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sho

April 24, 2022

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Using the words

If there is anything wrong or unnatural, can you please correct my sentences?
I'd like to know common and natural phrases using the word I indicated!🙇‍♂️

As a side note, A and B stand for people❗️

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I need to use this word.→ →itinerary
B: Have you made an itinerary?
A: No, I didn't.
First of all, I've never made one.
Do you always make itineraries?
2
I need to use this word.→ itinerary
B: Do you have an itinerary in your head?
A: Sort of.
3
I need to use this word.→warranty
B: Did I keep the warranty card for this thing?
A: What happened?
B: I dropped it in the water and I want to check the warranty period.
A: Oh, I see, it's probably in the box.
But I need to find the box.
4
I need to use this word.→warranty
A: Does this warranty defects during delivery?
B: Of course!
5
I need to use this word.→ merchandise
A: This store has a lot of merchandise!
6
I need to use this word.→ merchant
A: You have as much as an arms merchant!
7
I need to use this word.→ questionnaire
A: Did you fill out the questionnaire in the back? 
B: What, was there such a thing?
A: Yes, there was!
B: Wow, I missed it!
8
I need to use this word.→ venue
B: What is this place?
A: This is the Tokyo Olympics venue
9
I need to use this word.→ brochure
A: What are you reading?
B: Travel brochure
10
I need to use this word.→ inventry
A: There is a huge inventry of this item in stock.
Is it because they are not popular?
B: I guess you just stocked up.
11
I need to use this word.→inventry
B: I did inventory today.
A: Oh, You must be tired, right?
B: little bit.
A: What's selling the best in your store?
12
I need to use this word.→refund
A: The item I ordered broke within 3 days of delivery, so I would like a refund, please.
13
I need to use this word.→refund
B: Is this refundable?
A: It says it's a refundable item.
B: Really? Oh, thank goodness!
A: What's wrong?
B: It wasn't my size. This isn't my ideal shape.
A: What kind of shape do you want?
B: I need clothes that are wider in width.
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I need to use this word.→warehousd
B: What did you do part-time in high school?
A: Sorting and unloading and so on at a warehouse.
15
I need to use this word.→warehouse
B: Do you have this item?
A: Ah, It might be in the warehouse. I'll check with the head office.
16
I need to use this word.→merger
B: What does M&A stand for?
A: Mayby, "Mergers and acquisitions".
B: Oh, that's right!
17
I need to use this word.→merge into
A: Pixar was merged into Disney in 2006, right?
B: Yeah, but did anything change?
A: I don't know about that
18
I need to use this word.→merge with
A: Huh? Where's Michael?
B: I don't know, he merge with a crowd.

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B: Did I keep the warranty card for this thing?

A: What happened?

B: I dropped it in the water and I want to check the warranty period.

A: Oh, I see, it's probably in the box.

But I need to find the box.

A: Does this warranty defects during delivery?

It doesn't make sense to me here what the defects are?
for example does this warranty have an effect on the delivery?

B: Of course!

A: This store has a lot of merchandise!

A: Did you fill out the questionnaire in the back?

B: What, was there such a thingwas a questionnaire?

Just suits a bit better, both work

A: Yes, there was!

B: Wow, I missed it!

B: What is this place?

A: This is the venue for the Tokyo Olympics venue.

This is more grammatically correct

B: TA travel brochure

B: I did inventory today.

The sentence on its own doesn't make sense, you would need to add for eg.
i sorted out some inventory today
i was working on our inventory today
But in a setting when the other person knows what the job inventory requires, it is acceptable. Like, i was working at the desk today. So, we assume he was at the office doing paper work and stuff

B: little bit.

In casual talk this is commonly used, in written text we say 'a little bit'

A: What's selling the best in your store?

A: The item I ordered broke within 3 days of delivery, so I would like a refund, please.

B: Is this refundable?

A: It says it's a refundable item.

B: Really?

Oh, thank goodness!

A: What's wrong?

B: It wasn't my size.

This isn't my ideal shape.

A: What kind of shape do you want?

B: I need clothes that are wider in width.

Wider means wider in width, so its not needed to clarify

I need to use this word.→warehousde

B: What did you do part-time in high school?

A: SI did sorting and unloading and so ontuff like that at a warehouse.

B: Do you have this item?

A: Ah, It might be in the warehouse.

A: Pixar was merged into Disney in 2006, right?

B: Yeah, but did anything change?

A: I don't know about that

i think suits better, or i'm not sure

B: I don't know, he merged with a/the crowd.

you can't say 'he merge'

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There were some words that I didn't know well enough, so I left them out

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sho

April 26, 2022

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Thank you so much!!😆

Using the words

If there is anything wrong or unnatural, can you please correct my sentences?

I'd like to know common and natural phrases using the word I indicated!🙇‍♂️

As a side note, A and B stand for people❗️

1

I need to use this word.→ →itinerary

B: Have you made an itinerary?

A: No, I didhaven't.

Becuase B said have, A should use have instead of did

First of all, I've never made one.

Do you alwaysnormally make itineraries?

2

I need to use this word.→ itinerary

B: Do you have an itinerary in your head?

A: Sort of.

3

I need to use this word.→warranty

B: Did I keep the warranty card for this thing?

A: What happened?

B: I dropped it in the water and I want to check the warranty period.

A: Oh, I see, it's probably in the box.

But I would need to find the box.

4

I need to use this word.→warranty

A: Does this warranty cover defects during delivery?

B: Of course!

5

I need to use this word.→ merchandise

A: This store has a lot of merchandise!

6

I need to use this word.→ merchant

A: You have as much aany arms ans arms merchant!

What were you trying to say in this sentence?

7

I need to use this word.→ questionnaire

A: Did you fill out the questionnaire ion the back?

B: What, was there such a thingone?

A: Yes, there was!

B: Wow, I missed it!

8

I need to use this word.→ venue

B: What is thisat place?

What is the context of this sentence?
If they are at the venue

Where are we?

If they are looking at a picture of the venue

Where is that?

If they say it across the street

What is that place?

A: ThisIt is the Tokyo Olympics venue

9

I need to use this word.→ brochure

A: What are you reading?

B: TA travel brochure

10

I need to use this word.→ inventory

A: There is a huge inventory of this item in stock.

Is it because they are not popular?

B: I guess youwe just stocked up.

Based on where I think this sentence might take place, we is a better option.

11

I need to use this word.→inventory

B: I did inventory today.

A: Oh, You must be tired, right?

B: A little bit.

A: What's selling the best in your store?

12

I need to use this word.→refund

A: The item I ordered broke within 3 days of delivery, so I would like a refund, please.

13

I need to use this word.→refund

B: Is this refundable?

A: It says it's a refundable item.

B: Really?

Oh, thank goodness!

A: What's wrong?

B: It wasn't my size.

This isn'It is also not my ideal shapecut.

A: What kind of shapecut do you want?

B: I need clothes that are wider in width.

14

I need to use this word.→warehousde

B: What did you dowork part-time in high school?

A: SI worked sorting and unloading and so on at a warehouse.

15

I need to use this word.→warehouse

B: Do you have this item?

A: Ah, It might be in the warehouse.

I'll check with the head office.

16

I need to use this word.→merger

B: What does M&A stand for?

A: Maybye, "Mergers and acquisitions".

B: Oh, that's right!

17

I need to use this word.→merge into

A: Pixar was merged into Disney in 2006, right?

B: Yeah, but did anything change?

A: I don't know about that

18

I need to use this word.→merge with

A: Huh?

Where's Michael?

B: I don't know, he merge in with athe crowd.

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Great work. Really well written sentences that I could imagine many people fluent in English saying.

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sho

April 26, 2022

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A: You have as much aany arms ans arms merchant!

I trying to paraphrase "You have as many weapons as an arms dealer."

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harinezumi

April 26, 2022

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I trying to paraphrase "You have as many weapons as an arms dealer."

Ah I see. You would have to say the whole phrase for it to make sense.

sho's avatar
sho

April 26, 2022

0

Thank you so much!!!😆

Using the words

If there is anything wrong or unnatural, can you please correct my sentences?

If anything here looks incorrect or unnatural, please could you correct it

I'd like to know the common and natural phrases using the word I indicated!usual usage of the sentences I have written 🙇‍♂️

As a side noteBy the way, A and B stand formean people❗️

1

I need to use this word.→ →itinerary

B: Have you ever made an itinerary?

The word ever makes the question mean "have you made on at some time in the past, or during your life". Without the word "ever", the sentence is asking have you made an itinery at a particular time. Eg Have you made an itinerary this morning?

A: No, I didhaven't.

First of all, I've never made one.

Do you always make itineraries?

2

I need to use this word.→ itinerary

B: Do you have an itinerary in your head?

A: Sort of.

I need to use this word.→warranty

B: Did I keep the warranty card for this thing?

A: What happened?

B: I dropped it in the water and I want to check the warranty period.

A: Oh, I see, it's probably in the box.

But I need to find the box.

A: Does this warranty cover defects during delivery?

B: Of course!

5

I need to use this word.→ merchandise

A: This store has a lot of merchandise!

6

I need to use this word.→ merchant

A: You have as much as an arms merchant!

7

I need to use this word.→ questionnaire

B: What, was there such a thingone there?

B: Wow, I missed it!

8

I need to use this word.→ venue

B: What is this place?

A: This is the Tokyo Olympics venue

9

I need to use this word.→ brochure

A: What are you reading?

B: TA travel brochure

10

I need to use this word.→ inventory

A: There is a huge inventory of thisese items which are in stock.

Use "which are", otherwise the sentence reads that there are many inventories in stock ;-0

Is it because they are not popular?

B: I guess you just stocked up.

11

I need to use this word.→inventory

B: I didmade an inventory today.

A: Oh, You must be tired, right?

B: A little bit.

A: What's selling the best in your store?

12

I need to use this word.→refund

A: The item I ordered broke within 3 days of delivery, so I would like a refund, please.

13

I need to use this word.→refund

B: Is this refundable?

A: It says it's a refundable item.

B: Really?

Oh, thank goodness!

A: What's wrong?

B: It wasn't my size.

This isn't my ideal shape.

"It doesn't fit me" would be better

A: What kind of shape do you want?

B: I need clothes that are wider in width.

Width is redundant because you have already said you want wider clothes

14

I need to use this word.→warehoused

B: What did you do part-time in high school?

A: Sorting and unloading and so on at a warehouse.

15

I need to use this word.→warehouse

B: Do you have this item?

A: Ah, It might be in the warehouse.

I'll check with the head office.

We don't need "the" because usually Head Office is the name of the department

16

I need to use this word.→merger

B: What does M&A stand for?

A: Mayby, "Mergers and acquisitions".

B: Oh, that's right!

17

I need to use this word.→merge into

A: Pixar was merged into Disney in 2006, right?

B: Yeah, but did anything change?

A: I don't know about that

"About that" is redundant, because you have already stated the subject

18

I need to use this word.→merge with

A: Huh?

Where's Michael?

B: I don't know, he is merge withd into a crowd.

I haved corrected this phrase, but we wouldn't normally say this. We would say "I don't know, he's in the crowd"

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Very well done!

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sho

April 26, 2022

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Thank you so much!!🙇‍♂️

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If there is anything wrong or unnatural, can you please correct my sentences?


If there is anything wrong or unnatural, can you please correct my sentences?

If anything here looks incorrect or unnatural, please could you correct it

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I'd like to know common and natural phrases using the word I indicated!🙇‍♂️


I'd like to know the common and natural phrases using the word I indicated!usual usage of the sentences I have written 🙇‍♂️

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As a side note, A and B stand for people❗️


As a side noteBy the way, A and B stand formean people❗️

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I need to use this word.→ →itinerary


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B: Have you made an itinerary?


B: Have you ever made an itinerary?

The word ever makes the question mean "have you made on at some time in the past, or during your life". Without the word "ever", the sentence is asking have you made an itinery at a particular time. Eg Have you made an itinerary this morning?

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A: No, I didn't.


A: No, I didhaven't.

A: No, I didhaven't.

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First of all, I've never made one.


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Do you always make itineraries?


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B: I dropped it in the water and I want to check the warranty period.


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A: Oh, I see, it's probably in the box.


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A: Does this warranty defects during delivery?


A: Does this warranty cover defects during delivery?

A: Does this warranty cover defects during delivery?

A: Does this warranty defects during delivery?

It doesn't make sense to me here what the defects are? for example does this warranty have an effect on the delivery?

B: Of course!


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A: This store has a lot of merchandise!


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A: You have as much as an arms merchant!


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A: You have as much aany arms ans arms merchant!

What were you trying to say in this sentence?

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A: Did you fill out the questionnaire in the back?


A: Did you fill out the questionnaire ion the back?

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B: What, was there such a thing?


B: What, was there such a thingone there?

B: What, was there such a thingone?

B: What, was there such a thingwas a questionnaire?

Just suits a bit better, both work

A: Yes, there was!


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B: Wow, I missed it!


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I need to use this word.→ venue


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B: What is this place?


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B: What is thisat place?

What is the context of this sentence? If they are at the venue Where are we? If they are looking at a picture of the venue Where is that? If they say it across the street What is that place?

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A: This is the Tokyo Olympics venue


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A: ThisIt is the Tokyo Olympics venue

A: This is the venue for the Tokyo Olympics venue.

This is more grammatically correct

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I need to use this word.→ brochure


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A: What are you reading?


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B: Travel brochure


B: TA travel brochure

B: TA travel brochure

B: TA travel brochure

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I need to use this word.→ inventry


I need to use this word.→ inventory

I need to use this word.→ inventory

A: There is a huge inventry of this item in stock.


A: There is a huge inventory of thisese items which are in stock.

Use "which are", otherwise the sentence reads that there are many inventories in stock ;-0

A: There is a huge inventory of this item in stock.

Is it because they are not popular?


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B: I guess you just stocked up.


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B: I guess youwe just stocked up.

Based on where I think this sentence might take place, we is a better option.

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I need to use this word.→inventry


I need to use this word.→inventory

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B: I did inventory today.


B: I didmade an inventory today.

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B: I did inventory today.

The sentence on its own doesn't make sense, you would need to add for eg. i sorted out some inventory today i was working on our inventory today But in a setting when the other person knows what the job inventory requires, it is acceptable. Like, i was working at the desk today. So, we assume he was at the office doing paper work and stuff

A: Oh, You must be tired, right?


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B: little bit.


B: A little bit.

B: A little bit.

B: little bit.

In casual talk this is commonly used, in written text we say 'a little bit'

A: What's selling the best in your store?


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A: The item I ordered broke within 3 days of delivery, so I would like a refund, please.


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Oh, thank goodness!


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A: What's wrong?


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B: It wasn't my size.


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This isn't my ideal shape.


This isn't my ideal shape.

"It doesn't fit me" would be better

This isn'It is also not my ideal shapecut.

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A: What kind of shape do you want?


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A: What kind of shapecut do you want?

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B: I need clothes that are wider in width.


B: I need clothes that are wider in width.

Width is redundant because you have already said you want wider clothes

B: I need clothes that are wider in width.

B: I need clothes that are wider in width.

Wider means wider in width, so its not needed to clarify

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I need to use this word.→warehousd


I need to use this word.→warehoused

I need to use this word.→warehousde

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B: What did you do part-time in high school?


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B: What did you dowork part-time in high school?

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A: Sorting and unloading and so on at a warehouse.


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A: SI worked sorting and unloading and so on at a warehouse.

A: SI did sorting and unloading and so ontuff like that at a warehouse.

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B: Do you have this item?


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A: Ah, It might be in the warehouse.


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I'll check with the head office.


I'll check with the head office.

We don't need "the" because usually Head Office is the name of the department

I'll check with the head office.

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B: What does M&A stand for?


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A: Mayby, "Mergers and acquisitions".


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A: Maybye, "Mergers and acquisitions".

B: Oh, that's right!


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I need to use this word.→merge into


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A: Pixar was merged into Disney in 2006, right?


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B: Yeah, but did anything change?


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A: I don't know about that


A: I don't know about that

"About that" is redundant, because you have already stated the subject

A: I don't know about that

A: I don't know about that

i think suits better, or i'm not sure

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A: Huh?


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Where's Michael?


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B: I don't know, he merge with a crowd.


B: I don't know, he is merge withd into a crowd.

I haved corrected this phrase, but we wouldn't normally say this. We would say "I don't know, he's in the crowd"

B: I don't know, he merge in with athe crowd.

B: I don't know, he merged with a/the crowd.

you can't say 'he merge'

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