It could, I remember thinking to myself like this. It could, I remember thinking to myself.

Combine like this instead.

I remember thinking to myself like this. I remember thinking to myself.

I remember thinking to myself like thiafterwards. I remember thinking to myself afterwards.

vValues Values

Titles are capitalized.

I used to genuinely believe that the most important thing (in a person is beingtransparency and honesty / a person can be is transparent and honest 100%), because I thought it would tookake so much courage for one to be true both to people and to themselves regardless of the situation. I used to genuinely believe that the most important thing (in a person is transparency and honesty / a person can be is transparent and honest), because I thought it would take so much courage for one to be true both to people and to themselves regardless of the situation.

This sentence is okay, but a little long. You can also make it into two sentences to make it a little easier to read. But long sentences are also okay, so it is up to you!

I used to genuinely believe that the most important thing in a person is being transparent and honest 100% because I thought it would tookake so much courage for one to be true both to people and to themselves regardless of the situation. I used to genuinely believe that the most important thing in a person is being transparent and honest 100% because I thought it would take so much courage for one to be true both to people and to themselves regardless of the situation.

I used to genuinely used to believe that the most important thing in a person is being transparent(s)/ values that a person can possess is integrity and honest 100%y because I thought it would took so much courage for one to be true both to peopleboth forthcoming to others and to this/hemrselvesf regardless of the situation. I genuinely used to believe that the most important thing(s)/ values that a person can possess is integrity and honesty because I thought it would took so much courage for one to be both forthcoming to others and to his/herself regardless of the situation.

I added some synonyms that you can use.

I used to genuinely believe that the most important thing in a person is being transparent and honest 100% because I thought it would tookake so much courage for one to be true both to people and to themselves regardless of the situation. I used to genuinely believe that the most important thing in a person is being transparent and honest 100% because I thought it would take so much courage for one to be true both to people and to themselves regardless of the situation.

I really like those kinds of people, even though they are very rare, and I was also (proud of myself for being one / proud to say I was one). I really like those kinds of people, even though they are very rare, and I was also (proud of myself for being one / proud to say I was one).

I really like thoseis kind of people even though they are very rarehard to come across, and I was also proud of myself for being one. I really like this kind of people even though they are hard to come across, and I was also proud of myself for being one.

But one day, when we wereI was having a very lighthearted, spontaneous conversation with one of my best friends, she said "I think the most important thing is... But one day, when I was having a very lighthearted, spontaneous conversation with one of my best friends, she said "I think the most important thing is...

You can also add "compassion" here without "..." and it would be a little more natural.

But one day, when we wereI was having a very light, spontaneous conversation with one of my best friends, she said, "I think the most important thing is... But one day, when I was having a very light, spontaneous conversation with one of my best friends, she said, "I think the most important thing is...

But one day, when we wereI was having a very light, spontaneouslight-hearted conversation with one of my best friends, she said "I think the most important thing is... But one day, when I was having a light-hearted conversation with one of my best friends, she said "I think the most important thing is...

But one day, when we were having a very light, spontaneous conversation with one of my best friends, she said "I think the most important thing is... But one day, when we were having a very light, spontaneous conversation with one of my best friends, she said "I think the most important thing is...

It's a little confusing not mentioning who the others are when you say "we".

It was an answer very unexpected for me that I still remember that moment very clearly I still remember that moment very clearly, because it was an answer that was very unexpected for me. I still remember that moment very clearly, because it was an answer that was very unexpected for me.

It was an answer veryso unexpected for me that I still remember that moment very clearly. It was an answer so unexpected for me that I still remember that moment very clearly.

It was an answer very unexpected answer for me thatand I still remember that moment very clearly. It was a very unexpected answer for me and I still remember that moment very clearly.

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It was an answer that was very unexpected for me that. I still remember that moment very clearly. It was an answer that was very unexpected for me. I still remember that moment very clearly.

At first, I explained the reasoning behind my answer and why I didn't agree aso much onwith hers. At first, I explained the reasoning behind my answer and why I didn't agree as much with hers.

At first, I explained the reasoning behind my answerown beliefs and why I didn't agree so much onwith hers. At first, I explained the reasoning behind my own beliefs and why I didn't agree so much with hers.

At first, I explained the reasoning behind my answer and why I didn't agree so much onwith hers. At first, I explained the reasoning behind my answer and why I didn't agree so much with hers.

To be honest, at the time, I didn't fthindk hers a strong answer to that question was very strong. To be honest, at the time, I didn't think her answer to that question was very strong.

To be honest, at the time, I didn't find hers a strong answer to that questionnswer logical/ I felt that her answer didn't make much sense. To be honest, at the time, I didn't find her answer logical/ I felt that her answer didn't make much sense.

Sure it was so, compassion is important, but not that much... mMaybe it would be number 2? Sure, compassion is important, but not that much... Maybe it would be number 2?

Or "Maybe it would come second?"

Sure it was so important but not that much... maybe it would be number 2the second most important value? Sure it was so important but not that much... maybe it would be the second most important value?

Sure, it was sois an important but not that much... maybe it would be number 2value but is it truly the most important one? Sure, it is an important value but is it truly the most important one?

Sure it was sovery important but not that much... maybe it would be number 2? Sure it was very important but not that much... maybe it would be number 2?

It could...

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I"(Maybe) it could be..." "(Maybe) it could be..."

A couple of years passed... One night, I had experienced a very dramatic night with one of my friends... She had a panic attack kind of thing but it was toosomething like a panic attack, but more intense,. I don't even know what it was. A couple of years passed. One night, I experienced a very dramatic night with one of my friends. She had something like a panic attack, but more intense. I don't even know what it was.

Try to use "..." sparingly. We only use it occasionally in natural writing. Or "I'm not even sure what it was."

A couple years passed... One night, I had experienced a very dramatic night with one of my friends... She had a panic attack kind of thing but it was too intense, I don't even know what it was. A couple years passed. One night, I had experienced a very dramatic night with one of my friends. She had a panic attack kind of thing but it was too intense, I don't even know what it was.

A couple years passed... One night, I had experienced a very dramatic night with one of my friends... She had a panic attack kind of thing but it was too intense, Iexperienced some sort of a panic attack but everything was a blur back then; I (still) don't even know what it washappened. A couple years passed... One night, I had experienced a very dramatic night with one of my friends... She experienced some sort of a panic attack but everything was a blur back then; I (still) don't even know what happened.

It was scary because we were home alone, and she has reached to a point where she unconsciously attempted to injure herself... And I desperately tried to reach out to someone for help while trying to prevent her from injuring herself and calming her down in everany way I could... It was scary because we were home alone, and she reached to a point where she unconsciously attempted to injure herself. I desperately tried to reach out to someone for help while trying to prevent her from injuring herself and calming her down in any way I could.

It was scary because we were home alone, and she hasd reached to a point where she unconsciously attempted to injure herself... And I desperately tried to reach out to someone for help while trying to prevent her from injuring herself and calm her down in everany way I could... It was scary because we were home alone, and she had reached a point where she unconsciously attempted to injure herself. I desperately tried to reach out to someone for help while trying to prevent her from injuring herself and calm her down any way I could.

It was scary because we were home alone, and she hasd reached to a point where she unsubconsciously attempted to injure herself... And I desperately tried to reach out to someone for help while trying to prevent her from injuring herself and calm her down in every way I could... It was scary because we were home alone, and she had reached a point where she subconsciously attempted to injure herself... And I desperately tried to reach out to someone for help while trying to prevent her from injuring herself and calm her down in every way I could...

It happened a long time ago, so you can't use "has reached".

It was scary because we were home alone, and she hasd reached to a point where she unconsciously attempted to injure herself... And I desperately tried to reach out to someone for help while trying to prevent her from injuring herself and calm her down in every way I could... It was scary because we were home alone, and she had reached to a point where she unconsciously attempted to injure herself... And I desperately tried to reach out to someone for help while trying to prevent her from injuring herself and calm her down in every way I could...

While all these wereof this was happening, of course, I got exposed toI was able to understand her (inner communication withdialogue with herself / inner thoughts about herself,). I put the pieces together and the story behind her panic attack revealed itself to me... While all of this was happening, I was able to understand her (inner dialogue with herself / inner thoughts about herself). I put the pieces together and the story behind her panic attack revealed itself to me.

While all these wereof this was happening, of course, I got exposed to her inner communication with herself,I learned how she spoke to herself internally and put the pieces together and t. The story behind her actions revealed itself to me... While all of this was happening, I learned how she spoke to herself internally and put the pieces together. The story behind her actions revealed itself to me.

While all these wereis was happening, of course, I got exposed to her inner communication with herself, purecalled what tshe pieces together and the story behind revealed itself to me...had told me previously. While all this was happening, of course, I recalled what she had told me previously.

While all these wereis was happening, of course, I got exposed to her inner communication with herself, put the pieces together and the story behind revealed itself to me... While all this was happening, of course, I got exposed to her inner communication with herself, put the pieces together and the story behind revealed itself to me...

I just siat by the window and looked at the sky from late night to dawn..., and Iit clicked. I just sat by the window and looked at the sky from late night to dawn, and it clicked.

I just siat by the window and looked at the sky from late night tonight sky until dawn..., and Iit clicked. I just sat by the window and looked at the night sky until dawn, and it clicked.

I just siat by the window and looked at the sky from late night todusk till dawn... and Iit clicked. I just sat by the window and looked at the sky from dusk till dawn... and it clicked.

sit= past tense

I just siat by the window and looked at the sky from late night to dawn... and It clicked. I just sat by the window and looked at the sky from late night to dawn... and It clicked.

I felt it to my bones. I felt it to my bones.

Or "I felt it in my bones."

I felt it toin my bones. I felt it in my bones.

I felt it toin my bones. I felt it in my bones.

I felt it toin my bones. I felt it in my bones.

I came to understand why my friend came up with the answered "compassion" that day... I came to understand why my friend answered "compassion" that day.

I came tofinally understanood why my friend came up with the answer "compassion" that day... I finally understood why my friend came up with the answer "compassion" that day...

I thought "It's obvious now that I was too ignorant to agree to that back then. I thought "It's obvious now that I was too ignorant to agree back then.

I thought, "It's obvious now that I was too ignorant to agree to thatwith her back then. I thought, "It's obvious now that I was too ignorant to agree with her back then.

I thought "It's obvious makes sense now thabut I was too ignorant to agree to thatwith her back then. I thought "It makes sense now but I was too ignorant to agree with her back then.

Silly me..." I thought the most important thing was being honest, and compassion maybe takes the second place. Silly me." I thought the most important thing was being honest, and compassion maybe takes second place.

Silly me..." I thought the most important thing was being honest, and that compassion maybe takes theook second place. Silly me..." I thought the most important thing was being honest, and that compassion maybe took second place.

Silly me..." I thought the most important thing was being honest, and compassion maybe takes the second placefollowed by compassion. Silly me..." I thought the most important thing was being honest, followed by compassion.

How far I was from the understanding of the very core thing of everything there is. How far I was from the understanding of the very core thing of everything there is.

This is okay, but sounds very formal. Instead, try "I was so far from understanding the core of everything."

How far I was from the understanding of the very core thing of everything there is. How far I was from understanding the very core of everything there is.

How far I was from the understanding of the very core thingvalue of everything there is. How far I was from the understanding of the very core value of everything there is.

It was invisiunable to my eysee why she said so, and I was so sure of myself... That night, I cried silently with an aching heart, and changed my mind about it. I was unable to see why she said so, and I was so sure of myself. That night, I cried silently with an aching heart and changed my mind about it.

"Invisible to my eye" is usually for items you can actually see. Try this instead.

IAt was invisible to my eye why she said sothe time, I couldn't understand her reasons, and I was so sure of myself... That night, I cried silently with an aching heart, and changed my mind about it. At the time, I couldn't understand her reasons, and I was so sure of myself. That night, I cried silently with an aching heart and changed my mind about it.

It was invisible to my eye just could not understand why she said so, and I was so sure of myself... That night, I cried silently with an aching heart, and changed my mind about it. I just could not understand why she said so, and I was so sure of myself... That night, I cried silently with an aching heart, and changed my mind about it.

Love... is what we all silently crave for... aAll our wounds reside in the oabsence of it. Love is what we all silently crave for. All our wounds reside in the absence of it.

Very poetic and beautiful sentiment!

Love... is what we all silently crave for... aAll our wounds reside in the oabsence of it., Love is what we all silently crave. All our wounds reside in the absence of it,

Love... is what we all silently crave for... all our wounds reside in the oabsence of it. (?) Love... is what we all silently crave for... all our wounds reside in the absence of it. (?)

I don't understand this part

Love... is what we all silently crave for... all our wounds reside in the oabsence of it. Love... is what we all silently crave for... all our wounds reside in the absence of it.

And compassion, is the one thing that can save an heart from misery. And compassion, is the one thing that can save a heart from misery.

Aand compassion, is the one thing that can save any heart from misery. and compassion is the one thing that can save any heart from misery.

And compassion, is the one thing that can save an heart from misery. And compassion, is the one thing that can save an heart from misery.

I don't understand this part

And compassion, is the one thing that can save anthe heart from misery. And compassion is the one thing that can save the heart from misery.

It was...really is that important! It really is that important!

It was... that important! It was that important!

It was... that important! It was that important!

Only then was I finally have gottenable to (see... / understand). Only then was I finally able to (see / understand).

Only then did I finally have gotten to see...see the true power of compassion. Only then did I finally see the true power of compassion.

Only then did I finally have gotten to see....get to see (that?) Only then did I finally get to see (that?)

But one day, when we were having a very light, spontaneous conversation with one of my best friends back then, she said "I think the most important thing is...

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But one day, when we were having a very light, spontaneous conversation with one of my best friends back then, she said "I think the most important thing is... But one day, when we were having a very light, spontaneous conversation with one of my best friends back then, she said "I think the most important thing is...

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It was scary because we were home alone, and she have reached to a point where she unconsciously attempted to injure herself... And I desperately tried to reach out to someone for help while trying to prevent her injuring herself and calm her down in every way I could...

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It was scary because we were home alone, and she have reached to a point where she unconsciously attempted to injure herself... And I desperately tried to reach out to someone for help while trying to prevent her injuring herself and calm her down in every way I could...

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It was scary because we were home alone, and she have reached to a point where she unconsciously attempted to injure herself... And I desperately tried to reach out to someone for help while trying to prevent her injuring herself and calm her down in every way I could... It was scary because we were home alone, and she have reached to a point where she unconsciously attempted to injure herself... And I desperately tried to reach out to someone for help while trying to prevent her injuring herself and calm her down in every way I could...

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