March 7, 2022
Hurt My Foot
My right foot gets hurt by accident.
When I tried to get on a bus, I was off balance by making a false step.
At first, I could endure the pain, but finally I went to the hospital.
Now I am wearing a cast on my right foot, I have to wear for 6 weeks.
I need to pay attention when I walk.
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Hurt My Foot
My right foot getsgot hurt by accident.
My right foot got hurt by accident.
When I tried to get on a bus, I was off balance by makingand made a false step.
When I tried to get on a bus, I was off balance and made a false step.
At first, I could endure the pain, but finally I went to the hospital.
Now I am wearing a cast on my right foot, and I have to wear it for 6 weeks. Now I am wearing a cast on my right foot, and I have to wear it for 6 weeks.
I need to pay attention when I walk.
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I hope you get well soon! Great job! :)
March 8, 2022
Thank you very much. :)
(I) Hurt My Foot (I) Hurt My Foot
Your title is correct but you could also add "I"
MI hurt my right foot gets hurt by accident.
I hurt my right foot by accident.
Or "My right foot got hurt by accident"
When I tried to get on a bus, I was offlost balance by making a false step.
When I tried to get on a bus, I lost balance by making a false step.
At first, I could endure the pain, but finally I went to the hospital.
Now I am wearing a cast on my right foot, I have to wear it for 6 weeks. Now I am wearing a cast on my right foot, I have to wear it for 6 weeks.
I need to pay attentionbe careful when I walk.
I need to be careful when I walk.
The sentence is correct but this correction sounds more natural
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Very good writing! Get well soon :)
March 7, 2022
Thank you very much. :)
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Hurt My Foot (I) Hurt My Foot (I) Hurt My Foot Your title is correct but you could also add "I" This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My right foot gets hurt by accident.
Or "My right foot got hurt by accident"
My right foot |
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When I tried to get on a bus, I was off balance by making a false step.
When I tried to get on a bus, I
When I tried to get on a bus, I was off balance |
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At first, I could endure the pain, but finally I went to the hospital. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Now I am wearing a cast on my right foot, I have to wear for 6 weeks. Now I am wearing a cast on my right foot, I have to wear it for 6 weeks. Now I am wearing a cast on my right foot, I have to wear it for 6 weeks. Now I am wearing a cast on my right foot, and I have to wear it for 6 weeks. Now I am wearing a cast on my right foot, and I have to wear it for 6 weeks. |
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I need to pay attention when I walk.
I need to The sentence is correct but this correction sounds more natural This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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