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Try to break up your sentences a bit more (using punctuation marks).

It's been a long time that I have wanted to learn english for a long time but when I'm,trying to learn it I feel very stressed because I don't know where to start , it's lik ife my head is going to explode , the grammar make me loste my self confidence because I am still making a lot of mistakes and I don't have enough vocabulary and at university I never successeeded with my writing because of my bad level. I have wanted to learn english for a long time but when I'm,trying to learn it I feel very stressed because I don't know where to start , it's like my head is going to explode , the grammar make me lose my self confidence because I am still making a lot of mistakes and I don't have enough vocabulary and at university I never succeeeded with my writing because of my bad level.

I have wanted to learn english for a long time sounds more natural (present perfect tense) I have never succeeded--> past tense in this situation

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It's been a long time that I want've wanted to learn eEnglish for a long time but when I'm, trying to learn it I feel very stressed because I don't know where to start , it's lik if my ise I'm going to explode , the grammar makes me loste my self-confidence because I 'm still making a lot of mistakes and I don't have enough vocabulary and at university I never successed with my writing because of my bad level. I've wanted to learn English for a long time but when I'm trying to learn it I feel very stressed because I don't know where to start, it's like I'm going to explode, the grammar makes me lose my self-confidence because I'm still making a lot of mistakes and I don't have enough vocabulary and at university I never succeed with my writing because of my bad level.

I wasn't sure what "it's like if my is going to explode" was supposed to mean - you need a noun to go with "my", for example "it's like my mind is going to explode".

It's been a long time that I want to learn english but when I'm,trying to learn it I feel very stressed because I don't know where to start , it's like if my brain/head? is going to explode , the grammar makde me loste my self confidence because I 'm still making a lot of mistakes and I don't have enough vocabulary and at university I never successed with my writing because of my bad level. It's been a long time that I want to learn english but when I'm,trying to learn it I feel very stressed because I don't know where to start , it's like if my brain/head? is going to explode , the grammar made me lose my self confidence because I'm still making a lot of mistakes and I don't have enough vocabulary and at university I never succeed with my writing because of my bad level.

It's been a long time that I want to learn eEnglish but when I'm, trying to learn it I feel very stress because I don't know where to start , it's lik if mye my head is going to explode , the grammar makes me lost my selfconfidence because I 'm still making a lot of mistakes and I don't have enough vocabulary and at university I never have success with my writing because of my bad level. It's been a long time that I want to learn English but when I'm trying to learn it I feel very stress because I don't know where to start , it's like my head is going to explode, the grammar makes me lost my confidence because I'm still making a lot of mistakes and I don't have enough vocabulary and at university I never have success with my writing because of my bad level.

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But despite all thoese difficulties I will continue to struggle and fight forto make my english sounds and be better , as english is aa language aI truly love and one day I'm sure I'll feel more at ease with it . But despite all these difficulties I will continue to struggle and fight to make my english sound and be better , as english is a language I truly love and one day I'm sure I'll feel more at ease with it .

these not those 'for make'--> we always say 'to make' for make doesn't exist/doesn't make sense my english sound

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But despite all those difficulties I will continue to struggle and fight forto make my english sounds and be better , as english is aa language aI truly love and one day I'm sure I'll feel more at ease with it . But despite all those difficulties I will continue to struggle and fight to make my english sound and be better, as english is a language I truly love and one day I'm sure I'll feel more at ease with it.

But despite all those difficulties I will continue to struggle and fight for make my english to sounds and be better , as english is aa language aI truly love and one day I'm sure I'll feel more at ease with it . But despite all those difficulties I will continue to struggle and fight for make my english to sound and be better , as english is a language I truly love and one day I'm sure I'll feel more at ease with it .

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It's take and it's normal ,normal to struggle because writing in everany languages are is quite difficult; but it's through those difficulties that we succeed. It's normal to struggle because writing in any language is quite difficult; but it's through those difficulties that we succeed.

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be careful with plurals every languages is not correct---> each language these not those---> we are talking about difficulties now, not in the future (if the difficulties are far away then we use 'those')

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It's take and it's normal , writing in every languages are is quite difficult but it's through those difficulties that we succeed It's normal, writing in every language is quite difficult but it's through those difficulties that we succeed

It's take and it's normal? , writing in every languages are quite difficult but it's through those difficulties that we succeed It's take and it's normal? , writing in every languages are quite difficult but it's through those difficulties that we succeed

I'm not sure what you meant at the start

It's take and it's normal , wWriting in every languages are is quite difficult but it's through those difficulties that we succeed. Writing in every language is quite difficult but it's through those difficulties that we succeed.