Focusing on thyself and others Focusing on thyself and others

Focusing on thmyself and others Focusing on myself and others

'myself' is more common in regular english than 'thyself'

Starting from a privilege,d position is relative to the judge and judged person in my case, I thought that I didn't have a privileged position. Starting from a privileged position is relative to the judge and judged person in my case, I thought that I didn't have a privileged position.

Starting from a privilege, positionPrivilege is relative to the judge and judgedthe person ibeing judged. In my case, I thought that I didwasn't havein a privileged position. Privilege is relative to the judge and the person being judged. In my case, I thought that I wasn't in a privileged position.

Only because my family, wereas struggling with money. Only because my family was struggling with money.

OI only thought this because my family, wereas struggling with money. I only thought this because my family was struggling with money.

nNow, I'm improving mentality, and I'm focusing on real wealth. Now, I'm improving mentality, and I'm focusing on real wealth.

nNow Ii'm improving mentality, and I'm focusing on building real wealth. Now i'm improving mentality, and I'm focusing on building real wealth.

In my path to increase empathy towards others, it comes to mind that I need to help the ones that turned me downhave wronged me in the past. In my path to increase empathy towards others, it comes to mind that I need to help the ones that have wronged me in the past.

This phrase makes more sense in this context

This includes my mother who I love but I haven't forgiven since/ because of my childhood traumas. This includes my mother who I love but I haven't forgiven since/ because of my childhood traumas.

This includes my mother who I love but I haven't forgiven sincebecause of childhood traumas. This includes my mother who I love but I haven't forgiven because of childhood trauma.

At this stage, we need to staybe stronger. At this stage, we need to be stronger

'Stay' implies staying still, and not improving. Saying 'stay stronger' doesn't make sense because becoming stronger implies that you are changing, not 'staying' the same.

And avoid hate towards the ones who love us. And avoid hate towards the ones who love us.

Aand avoid. and avoid

hate toward the ones who love us.

hate toward the ones who love us, even if they have made mistakes. hate toward the ones who love us, even if they have made mistakes.

I would add something like this at the end to drive home the message that we shouldn't give up on people we love just because they have made mistakes in the past, but this is optional and not an absolutly necessary correction!