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Nov. 10, 2022

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An Important Test

Hello! I hope you're doing well :)

Thank you for correcting me.

Today I want to write about how nervous I feel about an important exam and some learning advice.

Note: I'm aiming for an American English accent.

I've been studying for 9 months for an important test, I know that if I pass it, it will improve my life, but it includes 10 subjects and the minimum mistakes I can make are just 14.

At first I felt very anxious, I used to avoid it, however, I started studying some learning techniques and they improved my subjects learning journey drastically.

I want to share with you some of these learning methods :)

- Cornell Method
It consists in dividing your notebook into three sections: -The column of the questions section at the left side of the notebook.
-The text section at the right side of the notebook
-The summary section line, down to the notebook.
You can see it in the attached images section of this journal.

Absurd drawings
I make some absurd drawings or absurd problems to feel an emotion. This is important to remember what you learn, as it's said that "information + emotion = long term memory" .
For example, I drew the character Sponge Bob in my chemistry notes that are related to porosity.

Recall
I write an R when I review my questions with the Cornell Method and I mark the ones that I answered wrong.

Listening to music when studying.
I listen to music when I'm studying so that I can create emotions and remember more, as I said before.

Parfum.
I spray my notes with my favourite parfum in order to remember more, because the smell has such effect. Have you ever smell something and remember a specific situation/ stage of your life? I'm pretty sure that the answer is '"yes".

Pomodoro.
I set a timer for 30 minutes and then I put myself to rest for five minutes.

Studying in the morning.
Our willpower is big when it's early, when the sun goes down it start to fall. That's why I do my best to study in the morning, after I take a shower.

There are more methods I use but for now I'll write only these.

I hope you find this information useful.
Thank you for reading. Have a beautiful day!

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An Important Test

Hello!

I hope you're doing well :)

Thank you for correcting me.

Absurd drawings

I make some absurd drawings or absurd problems to feel an emotion.

This is important to remember what you learn, as it's said that "information + emotion = long term memory" .

For example, I drew the character Sponge Bob in my chemistry notes that are related to porosity.

Recall

I write an R when I review my questions with the Cornell Method and I mark the ones that I answered wrong.

Listening to music when studying.

I listen to music when I'm studying so that I can create emotions and remember more, as I said before.

I'm pretty sure that the answer is '"yes".

Pomodoro.

Studying in the morning.

That's why I do my best to study in the morning, after I take a shower.

There are more methods I use but for now I'll write only these.

I hope you find this information useful.

Thank you for reading.

Have a beautiful day!

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BlackGlasses

Nov. 13, 2022

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An Important Test

Hello!

I hope you're doing well :)

Thank you for correcting me.

Today I want to write about how nervous I feel about an important exam and some learning advice.

Note: I'm aiming for an American English accent.

I want to share with you some of these learning methods :)

- Cornell Method

-The text section at the right side of the notebook

You can see it in the attached images section of this journal.

Absurd drawings

For example, I drew the character Sponge Bob in my chemistry notes that are related to porosity.

Recall

I write an R when I review my questions with the Cornell Method and I mark the ones that I answered wrong.

Listening to music when studying.

I listen to music when I'm studying so that I can create emotions and remember more, as I said before.

I'm pretty sure that the answer is '"yes".

Pomodoro.

Studying in the morning.

There are more methods I use but for now I'll write only these.

I hope you find this information useful.

Thank you for reading.

Have a beautiful day!

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BlackGlasses

Nov. 10, 2022

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Listening to music when studying.


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Today I want to write about how nervous I feel about an important exam and some learning advice.


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Note: I'm aiming for an American English accendialect. Note: I'm aiming for an American English dialect.

Accent: the way of speaking, intonation. Dialect: a version of the language specific to a region I saw another user correct you to use accent on a previous journal but I would have felt rude correcting them, but dialect is the proper usage :)!

I've been studying for 9 months for an important test, I know that if I pass it, it will improve my life, but it includes 10 subjects and the minimum mistakes I can make are just 14.


I've been studying for 9 months for an important test,. I know that if I pass it, it will improve my life, but it includes 10 subjects, and the minimum mistakes I can make are just 14I am only allowed to make 14 mistakes. I've been studying for 9 months for an important test. I know that if I pass it, it will improve my life, but it includes 10 subjects, and I am only allowed to make 14 mistakes.

Rewording it this way sounds more conversational and natural.

I've been studying for (the past) 9 months for an important test, I know that if I pass it, it will improve my life, but it includes 10 subjects and the minimum amount of mistakes I can make areis just 14. I've been studying for (the past) 9 months for an important test, I know that if I pass it, it will improve my life, but it includes 10 subjects and the minimum amount of mistakes I can make is just 14.

Also correct + more natural slightly: I’ve been studying for the past 9 months to pass an important test,…

At first I felt very anxious, I used to avoid it, however, I started studying some learning techniques and they improved my subjects learning journey drastically.


At first I felt very anxious, and I used to avoid it, h. However, I started studying some learning techniques and they improved my subjects learning journey drastically. At first I felt very anxious and I used to avoid it. However, I started studying some learning techniques and they improved my learning journey drastically.

At first I felt very anxious, I used to avoid studying for it, however, I started studyingacquiring/picking up some learning techniques and they improved my subjects learning journey drastically. At first I felt very anxious, I used to avoid studying for it, however, I started acquiring/picking up some learning techniques and they improved my learning journey drastically.

Picking up - colloquial Acquiring - formal, sophisticated Either one works!

I want to share with you some of these learning methods :)


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Today I want to share with you somea few of these learning methods with you. :) Today I want to share a few of these learning methods with you. :)

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- Cornell Method


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- The Cornell Method - The Cornell Method

It consists in dividing your notebook into three sections: -The column of the questions section at the left side of the notebook.


It consists inof dividing your notebook into three sections: -The column of the questions section at the left side of the notebook. It consists of dividing your notebook into three sections: -The column of the questions section at the left side of the notebook.

ItThis method consists inof dividing your notebook into three sections: -The column of the questions section atis on the left side of the notebook. This method consists of dividing your notebook into three sections: -The column of the questions section is on the left side of the notebook.

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-The text section at the right side of the notebook


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-The text section at the right side of the notebookpage. -The text section at the right side of the page.

Notebook - the whole physical book Page - just a single page When we do examples involving paper, for example origami, we always refer to it as a single page, not notebook

-The summary section line, down to the notebook.


-The summary section line, down toat the bottom of the notebook. -The summary section at the bottom of the notebook.

- The summary section line, down to, which is at the nbotebooktom of the page. - The summary section, which is at the bottom of the page.

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You can see it in the attached images section of this journal.


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You can see it in the attached images section of this journal. You can see it in the attached images section of this journal.

Or: I’ve attached an image of this method in the ‘images’ section of my journal.

Absurd drawings


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I make some absurd drawings or absurd problems to feel an emotion.


I make some absurd drawings or absurd problems to feel an emotion. I make absurd drawings or absurd problems to feel an emotion.

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This is important to remember what you learn, as it's said that "information + emotion = long term memory" .


This is important in order to remember what you learn, as it's said that "information + emotion = long term memory" . This is important in order to remember what you learn, as it's said that "information + emotion = long term memory" .

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For example, I drew the character Sponge Bob in my chemistry notes that are related to porosity.


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Recall


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I write an R when I review my questions with the Cornell Method and I mark the ones that I answered wrong.


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I listen to music when I'm studying so that I can create emotions and remember more, as I said before.


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Parfum.


Paerfume. Perfume.

Paerfum.e Perfume

In English we do headings with no full stops, if you put a full stop at a heading / sub heading this would be grammatically incorrect.

I spray my notes with my favourite parfum in order to remember more, because the smell has such effect.


I spray my notes with my favourite paerfume in order to remember more, because the smell has such an effect. I spray my notes with my favorite perfume in order to remember more, because the smell has such an effect.

"favourite" = British "favorite" = American

I spray my notes with my favourite paerfume in order to remember more, because the smell has suchcan have this effect. I spray my notes with my favourite perfume in order to remember more, because smell can have this effect.

Have you ever smell something and remember a specific situation/ stage of your life?


Have you ever smelled something and remembered a specific situation/ stage of your life? Have you ever smelled something and remembered a specific situation/ stage of your life?

Have you ever smellt/smelled something and remember a specific situation/ stage of your life? Have you ever smelt/smelled something and remember a specific situation/stage of your life?

I'm pretty sure that the answer is '"yes".


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Pomodoro.


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I set a timer for 30 minutes and then I put myself to rest for five minutes.


I set a timer for 30 minutes and then I put myself to rest for five minutes. I set a timer for 30 minutes and then I rest for five minutes.

I set a timer for 30 minutes and then I put myself to rest fortake a five minutes break. I set a timer for 30 minutes and then I take a five minute break.

Correct examples: “She’s taking a five.” “They’re on their break.” “I’m taking a break from studying.”

Studying in the morning.


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Our willpower is big when it's early, when the sun goes down it start to fall.


Our willpower is bistrong when it's early, but when the sun goes down it start to fallde. Our willpower is strong when it's early, but when the sun goes down it start to fade.

Our willpower is biggreater when it's early, when the sun goes down it start to falldecrease. Our willpower is greater when it's early, when the sun goes down it start to decrease.

That's why I do my best to study in the morning, after I take a shower.


That's why I dotry my best to study in the morning, after I take a shower. That's why I try my best to study in the morning, after I take a shower.

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There are more methods I use but for now I'll write only these.


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I hope you find this information useful.


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Thank you for reading.


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Have a beautiful day!


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