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Nov. 15, 2022

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The little train from Romashkovo

Today I'll tell you a favorite fairy tail of my daughter.
Part 1
All the trains were like trains, and ony one from Romashkovo was a little bit strange. He was late everywhere.
One day the boss of the staition strictly said to him: "If you are late one more time, then..." And the little train got all and hummed: " The last, honest, noble world!"
And the strange little train was believed for the last time.
"Choo-choo" - he was driving on the road. And all of a sudden a voice from the forest: "Tweet-tweet..!" The little train sighed and headed off into the forest.
And the passangers looked out from the windows and started to shout: "It is an outrage, we are going to be late!"
"We can arrive to the station later" - said the little train. "But if we don't hear the first song of the nightingale now, we will be late for the whole spring!"
Somebody tried to object, but the smartest nodded: "It seems, he is right!" And all night the whole train was listening to the nightingale singing.

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Nov. 16, 2022

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ksushalev

Nov. 17, 2022

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Это русская сказка? сейчас я хочу читать эту историю 😄

The little train from Romashkovo

Part 1

He was late everywhere.

"

The little train sighed and headed off into the forest.

"

"But if we don't hear the first song of the nightingale now, we will be late for the whole spring!

"

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ksushalev

Nov. 18, 2022

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The little train from Romashkovo

And all of a sudden a voice from the forest: "Tweet-tweet..!"

The little train sighed and headed off into the forest.

"We can arrive to the station later" - said the little train.

And all night the whole train was listening to the nightingale singing.

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ksushalev

Nov. 18, 2022

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The little train from Romashkovo


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Today I'll tell you a favorite fairy tail of my daughter.


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Part 1


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All the trains were like trains, and ony one from Romashkovo was a little bit strange.


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He was late everywhere.


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One day the boss of the staition strictly said to him: "If you are late one more time, then..." And the little train got all and hummed: " The last, honest, noble world!


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And the strange little train was believed for the last time.


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And all of a sudden a voice from the forest: "Tweet-tweet..!"


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The little train sighed and headed off into the forest.


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And the passangers looked out from the windows and started to shout: "It is an outrage, we are going to be late!


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"We can arrive to the station later" - said the little train.


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"But if we don't hear the first song of the nightingale now, we will be late for the whole spring!


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"But if we don't hear the first song of the nightingale now, we will be late for the wholthe entire spring! "But if we don't hear the first song of the nightingale now, we will be late the entire spring!

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Somebody tried to object, but the smartest nodded: "It seems, he is right!"


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And all night the whole train was listening to the nightingale singing.


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And all night the whole train was listeninged to the nightingale singing. And all night the whole train listened to the nightingale sing.

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