Daiary 1/4 Diary 1/4

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Daiary 1/4 Diary 1/4

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Last Yesterday, my roommate was so mad, and it turned toaffected me. Yesterday, my roommate was so mad, and it affected me.

I'm not really sure what you mean, but I guess it's something like: because they were very mad, I got mad as well (or I stopped having a good time).

Last Yesterday, my roommate was so mad, and it turned to menow it’s my turn. Yesterday, my roommate was so mad, and now it’s my turn.

Last Yesterday, my roommate was so mad,angry and it turned toit on me. Yesterday, my roommate was so angry and turned it on me.

I think this is what you mean but I'm not sure.

Now I'm SO mad today! Now I'm SO mad today!

I thought I could take acatch my breath after the exams. I thought I could catch my breath after the exams.

https://writingexplained.org/idiom-dictionary/catch-your-breath

I thought I could take acatch my breath after the exams., but… I thought I could catch my breath after the exams, but…

I thought I could takecatch a breath after the exams but, it wasn't like what I thought it would be. I thought I could catch a breath after exams but, it wasn't like what I thought it would be.

B…but, it [wasn't like what I thought | didn’t turn out as I’d expected]. …but it [wasn't like I thought | didn’t turn out as I’d expected].

But, it wasn't like what I thought.

This is an incomplete sentence so I deleted it and added it to the previous line.

I had a meeting to discussing the presentation. I had a meeting to discuss the presentation.

I had a meeting to discussing the a presentation. I had a meeting to discuss a presentation.

Because we had already separated the work into six parts, everyone had had their own job. Because we had already separated the work into six parts, everyone had their own job.

Because we had already separated the work into six parts, everyone had had their own job to do. Because we had already separated the work into six parts, everyone had their own job to do.

As a result, I expected it diwouldn't tookake much time. As a result, I expected it wouldn't take much time.

As a result, I expected it diwouldn't tookake much time. As a result, I expected it wouldn't take much time.

As a result, I expected it didn't took much timethat it wouldn't take a lot of time to finish. As a result, I expected that it wouldn't take a lot of time to finish.

However, the fact was cruelit went really bad. However, it went really bad.

there are more possible versions, I went with something like: I expected it would go well, it actually went bad.)

However, (the fact) reality was cruel. However, (the) reality was cruel.

However, the factReality was cruel, however. Reality was cruel, however.

We avoid using "however" at the beginning of sentences when writing.

Some teammates said that they had temporary jobs, so they were absent. Some teammates said that they had temporary jobs, so they were absent.

Some teammates said that they had temporary jobs, so they were absent. Some teammates said that they had temporary jobs, so they were absent.

Some teammates said that they had temporary jobs, so they were absent. Some teammates said that they had temporary jobs, so they were absent.

I totally understand, it is always busy at the end of a semester, b. But someone just had disappeared for about four hours. I totally understand, it is always busy at the end of a semester. But someone just disappeared for about four hours.

I separated into two sentences because I understood it like this: ”Some people have jobs, and I understand they are busy. Someone else disappeared for four hours.” (if it's actually the same person, you could go with: ”I totally understand..., but they just disappeared for four hours”)

I totally understand, because it is always busy at the end of a semester, but someone just had disappeared for about four hours. I totally understand because it is always busy at the end of a semester, but someone disappeared for about four hours.

Yikes! That's rude!

She didn't notice ingive us any advanced notice. She didn't give us any advance notice.

to notice = to observe (”I didn't notice you were here”) to give notice = to let others know

She didn't noticefy us in advanced. She didn't notify us in advanced.

She didn't noticeeven tell us in advanced. She didn't even tell us in advance.

or She didn't notify us about it in advance.

Me and the other member organized and revised the entire presentation byon our own. Me and the other member organized and revised the entire presentation on our own.

Me and tThe other member and I organized and revised the entire presentation byon our own. The other member and I organized and revised the entire presentation on our own.

Me and tThe other member and I organized and revised the entire presentation byon our own. The other member and I organized and revised the entire presentation on our own.

We always state other people first before mentioning ourselves in written English.

I spent more two hours than I expected, because some parts were like the finished products of ctrl C and ctrl V. When everything was done, the one who disappeared came out, and said ”sorry, I was busy at that time”. I spent more two hours than I expected, because some parts were like the finished product of ctrl C and ctrl V. When everything was done, the one who disappeared came out, and said ”sorry, I was busy at that time”.

I spent two more two hours than I expected, because some parts [were like the finished products of ctrl C and ctrl V | had been copy/pasted]. When everything was done, the one who disappeared came out, and said s, “Sorry, I was busy at that time.” I spent two more hours than I expected, because some parts [were like the finished products of ctrl C and ctrl V | had been copy/pasted]. When everything was done, the one who disappeared came out and said, “Sorry, I was busy at that time.”

I spent more than two hours than I had expected, because some parts were like the finished products of ctrl C and ctrl Vjust copy and pasted. When everything was done, the one who disappeared came out,back and said s, "Sorry, I was busy at that time." I spent more than two hours than I had expected, because some parts were just copy and pasted. When everything was done, the one who disappeared came back and said, "Sorry, I was busy at that time."

Wow.