling the third stick down, they had to exert a bit more force due to the counterweight, but lifting the bucket up was relatively easy because of it.
Thanks to these gardens, we never lacked fresh vegetables despite our poverty.
Additionally, the fertilizers we used for the vegetables were all organic, so the vegetables were truly healthy.
I haven’t lived in my home village for decades.
Now I buy vegetables from supermarkets.
It’s said that some vegetables nowadays may contain pesticide residues, ripening agents, preservatives and so on.
However, I can do nothing about this as I lost my vegetable garden after becoming a government employee.
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Good work. You have explained the well mechanism very well. Excuse the pun.
Vegetable Gardens
When I was a child in a small villageIn the small village where I grew up, living conditions were very poor.
"When I was a child" does mean "When I was young" but it does not sound correct when "in a small village" is added it to it.
You could also write "When I was a child, living conditions were very poor in the small village where I lived."
Villagers didn’t have much money.
If they wanted to earn some, they had to sell their grains, but this left them with insufficient grains for their own consumption.
"Grain" is already plural. "Grains" is used to talk about multiple types.
Also, they needed to eat vegetables.
In order to save money, every family had a vegetable garden.
The vegetable gardens in my village were located to the west of the village, separated from the village by only a moat.
Both "to the west of the village" or "in the west" are okay. "To the west" on its own sounds a bit awkward here.
These square-shaped gardens were divided into smaller plots for eachthe different familyies.
"square-shaped" is not incorrect, but it sounds a bit redundant.
"smaller plots, one for each family" is also correct.
Each garden had a water well for watering the vegetables.
People planted various vegetables like green onions, eggplants, green vegetables, peppers, radishes, carrots, Chinese cabbages, potatoes, tomatoes, leeks, celery, lettuce, small melons and so on.
Every well was equipped with a simple water-lifting mechanism, which consisted of three wooden sticks.
The middle of another wooden stick was horizontally linkattached to the top of the thick one.
"linked" communicates what you're saying, but sounds awkward. It sounds too vague because there are a lot of ways in which things can be linked, both literally and metaphorically.
A counterweight was fixed on one end of the horizontal stick, while the other end was connected to the third vertical stick.
At the lower end of this third stick was a bucket.
When fetching water, people first pulled the third vertical stick down into the well and then lifted the bucket out.
When pulling the third stick down, they had to exert a bit moreof extra force due to the counterweight, but lifting the bucket up was relatively easy because of it.
"more" should be used to compare multiple things, for example "they had to exert a bit more force than if they didn't use the counterweight". The way you used it is often used when speaking informally, though.
Thanks to these gardens, we never lacked fresh vegetables despite our poverty.
Additionally, the fertilizers we used for the vegetables were all organic, so the vegetables were truly healthy.
I haven’t lived in my home village for decades.
Now I buy vegetables from supermarkets.
It’s said that some vegetables nowadays may contain pesticide residues, ripening agents, preservatives and so on.
However, I can do nothing about this as I lost my vegetable garden after becoming a government employee.
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When I was a child in a small village, living conditions were very poor.
"When I was a child" does mean "When I was young" but it does not sound correct when "in a small village" is added it to it. You could also write "When I was a child, living conditions were very poor in the small village where I lived." This sentence has been marked as perfect! When I was a child in a small village, the living conditions were very poor. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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If they wanted to earn some, they had to sell their grains, but this left them with insufficient grains for their own consumption. If they wanted to earn some, they had to sell their grain "Grain" is already plural. "Grains" is used to talk about multiple types. If they wanted to earn some, they had to sell their grain I would say 'grain' singular. It is uncountable here. If they wanted to earn some, they had to sell their grains, but this left them with insufficient 'grains' aren't really used this way in English. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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