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andrea

Oct. 7, 2021

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WRITERS.

I specially admire the people with the capacity of writing beautifully, because :

• They possess talent for writing about fantasy or real world in an amaze form. They have the capacity of transporting you to places, feeling, scenes, ages without problem.
• Writers can give order to their own ideas or feelings, allowing to other people give order to their ones through their writing.
• Some writers utilize their abilities for manipulating situations, people, even countries with their knowledge of using the appropriate word in the opportune moment. I disagree about this behave, but it is happening.
• This people habitually enjoy others fascinating qualities, as, imagination, observation, curiosity, introspection, analysis, criticism.
• They display the talent of expressing and perceiving the life in a creative form.

I am so grateful because talent people like them, because they color life.

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Oct. 8, 2021

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"I disagree about thiswith the use of such behaveiour, but it is happening." Do you still admire this quality in these people? Look back at your phrase that begins "I specially admire the people with the capacity of writing beautifully, because :"

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Oct. 8, 2021

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WRITERS.


WRITERS. WRITERS.

Simply just write the title as: "Writers" No need for all capitals; no need for a full-stop

I specially admire the people with the capacity of writing beautifully, because :


I specially admire the people with the capacity of writing beautifully, because : I specially admire the people with the capacity of writing beautifully, because :

I especially admire people with the capacity to write beautifully because: No need for a comma before "because". Your use of the colon (:) is correct because you are introducing a list.

• They possess talent for writing about fantasy or real world in an amaze form.


• They possess talent for writing about fantasy or real world in an amaze form. • They possess talent for writing about fantasy or real world in an amaze form.

I don't think a capital letter at "They" is required here. Your use of the word "because" before the colon indicates that you are continuing the sentence which has already begun with "I especially admire ..." Whether or not to use a capital letter after a colon has some differences of opinion, but i think that where the word "because" connects two pieces of information, usually there should be no capital letter on the word that follows "because". See https://www.grammarly.com/blog/capitalization-after-colons/ See below for other comments relating to this phrase/ sentence.

They have the capacity of transporting you to places, feeling, scenes, ages without problem.


They have the capacity of transporting you to places, feeling, scenes, ages without problem. They have the capacity of transporting you to places, feeling, scenes, ages without problem.

They have the capacity to transport you to places, scenes and to an age without problems. I think you will have to use "feeling" in another sentence to get over your idea here.

• Writers can give order to their own ideas or feelings, allowing to other people give order to their ones through their writing.


• Writers can give order to their own ideas or feelings, allowing to other people to give order to their ones through their writing. • Writers can give order to their own ideas or feelings, allowing other people to give order to their ones through their writing.

I was a bit confused as to whom "their" referred at the end of the sentence. I think this text needs rewriting to enhance understanding.

• Some writers utilize their abilities for manipulating situations, people, even countries with their knowledge of using the appropriate word in the opportune moment.


• Some writers utilize their abilities for manipulating situations, people, and even countries with their knowledge of usemploying the appropriate word inat the opportune moment. • Some writers utilize their abilities for manipulating situations, people and even countries with their knowledge of employing the appropriate word at the opportune moment.

Consider writing the simple word "use" instead of "utilize".

I disagree about this behave, but it is happening.


"I disagree about thiswith the use of such behaveiour, but it is happening." Do you still admire this quality in these people? Look back at your phrase that begins "I specially admire the people with the capacity of writing beautifully, because :" "I disagree with the use of such behaviour, but it is happening." Do you still admire this quality in these people? Look back at your phrase that begins "I specially admire the people with the capacity of writing beautifully, because :"

• This people habitually enjoy others fascinating qualities, as, imagination, observation, curiosity, introspection, analysis, criticism.


• This people habitually enjoy others fascinating qualities, as, imagination, observation, curiosity, introspection, analysis, criticism. • This people habitually enjoy others fascinating qualities, as, imagination, observation, curiosity, introspection, analysis, criticism.

These people habitually enjoy others' fascinating qualities, such as imagination, observation, curiosity, introspection, analysis and criticism.

• They display the talent of expressing and perceiving the life in a creative form.


• They display the talent of expressing and perceiving the life in a creative form. • They display the talent of expressing and perceiving life in a creative form.

I am so grateful because talent people like them, because they color life.


I am so grateful because talent people like them, because they color life. I am so grateful because talent people like them, because they color life.

I am so grateful to talented people like these because they add color to life. Note the alternative spelling of "color" = "colour".

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