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Aug. 14, 2025

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My dream holiday

I have been travelling the world two years. I have been to many Europe countries. But I want to learn new culture and see new places. Many Europe countries were similar to each other. There were old builds, grey clouds, silence streets. I decided to make money to discovery Asia. That is excited. I hope to my new travel. There were different culture, foods, nice beachs, beautiful natural places. I think many Asia people are friendship and cheerful.
Asia countries are cheaper than Europe countries. So many tourists come in recent years. These countries really safe. It means you don’t care your bags, when you swim or walk.
Singapore, Thailand, Vietnam, Cambodia, Indonesia, Philippines, Japan, South Korea… Calling me :) I will come , see it soon

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My dream holiday


That is excited.


That is exciteding. That is exciting.

Since it is exciting right now, you want the word exciting. Excited would imply you were excited in the past but not currently. Example: “I was excited.”

I hope to my new travel.


I hope to have fun on my new travels. I hope to have fun on my new travels.

I’m not exactly sure what was meant to be here, but it’s not a complete sentence. Something that would fit would be something like “I hope to have fun on my new travels.” It is missing a subject. We know you are hoping, but what are you hoping for?

There were different culture, foods, nice beachs, beautiful natural places.


There were different cultures, foods, nice beaches, and beautiful natural places. There were different cultures, foods, nice beaches, and beautiful natural places.

Since there are multiple cultures, make sure to add an “s” to the end to make it plural. The plural spelling for “beach” is “beaches.” When describing 3 or more things separated by commas, make sure you add “and” to the last thing you are talking about.

I think many Asia people are friendship and cheerful.


I think many Asian people are friendshiply and cheerful. I think many Asian people are friendly and cheerful.

The adjective for someone from Asia is Asian. The adjective for someone who is nice and might be your friend is “friendly.”

Asia countries are cheaper than Europe countries.


Asian countries are cheaper than European countries. Asian countries are cheaper than European countries.

I have been travelling the world two years.


I have been travelling the world for two years. I have been traveling the world for two years.

Slight spelling mistake on traveling. When you are describing a duration, you want to add “for” before the duration to connect it. Example: “I have been waiting for 30 minutes.”

I have been to many Europe countries.


I have been to many European countries. I have been to many European countries.

The correct adjective for something that is in Europe is, European.

But I want to learn new culture and see new places.


But I want to learn new cultures and see new places. But I want to learn new cultures and see new places.

Cultures should be plural here, since you are describing more than just 1.

Many Europe countries were similar to each other.


Many European countries were similar to each other. Many European countries were similar to each other.

There were old builds, grey clouds, silence streets.


There were old buildings, grey clouds, silencet streets. There were old buildings, grey clouds, silent streets.

The correct past tense for the adjective “silence,” is silent.

I decided to make money to discovery Asia.


I decided to make money to discovery Asia. I decided to make money to discover Asia.

Discovery is a noun, you want a verb here to describe you doing it. Discover would be correct.

So many tourists come in recent years.


So many tourists coame in recent years. So many tourists came in recent years.

The past tense for “come,” is came. You could also correct the sentence by saying “so many tourists have come in recent years,” because adding have turns come in to present tense.

These countries really safe.


It means you don’t care your bags, when you swim or walk.


It means you don’t carehave to care about your bags, when you swim or walk. It means you don’t have to care about your bags, when you swim or walk.

While you could technically say “you don’t care about your bags, when you swim or walk.” This makes it flow better.

Singapore, Thailand, Vietnam, Cambodia, Indonesia, Philippines, Japan, South Korea… Calling me :) I will come , see it soon


Singapore, Thailand, Vietnam, Cambodia, Indonesia, Philippines, Japan, and South Korea… C are calling to me :). I will come , see itsee them soon. Singapore, Thailand, Vietnam, Cambodia, Indonesia, Philippines, Japan, and South Korea are calling to me :). I will see them soon.

You could technically use an ellipses here, they are used when you have a sentence that will be expanded on in the next sentence. But combining it with your next sentence makes it a more complete thought. Since you are talking about multiple countries you want to see, “them” is used instead of “it” here.

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