Many friends have told me that it's really cool, so I am really excited. Many friends have told me that it's really cool, so I am really excited.

There's also a new Avatar which will be released in 2 days, so I think we will also watch ithat. There's also a new Avatar which will be released in 2 days, so I think we will also watch that.

You just mentioned it, so "that" works better than "it".

I will celebrate Christmass with them. I will celebrate Christmas with them.

I will celebrate Christmass with them. I will celebrate Christmas with them.

This year, it's a bit weird because I won't have any préesents, only money. This year, it's a bit weird because I won't have any presents, only money.

This year, it's will be a bit weird because I won't have anyill give money instead of préesent, only moneys. This year, it will be a bit weird because I will give money instead of presents.

This year, it's a bit weird because I won't have any préesents, only money. This year, it's a bit weird because I won't have any presents, only money.

And that's my fault, I didn't have any ideas. And that's my fault, I didn't have any ideas.

And that'Which is my fault, because I didn't have any gift idea.s Which is my fault, because I didn't have any gift ideas

The second week of Christmas, I'll be at home. The second week of Christmas, I'll be at home.

I'll see friends and forcelebrate the new year, I'll celebrate it with friends so it' with them which will be funny. I'll see friends and celebrate the new year with them which will be fun.

Presumably it will be funny as well but probably meant to say fun :)

I'll see friends and for the new year, I'll celebrate itcelebrate the new year with friends so it'which will be funny. I'll celebrate the new year with friends which will be fun.

This sentence is a little awkward though the grammer is technically correct. Funny does not mean fun, it refers to something humorous.

I'll see my friends, and for the new year, I'll celebrate it with friendsthen I'll celebrate New Years with them too, so it'll be funny. I'll see my friends, and then I'll celebrate New Years with them too, so it'll be fun.

"fun" is both a noun and an adjective :) "funny" has two meanings: (1) weird, (2) something that makes you laugh

I will take advantage ofuse the holidays withto just resting sometimes, because I amhave been pretty tired in récent daysrecently. I will use the holidays to just rest sometimes, because I have been pretty tired recently.

I will take advantage of the holidays withby just resting sometimes, because I amhave been pretty tired in réecent days. I will take advantage of the holidays by just resting sometimes, because I have been pretty tired in recent days.

I will take advantage of the holidays withto just resting sometimes, because I am've been pretty tired in récentrecently / these days. I will take advantage of the holidays to just rest sometimes, because I've been pretty tired recently / these days.

I think it's because of the accumulation of pressure with the tests,exams and doing sports withat the gym. I think it's because of the accumulation of pressure with exams and doing sports at the gym.

I think it's the accumulation of pressure with the tests, sports with the gymests and sports. I think it's the accumulation of pressure with tests and sports.

I think it's the accumulation of pressure withfrom the tests, and sports withat the gym. I think it's the accumulation of pressure from the tests, and sports at the gym.

I deffineitely need holidaysa break/rest! I definitely need a break/rest!

It's not wrong but it is semantically weird

I deffineitely need a holidays! I definitely need a holiday!

I deffineitely need a holidays! I definitely need a holiday!

"I need a day off!" is also a common way people say this.

Please tell me how you foundI’d like your opinion on my English!. I’d like your opinion on my English.

What's my plan for the holidays? What's my plan for the holidays?

In 5 days, I'll be ion holidays. In 5 days, I'll be on holiday.

I'm not sure which english speaking country you are going for, but in the states you would say "I'll be off for the holidays". Other countries would say "I'll be on holiday".

In 5 days, I'll be in holidays.the holidays will start In 5 days, the holidays will start

In 5 days, I'll be ion holidays. In 5 days, I'll be on holiday.

I can't wait for the holidays, school is so boring at the moment! I can't wait for the holidays, school is so boring at the moment!

I can't wait for the holidays, school is so boring at the moment! I can't wait for the holidays, school is so boring at the moment!

I can't wait for the holidays, school is so boring at the momentnowadays! I can't wait for the holidays, school is so boring nowadays!

"these days" also works! "At the moment" is more short-term. :)

Happily, I won't have almost many tests in the 5 next days. Happily, I won't have many tests in the 5 next days.

Happily, I wdon't have almost any tests in the 5 next 5 days. Happily, I don't have any tests in the next 5 days

HappLuckily, I won't have almost any tests in the 5 next days. Luckily, I won't have almost any tests in the 5 next days.

"Thankfully" also works

I only will have a NSI (test on Numeric and Informatic Science) one and a TP (Traveaux pratique in French (pratic work?)) in Chemistry. I only will have a test on Numeric and Informatic Science one and a TP (Traveaux pratique in French (pratic work?)) in Chemistry.

Not sure what TP is to correct it

I'll only will have aone for NSI (Numeric and Informatic Science) one and aand one for TP (Traveaux pratique in French (, or "practical work?)" in French) in Chemistry. I'll only have one for NSI (Numeric and Informatic Science) and one for TP (Traveaux pratique, or "practical work" in French) in Chemistry.

I will go to the south ofern France. I will go to southern France.

This could be correct if you meant that you are literally going to the south of France (as in Africa or something) but I imagine you meant southern France

I will join my cousins and my father's family. I will join my cousins and father's family.

You can use it once

Moreover, the first part of the final season of Stranger Things hwas been released last month, so we will can watch it together. Moreover, the first part of the final season of Stranger Things was released last month, so we can watch it together.

Either say "we will watch it together" or "we can watch it together". But you can't use them at the same time

Moreover, the first part of the final season of Stranger Things hwas been released last month, so we will canbe able to watch it together. Moreover, the first part of the final season of Stranger Things was released last month, so we will be able to watch it together.

Moreover, the first part of the final season of Stranger Things has been released last month, so we will canbe able to watch it together. Moreover, the first part of the final season of Stranger Things has been released last month, so we will be able to watch it together.

The word "can" can only be used in some forms, others need "to be able to" For example, the future is not "will can" but "will be able to" :)

It reminds me of a memory, maybe 5 years ago, when we (my brother and I) watched the second season with my cousin (the older). It reminds me of a memory, maybe 5 years ago, when we (my brother and I) watched the second season with my cousin (older).

It reminds me a memoryof the time, maybe 5 years ago, when we (my brother and I) watched the second season with my older cousin (the older). It reminds me of the time, maybe 5 years ago, when my brother and I watched the second season with my older cousin.

It reminds me a memory, maybefrom about 5 years ago, when we (my brother and I) watched the second season with my older cousin (the older). It reminds me a memory, from about 5 years ago, when my brother and I watched the second season with my older cousin.