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ClaireMiro

Feb. 2, 2026

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Briefing in the Lab

"Name."
"Sefardita Levi,my dear.And you?"
"You don't have to know that.Origin."
"Torino,Italy.But I worked in America."
"Age."
"24 years old,a golden age."
"Job."
"Programmer.I am truly one of the most brilliant minds you've ever meet,I have to admit."
"Good.Reason."
"For what?The reason why I became a programmer?Because being a hacker is..."
"No,the reason why you came here."
"Oh,that reason...I was pursued by my girlfriend.Well of course,now she's my ex-girlfriend.No,don't shrug at it.I'm quite serious."
"Alright then.Just wait here.And don't be noisy."

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But I worked in America."

I am truly one of the most brilliant minds you've ever meet, I have to admit."

truly 在这个情况一点不自然,而且你说“youve ever met”,我觉得 “you'll ever meet” 比较好。因为”youve ever met“ 是好像这两个人已经见过了,但这个篇章时,看起来是第一次见的

I was pursued by my girlfriend.

他追女朋友或者女朋友追她哈哈

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"Name."

"Sefardita Levi, my dear.

And you?"

"You don't haveneed to know that. Origin."

"have" works, but I think "need" fits better here.

"Torino, Italy.

But I worked in America."

"Age."

"24 years old, a golden age."

"Job."

"Programmer.

I am truly one of the most brilliant minds you've ever meet, I have to admit."

"Good. Reason."

"For what?

The reason why I became a programmer?

Because being a hacker is..."

"No, the reason why you came here."

"Oh, that reason...

I was being pursued by my girlfriend.

Well of course, now she's my ex-girlfriend.

No, don't shrug at ithat.

I'm quite serious."

"Alright then.

Just wait here.

And don't be noisy."

Briefing in the Lab


"Name."


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

"Sefardita Levi,my dear.


"Sefardita Levi, my dear.

And you?"


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

"You don't have to know that.Origin."


"You don't haveneed to know that. Origin."

"have" works, but I think "need" fits better here.

"Torino,Italy.


"Torino, Italy.

But I worked in America."


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

But I worked in America."

"Age."


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

"24 years old,a golden age."


"24 years old, a golden age."

"Job."


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

"Programmer.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I am truly one of the most brilliant minds you've ever meet,I have to admit."


I am truly one of the most brilliant minds you've ever meet, I have to admit."

I am truly one of the most brilliant minds you've ever meet, I have to admit."

truly 在这个情况一点不自然,而且你说“youve ever met”,我觉得 “you'll ever meet” 比较好。因为”youve ever met“ 是好像这两个人已经见过了,但这个篇章时,看起来是第一次见的

"Good.Reason."


"Good. Reason."

"For what?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The reason why I became a programmer?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Because being a hacker is..."


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

"No,the reason why you came here."


"No, the reason why you came here."

I'm quite serious."


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

"Alright then.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Just wait here.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

And don't be noisy."


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

"Oh,that reason...


"Oh, that reason...

I was pursued by my girlfriend.


I was being pursued by my girlfriend.

I was pursued by my girlfriend.

他追女朋友或者女朋友追她哈哈

Well of course,now she's my ex-girlfriend.


Well of course, now she's my ex-girlfriend.

No,don't shrug at it.


No, don't shrug at ithat.

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