April 2, 2026
I have a new-bloom orchid to show you!
Actually, it has been in my apartment for a couple of months. But it just started blooming last week. And I didn't have time to capture it until last night.
You can see it here: https://youtube.com/shorts/hQI9NjiT4Ew?si=BaiKvJbXFGBwRs70
As always, if you find any English mistakes, please let me know.
Thanks in advance!
A New Orchid
I have a new-ly blooming orchid to show you!
I have a newly blooming orchid to show you!
Actually, it has been in my apartment for a couple of months.
ButHowever, it just started blooming last week.
However, it just started blooming last week.
And I didn't have time to capture it until last night.
I didn't have time to capture it until last night.
You can see it here: https://youtube.com/shorts/hQI9NjiT4Ew?si=BaiKvJbXFGBwRs70
As always, if you find any English mistakes, please let me know.
As always, if you find any mistakes, please let me know.
I will definitely do that.
Thanks in advance!
A New Orchid
I have a new-ly blooming orchid to show you!
I have a newly blooming orchid to show you!
"Blooming" as it's actively in the state of blooming.
"Newly" as an adverb to describe to the state as being new.
Actually, it has been in my apartment for a couple of months.,
Actually, it has been in my apartment for a couple of months,
Bbut it just started blooming last week.
but it just started blooming last week.
This can be combined with the previous sentence.
AndHowever, I didn't have time to capture it until last night.
However, I didn't have time to capture it until last night.
You can see it here: https://youtube.com/shorts/hQI9NjiT4Ew?si=BaiKvJbXFGBwRs70
As always, if you find any English mistakes, please let me know.
Thanks in advance!
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Good job! Just a few small adjustments!
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I'm just going to give feedback on the video. The blossoms on the orchid are exquisite! I love the metaphor about joining the party.
I hear the extra ending syllable "ah" when you say "the first-ah two bloomed."
However this narration has the word "just" at least twice, and you pronounce it accurately. So it isn't the combination of "-st" at the end of a word that is prompting you to add a vowel syllable on the end.
I think you inserted the vowel to separate the two "t" sounds (firsT Two). The way I handle that is to pronounce just one "t" sound (firstwo).
I don't pronounce the first "t." Instead, I say, "firs" (firs + two = firstwo).
There are three words that could be pronounced more precisely: "really" in American English has a long e sound ("reely"). Sometimes it will also sound like ("rilly") with a short i sound, although that might be one of many regional differences. In the video, what I heard was "relly." Maybe that is a more British pronunciation which you don't mind. In that case, just ignore this feedback.
The next word is "unique." This word has a strong stress on the second syllable ("u / NIQUE").
The last word is "tiniest." This word has three syllables: ti / ni / est. The middle vowel has a long e sound. This word adds "est" to "tiny" without changing anything about how you say "tiny" (tiny + est" = three syllables).
Actually, it has been in my apartment for a couple of months.,
Actually, it has been in my apartment for a couple of months,
Bbut it just started blooming last week.
but it just started blooming last week.
"But" is a conjunction that links two complete sentences together. Technically it should not be used as the first word of a sentence. In casual writing it's fine, but in formal writing you should avoid it.
And I didn't have time to capture it until last night.
I didn't have time to capture it until last night.
"And" is also a conjunction, so it shouldn't be the first word in a sentence.
As always, if you find any English mistakes in my writing, please let me know.
As always, if you find any mistakes in my writing, please let me know.
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What a beautiful orchid! I'm really bad at taking care of plants, so it's impressive to me that yours looks so lovely.
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I have a new-bloom orchid to show you!
I have a new "Blooming" as it's actively in the state of blooming. "Newly" as an adverb to describe to the state as being new.
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Actually, it has been in my apartment for a couple of months.
Actually, it has been in my apartment for a couple of months
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But it just started blooming last week.
"But" is a conjunction that links two complete sentences together. Technically it should not be used as the first word of a sentence. In casual writing it's fine, but in formal writing you should avoid it.
This can be combined with the previous sentence.
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And I didn't have time to capture it until last night.
"And" is also a conjunction, so it shouldn't be the first word in a sentence.
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