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Aug. 26, 2022

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An email: Not being able to go to a party

Dear Alex,

I hope you are doing well. I am glad to receive your invitation to go to this party on Saturday afternoon, but I am sorry because I cannot go there because I have much stuff to do.

At that day, I have an appointment with a company. They will conduct an interview to me for testing if I am qualified or not. You know, I will graduate from univeristy this year, and it will be the most important thing to me in such serious period. So I prioritize this thing and cannot go to such an excited party.

Do you mind to reschedule our appointment to next Sunday. I will be free after that since I will have been finishing all the interviews and also the work-searching. I will be a carzy guy who usually have fun with you after that.

I hope this email finds you well. Looking forward to your feedback~

Sincerely,
Your friend
James


Your friend Alex has invited you to a party this Saturday afternoon but you can’t go.


Write an email to Alex. In your email:


apologise to Alex
explain why you can’t go
suggest another day when you could meet.

Write your email in about 100 words.

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666coolboy

Aug. 31, 2022

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An email: Not being able to go to a party

Dear Alex,

I hope you are doing well.

I hope this email finds you well.

Sincerely,

Your friend

James

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666coolboy

Aug. 31, 2022

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An email: Not being able to go to a party


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Dear Alex,


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I hope this email finds you well.


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Looking forward to your feedback~


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Sincerely,


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