March 17, 2021
Naomi
I finished reading "Naomi", written by Junichiro Tanizaki. The title, Naomi, is the name of a girl. She was poor and silent working as a waitress but gradually becomes arrogant and naughty because the main character, who is also the storyteller, pamper and worships her. I enjoyed this novel imagining what Japan was like about 100 years ago. The era was just after quitting national isolation, so many foreign cultures were mixed with around Tokyo.
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Naomi
I finished reading "Naomi", written by Junichiro Tanizaki.
The title, Naomi, is the name of a girl.
She was poor and silentquiet girl, working as a waitress but gradually becomes arrogant and naughty because the main character, who is also the storyteller, pampers and worships her.
She was poor and quiet girl, working as a waitress but gradually becomes arrogant and naughty because the main character, who is also the storyteller, pampers and worships her.
'silent' is not usually used to describe personalities.
I enjoyed this novel, which imagininges what Japan was like about 100 years ago.
I enjoyed this novel, which imagines what Japan was like about 100 years ago.
The era was just after quittingJapan stopped the national isolation, so many foreign policies, so Tokyo's cultures were mixed with around Tokyoas influenced by many foreign cultures.
The era was just after Japan stopped the national isolation policies, so Tokyo's culture was influenced by many foreign cultures.
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Good job! Sounds like you enjoyed this book.
March 18, 2021
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I finished reading "Naomi", written by Junichiro Tanizaki. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The title, Naomi, is the name of a girl. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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She was poor and silent working as a waitress but gradually becomes arrogant and naughty because the main character, who is also the storyteller, pamper and worships her.
She was poor and 'silent' is not usually used to describe personalities. |
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I enjoyed this novel imagining what Japan was like about 100 years ago.
I enjoyed this novel, which imagin |
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The era was just after quitting national isolation, so many foreign cultures were mixed with around Tokyo.
The era was just after |
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