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I am riding the bus at the moment and t. Today is a special day of my life, because I'll learn aget news that will maybe changes my whole life. I am riding the bus at the moment. Today is a special day of my life, because I'll get news that will maybe change my whole life.

There's a few ways to change "learn a news" to sound more natural. Any of these also work: "because I'll learn something that..." "because I'll find out something that..." "because I'm expecting news that..."

I am ion the bus at the moment, and today is a special day of my life because I'll learn asoon have news that maybeight changes my whole life. I am on the bus at the moment, and today is a special day because I'll soon have news that might change my whole life.

All my life iIt's about going abroad. It's about going abroad.

All my life iIt's about going abroad. It's about going abroad.

In my school T, there is a project for just for our class. In my school, there is a project just for our class.

InAt my school T, there is a special project for just our class. At my school, there is a special project for just our class.

I hope I'll be chosen among the 18 students chosen. I hope I'll be among the 18 students chosen.

This correction says that there will be 18 students chosen, and you hope you are one of them. If you mean there are 18 students and you hope you are the one chosen, you can say: "I hope I'll be the one chosen from the 18 students (in my class)."

I hope I'll be chosen among 18the 18 other students. I hope I'll be chosen among the 18 other students.

If I learn theI'm choicesen, I'm gonna leave feedback ☺️ If I learn I'm chosen, I'm gonna leave feedback ☺️

"I'm gonna feedback" sounds like slang, but adding "leave" makes it clearer!

IfWhen I learn the choice I'm gonna feedbackwho was chosen, I'll update you. ☺️ When I learn who was chosen, I'll update you. ☺️

You will know who got chosen, it is just a matter of time. So "when" not "if"