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I had a toothache for the past two days. It hurt me all night and it was so hard to bear it so I went to the hospital early in the morning. The dentist said that my toothache was terrible, and it needed a long time to treat, and I should go to the hospital three or four times over half a year. She also told me to take medicine three times a day and not to eat spicy foods. It's really a bad news to me, because I love spicy foods so much. As expected, I will be in the trenches in the following days.
Toothache
I had a toothache for the past two days.
It hurt me all night and it was so hard to bear it sothat I went to the hospital early in the morning.
It hurt all night and was so hard to bear that I went to the hospital early in the morning.
The dentist said that my toothache was terrible, and it needed a long time to treat, and I should go to the hospital three or four times over half a year.
The dentist said that my toothache was terrible, it needed a long time to treat, and I should go to the hospital three or four times over half a year.
While "hospital" is technically fine, I assume you meant "dentist". Usually I say "the dentist" to refer both to the dentist himself as well as the physical location. Also "dentist's office"
She also told me to take medicine three times a day and not to eat spicy foods. She also told me to take medicine three times a day and not to eat spicy foods.
I think "not to" is fine but I'd say "to not".
It's really a bad news to me, because I love spicy foods so much.
It's really bad news to me, because I love spicy foods so much.
As expected, I will be in the trenches in the following days.
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Toothache This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I had a toothache for the past two days. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It hurt me all night and it was so hard to bear it so I went to the hospital early in the morning.
It hurt |
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The dentist said that my toothache was terrible, and it needed a long time to treat, and I should go to the hospital three or four times over half a year.
The dentist said that my toothache was terrible, While "hospital" is technically fine, I assume you meant "dentist". Usually I say "the dentist" to refer both to the dentist himself as well as the physical location. Also "dentist's office" |
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She also told me to take medicine three times a day and not to eat spicy foods. She also told me to take medicine three times a day and not to eat spicy foods. She also told me to take medicine three times a day and not to eat spicy foods. I think "not to" is fine but I'd say "to not". |
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It's really a bad news to me, because I love spicy foods so much.
It's really |
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As expected, I will be in the trenches in the following days. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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