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Flowers from My last Hike

An hour ago, I wanted to write something in English but didn't know what topic to choose.

I grabbed my phone to look at the pictures in it. Then I chose to share the flowers from my last hike, which happened on Sunday.

You can find the images in this video: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/kqAljgsBRA4

The first type is white plum blossom, which I didn't mention in the video.

The second type is very unique. It's called the messenger of spring in the mountains of East China, because it's always the first one to blossom, and the flowers can blossom for more than a month.

Cherry blossoms and plum blossoms are quite common, so I believe I don't need to introduce them to you. I enjoy them as well.

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I grabbed my phone to look at the pictures in it.

Cherry blossoms and plum blossoms are quite common, so I believe I don't need to introduce them to you.

I enjoy them as well.

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March 13, 2025

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March 13, 2025

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Flowers from My last Hike

An hour ago, I wanted to write something in English but didn't know what topic to choose.

I grabbed my phone to look at the pictures in it.

Then I chose to share the flowers from my last hike, which happened on Sunday.

You can find the images in this video: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/kqAljgsBRA4 The first type is white plum blossom, which I didn't mention in the video.

The second type is very unique.

It's called the messenger of spring in the mountains of East China, because it's always the first one to blossom, and the flowers can blossom for more than a month.

Cherry blossoms and plum blossoms are quite common, so I believe I don't need to introduce them to you.

I enjoy them as well.

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Tammy

March 13, 2025

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Tammy

March 12, 2025

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Flowers from My last Hike

An hour ago, I wanted to write something in English but didn't know what topic to choose.

The second type is very unique.

Cherry blossoms and plum blossoms are quite common, so I believe I don't need to introduce them to you.

I enjoy them as well.

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Tammy

March 12, 2025

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Flowers from My last Hike


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In MLA Style: Flowers from My Last Hike In APA Style: Flowers from my last Hhike In MLA Style: Flowers from My Last Hike In APA Style: Flowers from my last hike

In English, there are many different styles of capitalizing things. I mention two famous ones.

An hour ago, I wanted to write something in English but didn't know what topic to choose.


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An hour ago, I wanted to write something in English but I didn't know what topic to choose. An hour ago, I wanted to write something in English but I didn't know what topic to choose.

Still correct but “I didn’t” sounds more natural

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An hour ago, I wanted to write something in English, but I didn't know what topic to choose. An hour ago, I wanted to write something in English, but I didn't know what topic to choose.

ALSO POSSIBLE: An hour ago, I wanted to write something in English but didn't knowfelt unsure what topic to choose. ALSO POSSIBLE: An hour ago, I wanted to write something in English but felt unsure what topic to choose.

I grabbed my phone to look at the pictures in it.


I grabbed my phone to look at the pictures ion it. I grabbed my phone to look at pictures on it.

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Then I chose to share the flowers from my last hike, which happened on Sunday.


Then I chose to share the flowers fromI saw on my last hike, which happeneI did on Sunday. Then I chose to share the flowers I saw on my last hike, which I did on Sunday.

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Then I chose to share the flowers from my last hike, which happenedI took on Sunday. I chose to share the flowers from my last hike, which I took on Sunday.

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OPTION A: Then I chose to sharewrite about the flowers from my last hike, which happened on Sunday. OPTION B: Then I chose to write about the flowers from my last hike on Sunday. OPTION A: Then I chose to write about the flowers from my last hike, which happened on Sunday. OPTION B: Then I chose to write about the flowers from my last hike on Sunday.

选项B比选项A更简洁。

You can find the images in this video: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/kqAljgsBRA4 The first type is white plum blossom, which I didn't mention in the video.


You can find the images in this video: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/kqAljgsBRA4 . The first type is white plum blossom, which I didn't mention in the video. You can find the images in this video: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/kqAljgsBRA4. The first type is white plum blossom, which I didn't mention in the video.

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You can find the images in this video: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/kqAljgsBRA4 The first type is white plum blossom, which I didn't mention in the video. You can find the images in this video: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/kqAljgsBRA4 The first type is white plum blossom, which I didn't mention in the video.

You can find the images in this video: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/kqAljgsBRA4 The first typimage is of a white plum blossom, which I didwasn't mentioned in the video. You can find the images in this video: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/kqAljgsBRA4 The first image is of a white plum blossom, which wasn't mentioned in the video.

The second type is very unique.


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The second typimage is very unique. The second image is very unique.

I enjoy them as well.


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It's called the messenger of spring in the mountains of East China, because it's always the first one to blossom, and the flowers can blossom for more than a month.


It's called the messenger of spring in the mountains of East China, because it's always the first one to blossom, and t. The flowers can blossom for more than a month. It's called the messenger of spring in the mountains of East China, because it's always the first one to blossom. The flowers can bloom for more than a month.

I have changed this to 2 sentences just for clarity. There is subtle difference between the verbs "blossom" and "bloom". Blossom is the early stage of a flower, when it's just starting to open. A bloom is when it's a full flower. So, flowers start by blossoming and can then stay in bloom for weeks or months.

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It's called the messenger of spring in the mountains of East China, because it's always the first one to blossom, and t. The flowers can blossom for more than a month. It's called the messenger of spring in the mountains of East China because it's always the first one to blossom. The flowers can blossom for more than a month.

More natural pacing

It's called the "messenger of spring" in the mountains of East China, because it's always the first one to blossom, and theits flowers can blossom for more than a month. It's called the "messenger of spring" n the mountains of East China, because it's always the first one to blossom, and its flowers can blossom for more than a month.

QUESTION: Is it the same in this image? See https://www.gojilin.gov.cn/2025/03/11/c_13947.htm

Cherry blossoms and plum blossoms are quite common, so I believe I don't need to introduce them to you.


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