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alexwong2164

Dec. 29, 2021

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Use smartphone more

Use smartphone more

I do believe 99% of population is using smartphone.

But maybe less then 1% can fully use all the functions from a smart phone.

I am an old person.

Learning new knowledge is always difficult.

But today I use my smartphone upload a video in YouTube.

I also write a short diary and post it from my smartphone.

I say not difficult at all.

Furthermore, there are many features can add to the videos and text to make it more appearing.

Now, I do think a smartphone is more powerful than a computer.

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Useing smartphones more

Useing smartphones more

I do believe 99% of the population isare using smartphones.

But maybe less thean 1% can fully use all the functions fromon a smart phone.

I am an old person.

Learning new knowledgesomething new is always difficult.

But today/nowadays I use my smartphone upload a video is on YouTube.

If this is a general comment, "nowadays" is more appropriate. Saying "today" suggest to me that it's specifically the current day that you upload one video on YouTube.

I also write a short diaryies and post ithem from my smartphone.

I say that it's not difficult at all.

Furthermore, there are many features that you can add to the videos and text to make it more appearling.

It's not quite clear what you mean by "appearing", I presume you meant "appealing"?

Now, I do think a smartphone iss are more powerful than a computers.

You typically use "I do + verb" for emphasis that is linked to some related sentence or question. E.g. "I don't like most sports, however I do like football"; using "I do" there emphasises particularly how I like football in contrast to other sports which I don't like. You wouldn't typically use "I do + verb" as a standalone sentence like you've done a couple of times in this post.

Use smartphone more


Useing smartphones more

Use smartphone more


Useing smartphones more

I do believe 99% of population is using smartphone.


I do believe 99% of the population isare using smartphones.

But maybe less then 1% can fully use all the functions from a smart phone.


But maybe less thean 1% can fully use all the functions fromon a smart phone.

I am an old person.


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Learning new knowledge is always difficult.


Learning new knowledgesomething new is always difficult.

But today I use my smartphone upload a video in YouTube.


But today/nowadays I use my smartphone upload a video is on YouTube.

If this is a general comment, "nowadays" is more appropriate. Saying "today" suggest to me that it's specifically the current day that you upload one video on YouTube.

I also write a short diary and post it from my smartphone.


I also write a short diaryies and post ithem from my smartphone.

I say not difficult at all.


I say that it's not difficult at all.

Furthermore, there are many features can add to the videos and text to make it more appearing.


Furthermore, there are many features that you can add to the videos and text to make it more appearling.

It's not quite clear what you mean by "appearing", I presume you meant "appealing"?

Now, I do think a smartphone is more powerful than a computer.


Now, I do think a smartphone iss are more powerful than a computers.

You typically use "I do + verb" for emphasis that is linked to some related sentence or question. E.g. "I don't like most sports, however I do like football"; using "I do" there emphasises particularly how I like football in contrast to other sports which I don't like. You wouldn't typically use "I do + verb" as a standalone sentence like you've done a couple of times in this post.

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