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Go Hiking

Last month, every morning I went hiking.
Instead of taking the bus, I walked home slowly.
I walk every day and I feel that my thigh muscles have become stronger.
The 386-meter mountain is not high, and it takes about an hour to reach the top.
At the top of the mountain, the air is fresh and there are very few tourists.
On the mountain, I can speak English loudly.
Learning English is like learning to ride a bike.
At first, you might wobble around, but as long as you keep practicing, you'll become more stable.
Once you are skilled, you start feeling in control and you even enjoy the process until you fall in love with it and can't stop.
English isn't just a language, it's a skill.


上个月,每天上午我都去登山。
回家不是坐公车,而是慢慢走回家。
我每天步行,我感觉我的大腿肌肉结实了。
海拔386米的山不高,大约一小时就登至山顶。
山顶上空气清新,而且游客稀少。
在山上,我可以大声的说英语。
学英语就像学骑车。
刚开始可能摇摇晃晃,但你只要坚持练习,就会越来越稳。
熟练之后,你开始有了掌控感,甚至享受这个过程,直到彻底爱上,根本停不下来。
英语不只是一门语言,更是一项技能。

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Going Hiking

Last month, every morning I went hikI went hiking every morning.

It just sounds a bit more natural this way :)

Instead of taking the bus, I walked home slowly.

I walk every day and I feel that my thigh muscles have become stronger.

OR: "Now that I walk every day, I feel that my thigh muscles have become stronger." This allows you to draw a direct connection between your walking and your increase in strength.

The 386-meter mountain is not high, and it takes about an hour to reach the top.

At the top of the mountain, the air is fresh and there are very few tourists.

On the mountain, I can speak English loudly.

Learning

English is like learning to ride a bike.

At first, you might wobble around, but as long as you keep practicing, you'll become more stable.

Once you are skilled, you start feeling in control and you even enjoy the process until you fall in love with it and can't stop.

English isn't just a language, it's a skill.

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Go Hiking


Going Hiking

Last month, every morning I went hiking.


Last month, every morning I went hikI went hiking every morning.

It just sounds a bit more natural this way :)

Instead of taking the bus, I walked home slowly.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I walk every day and I feel that my thigh muscles have become stronger.


I walk every day and I feel that my thigh muscles have become stronger.

OR: "Now that I walk every day, I feel that my thigh muscles have become stronger." This allows you to draw a direct connection between your walking and your increase in strength.

The 386-meter mountain is not high, and it takes about an hour to reach the top.


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At the top of the mountain, the air is fresh and there are very few tourists.


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On the mountain, I can speak English loudly.


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Learning


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English is like learning to ride a bike.


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At first, you might wobble around, but as long as you keep practicing, you'll become more stable.


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Once you are skilled, you start feeling in control and you even enjoy the process until you fall in love with it and can't stop.


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English isn't just a language, it's a skill.


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