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March 24, 2022

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I started working as a member of search and rescue team in USAR team of XYZ in 2010. In the following years, I fulfilled the duties of crew leader. I had worked for 11 years in this USAR team before I was promoted to Branch Manager at XYZ in 2021.

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I started working as a member of the search and rescue team in USAR team of XYZ at USAR in 2010.

In the following years, I fulfilled the duties of crew leader.

Or "I worked as a crew leader" sounds better in my opinion.

I had worked for 11 years in this USAR team before I was promoted to Branch Manager at XYZ in 2021.

USAR

I started working as a member of the XYZ USAR search and rescue team in USAR team of XYZ in 2010.

In the following years, I fulfilled the duties of crew leader.

I had worked for 11 years in thisat USAR team before I was promoted to Branch Manager at XYZ in 2021.

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I started working as a member of search and rescue team in USAR team of XYZ in 2010.


I started working as a member of the XYZ USAR search and rescue team in USAR team of XYZ in 2010.

I started working as a member of the search and rescue team in USAR team of XYZ at USAR in 2010.

In the following years, I fulfilled the duties of crew leader.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

In the following years, I fulfilled the duties of crew leader.

Or "I worked as a crew leader" sounds better in my opinion.

I had worked for 11 years in this USAR team before I was promoted to Branch Manager at XYZ in 2021.


I had worked for 11 years in thisat USAR team before I was promoted to Branch Manager at XYZ in 2021.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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