May 11, 2022
When passion meet compare
When passion meet compare
I through I am a passion learner.
I use this website to improve my language for more than 10 years.
I also help others who wants to learn English.
As result I “one stone two birds”.
And that is the motivation to keep me going.
But today I make a new friend.
Her posting is much devoted and passion than me.
Compare to her contribution I feel shame that I claim myself is a passion learner.
I am sad and happy.
Sad because someone is actually better than me!
Happy because by watching her I know what I missing.
One more stop to become a perfect example.
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I through I am a passionate learner.
I am a passionate learner.
I also help others who wants to learn English.
I also help others who want to learn English.
As result I “one stonekill two birds”. with one stone."
As result I “kill two birds with one stone."
And that is the motivation tohat keeps me going.
And that is the motivation that keeps me going.
But today I makde a new friend.
But today I made a new friend.
Her posting is much devoted ands are more passionate than mine.
Her posts are more passionate than mine.
Compared to her contributions, I feel shame that I claim myself isto be a passionate learner.
Compared to her contributions, I feel shame that I claim myself to be a passionate learner.
Happy because by watching her I know what I am missing. Happy because by watching her I know what I am missing.
Feedback
Good job. But remember, you should feel proud of your progress no matter who seems to be better or worse than you. Keep up the good work :).
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When passion meet compare |
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When passion meet compare |
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I through I am a passion learner.
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I use this website to improve my language for more than 10 years. |
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I also help others who wants to learn English.
I also help others who want |
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As result I “one stone two birds”.
As result I “ |
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And that is the motivation to keep me going.
And that is the motivation t |
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But today I make a new friend.
But today I ma |
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Her posting is much devoted and passion than me.
Her post |
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Compare to her contribution I feel shame that I claim myself is a passion learner.
Compared to her contributions, I feel shame that I claim myself |
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I am sad and happy. |
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Sad because someone is actually better than me! |
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Happy because by watching her I know what I missing. Happy because by watching her I know what I am missing. Happy because by watching her I know what I am missing. |
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One more stop to become a perfect example. |
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