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alexwong2164

Oct. 9, 2020

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Vegan Green KFC not here


Some people already hate this type of food.


They say the chicken is not a real chicken...?


I am not sure but I still like it.

Anyway, but this time the new product did scare me a little.


So, you still order chicken form the manual.


But this time they are not using chicken meat.

They use kind of meat create by vegetables.

The best (or worst) part is if I am not telling you about this information.


You will still think you are eating the same chicken as before.

I watch some YouTube video now is quite popular in China, US but not here.

Corrections

Vegan Green KFC not here

Some people already hate this type of food.

They say the chicken is not a real chicken...?

I am not sure but I still like it.

Anyways, but this time their new product did scare me a little.

So, yYou still order chicken forom the maenual.

I'm not sure what you meant here... I'm assuming manual was supposed to be menu

But this timenow they are not using chicken meat.

They useare using a kind of meat created by vegetables.

You need to match verb tense with the previous sentence. Instead of my previous correction, you could write these two sentences:
But now they don't use chicken meat. They use a kind of meat created by vegetables.

The best (or worst) part is if I am nodidn't telling you about this informationyou would still think you are eating chicken, just like before.

You can't split these sentences, they need to be together

You will still think you are eating the same chicken as before.

I combined this with the previous sentence

I watched some YouTube video now is. It's quite popular in China, and the US, but not here.

Vegan Green KFC not here


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Some people already hate this type of food.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

They say the chicken is not a real chicken...?


They say the chicken is not a real chicken...?

I am not sure but I still like it.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Anyway, but this time the new product did scare me a little.


Anyways, but this time their new product did scare me a little.

So, you still order chicken form the manual.


So, yYou still order chicken forom the maenual.

I'm not sure what you meant here... I'm assuming manual was supposed to be menu

But this time they are not using chicken meat.


But this timenow they are not using chicken meat.

They use kind of meat create by vegetables.


They useare using a kind of meat created by vegetables.

You need to match verb tense with the previous sentence. Instead of my previous correction, you could write these two sentences: But now they don't use chicken meat. They use a kind of meat created by vegetables.

The best (or worst) part is if I am not telling you about this information.


The best (or worst) part is if I am nodidn't telling you about this informationyou would still think you are eating chicken, just like before.

You can't split these sentences, they need to be together

You will still think you are eating the same chicken as before.


You will still think you are eating the same chicken as before.

I combined this with the previous sentence

I watch some YouTube video now is quite popular in China, US but not here.


I watched some YouTube video now is. It's quite popular in China, and the US, but not here.

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