This Christmas, it was weird. This Christmas was weird.

This Christmas, it was weird. This Christmas was weird.

You don't need to use "it" to refer back to "this Christmas" when you just mentioned "this Christmas", better to keep it simple.

This Christmas, it was weird. This Christmas was weird.

I didn't ask for any present this year because I didn't have any ideaknow what I wanted. I didn't ask for any present this year because I didn't know what I wanted.

I didn't ask for any present this year because I didn't have any idea. I didn't ask for any present this year because I didn't have any idea.

"ask for X [from Y]" -> requested someone to give you X "ask X" -> requested something of person X (Note there are exceptions here, you can "ask a question [to someone]" or "ask a favour [of someone]", but present is not one of those exceptions)

I didn't ask for any presents this year because I didn't have any idea what I wanted. I didn't ask for any presents this year because I didn't have any idea what I wanted.

It sounds a bit more natural adding “what I wanted” to clarify what idea you mean.

I didn't ask for any present this year because I didn't have any idea what I wanted. I didn't ask for any present this year because I didn't have any idea what I wanted.

However, I got some presents. However, I got some presents.

However, I got some presents. However, I got some presents.

Since there's more than one, it should be "presents" instead of "present"

However, I got some presents anyway. However, I got some presents anyway.

“anyway” is needed to reinforce that this happened in spite of what you said previously.

However, I got somea present. However, I got a present.

The first present I got iwas a book. The first present I got was a book.

"was" to match the tense of "got"

The first present I got iwas a book. The first present I got was a book.

Tense should be consistent throughout

The first present I got iwas a book. The first present I got was a book.

use past tense

It's called "The problem of Three-Body Problem" (I am not sure about the name). It's called "The Three-Body Problem" (I am not sure about the name).

I think this is the book you're talking about. I know that title.

It's called "The problem of Three-Body" (I am not sure about the name).Three-Body Problem" It's called "The Three-Body Problem"

The English name of this book is "The Three-Body Problem"

It's called "The problem of Three-Body" (I am not sure about the name). It's called "The problem of Three-Body" (I am not sure about the name).

The Three Body Problem. I know that book

My parents offered itgave it to me in English so that I can improve my writreading comprehension. My parents gave it to me in English so that I can improve my reading comprehension.

I assume you meant reading comprehension since you'll be reading this book.

My parents offered itgave it to me in English so I can improve my writing and comprehension. My parents gave it to me in English so I can improve my writing and comprehension.

My parents offered it to me in English, so I can improve my writreading comprehension. My parents offered it to me in English, so I can improve my reading comprehension.

My older cousin read it and saitold me that it's really cool. My older cousin read it and told me that it's really cool.

My older cousin read it and (said meto me / told me) that it's really cool. My older cousin read it and (said to me / told me) that it's really cool.

"said" assumes the next thing is the topic that was said. "told" on the other hand assumes the next thing is the recipient. You can use "say to" or "tell" here, but "tell" is more natural. ("told" since it's past tense)

My older cousin has already read it and saitold me that it's really cool. My older cousin has already read it and told me that it's really cool.

My older cousin read it and saitold me that it's really cool. My older cousin read it and told me that it's really cool.

My older cousin read it and saitold me that it's really cool. My older cousin read it and told me that it's really cool.

It's a science -fiction book about a physics problem. It's a science-fiction book about a physics problem.

We hyphenate this term. Alternatively, you could say "sci-fi" - shorthand for science-fiction.

However, he read it in French and it was already difficult for him so I think it won'might not be easy for me to read it. However, he read it in French and it was already difficult for him so I think it might not be easy for me to read.

However, he read it in French and it was already difficult for him so I think it won't be easy for me to read it. However, he read it in French and it was already difficult for him so I think it won't be easy for me to read it.

However, he read it in French and it was already difficult for him so I think it won't be easy for me to read it. However, he read it in French and it was already difficult for him so I think it won't be easy for me to read it.

It was also hasmade into a séeries on Netflix . It was also made into a series on Netflix .

It also has a séeries on Netflix . It also has a series on Netflix .

English rarely uses diacritics and series isn't a word that they used for. Sometimes in very formal writing you'll see café or naïve, but even for those words the diacritics are optional and usually omitted in standard writing (particularly because people don't actually know how to type them)

It also has a séeries on Netflix . It also has a series on Netflix.

It also has a séeries on Netflix . It also has a series on Netflix.

Another problem that makes the book more difficult to read is that it's Chineese and the character's names aren't easy to memorize and associate. Another problem that makes the book more difficult to read is that it's Chinese and the character's names aren't easy to memorize and associate.

Another problem that make the book more difficult to read is that it's Chineese and the character's names aren't easy to memorize and associate with the characters. Another problem that make the book more difficult to read is that it's Chinese and the character's names aren't easy to memorize and associate with the characters.

"associate" needs more information.

Another problem that make the book more difficult to read is that it's Chineese and the character's names aren't easy to memorize and associate. Another problem that make the book more difficult to read is that it's Chinese and the character's names aren't easy to memorize.

Another problem that make the book more difficult to read is that it' Chineese and the character's’ names aren't easy to memorize and associate. Another problem that make the book more difficult to read is that it' Chineese and the characters’ names aren't easy to memorize and associate.

A Plural possessive like “characters” gets an apostrophe after the s, not before

Another problem that makes the book more difficult to read is that it' was originally written in Chineese and the character's' names aren't easy to memorize and associate. Another problem that makes the book more difficult to read is that it was originally written in Chinese and the characters' names aren't easy to memorize and associate.

Before I read this book, I have to read the entire series of Divergent series. Before I read this book, I have to read the entire Divergent series.

A bit more natural.

Before I read this book, I haved to read the entire series of Divergent. Before I read this book, I had to read the entire series of Divergent.

I started reading the first book 1a month ago, and I am currently at theon page 360. I started reading the first book a month ago, and I am currently on page 360.

I started reading the first book 1 month ago, and I am currently at the page 360. I started reading the first book 1 month ago, and I am currently at page 360.

I started reading the first book 1 month ago, and I am currently at the page 360. I started reading the first book 1 month ago, and I am currently at page 360.

I started reading the first book 1 month ago, and I am currently at the page 360. I started reading the first book 1 month ago and I am currently at the page 360.

I think reading those books will definitely help prepare me for reading the book I got for Christmas. I think reading those books will definitely help prepare me for reading the book I got for Christmas.

I think reading those books will definitely help me forwith reading the book I got for Christmas. I think reading those books will definitely help me with reading the book I got for Christmas.

I think reading those books will definitely help me forwith reading the book I got for Christmas. I think reading those books will definitely help me with reading the book I got for Christmas.

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